[Photoshop] Sona Tag-Gift for Anna

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Well you CnC'd me so i'll CnC you xP.

It has good flow and i like the text there, but there's some focal parts that are meh and the depth is confusing kinda. I mean you see objects that are infront of the render that are more blurried than the render, which is the focal point. Maybe the objects are supposed to be moving or something but they don't use motion blur or indicate that they move so ionno. Kinda takes away some charm. Then there's the bg on the right down side which i just don't really feel fits but instead you could've used more of a metallic combination like the fans or stuff that's floating on the top. Also i'd use some more ligthing work and i'd probably make the blue-pink ish things on the floating things to light up to get some cool effects. The light on her hair is kinda random and doesn't feel like they should be there as there's nothing to indicate that light actually would just be generated from her hair like that. Instead i'd go with other lightning sources like perhaps behind her, above or even like i said before to make the purple-blue-ish things shine more to create light sources out of them. "Neon-lamps" or something like that. There is also a very sharp white dot far, far away from the main focal which i think steals too much attraction to the left bottom corner. This tag has nice colors and kinda nice flow and really nice text but i think it fails on the depth and lightning dept. Needs maybe more thoughts over all details and the fractals aren't positioned great.
 
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Horus, trolling... Hmmm...........

Nice work :)
:p thanks gramps!

Well you CnC'd me so i'll CnC you xP.

It has good flow and i like the text there, but there's some focal parts that are meh and the depth is confusing kinda. I mean you see objects that are infront of the render that are more blurried than the render, which is the focal point. Maybe the objects are supposed to be moving or something but they don't use motion blur or indicate that they move so ionno. Kinda takes away some charm. Then there's the bg on the right down side which i just don't really feel fits but instead you could've used more of a metallic combination like the fans or stuff that's floating on the top. Also i'd use some more ligthing work and i'd probably make the blue-pink ish things on the floating things to light up to get some cool effects. The light on her hair is kinda random and doesn't feel like they should be there as there's nothing to indicate that light actually would just be generated from her hair like that. Instead i'd go with other lightning sources like perhaps behind her, above or even like i said before to make the purple-blue-ish things shine more to create light sources out of them. "Neon-lamps" or something like that. There is also a very sharp white dot far, far away from the main focal which i think steals too much attraction to the left bottom corner. This tag has nice colors and kinda nice flow and really nice text but i think it fails on the depth and lightning dept. Needs maybe more thoughts over all details and the fractals aren't positioned great.
Omg I can't remember the last I saw one of your CnC's :p

For the depth, I kinda tried making the render "middle focused" in the sense of having those two thingys ( that are directly attached to the render itself) blurred and the background blurred as well, to create the effect >_>
Its something I tried out for the first time, but I failed T_T lol

I agree with everything else as well. And the fractals were planted at the last minute to create some sorta effect, to avoid the deptual blurring.

Thanks for the CnC man, really appreciate it :D
 

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All your sigs have such a good composition, and the colours in this one look amazing! *-*
If I were to fault it, I'd say the purple text doesn't really fit the sig cause of it's colour and font style
but aside from that, it looks kewl :bouncy:
 
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Trolling is against the rules, sir. But I'll go easy on you and give you an unofficial warning since you done a very nice job for my amigo Anna. u_u

I strongly agree with Sam. The black stroke kinda made it look a little crisp-looking, I think. Well done on everything else though, looks so good and I love how it's nice and smooth and the colours, they always go well together. Keep it up

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Damn you.... Lovely, lovely job.
Thanks Jana :)

Thanks dear! :)
You're welcome :hug:
Trolling is against the rules, sir. But I'll go easy on you and give you an unofficial warning since you done a very nice job for my amigo Anna. u_u

I strongly agree with Sam. The black stroke kinda made it look a little crisp-looking, I think. Well done on everything else though, looks so good and I love how it's nice and smooth and the colours, they always go well together. Keep it up

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Haha! Sowwie mom ;p
And thanks for the advice :D
I pentooled some parts on the text to highlight it but I was too lazy to continue the text layer pentooling lol >_>

It's really nice, but no CnC today:p at this rate you'd murder me if we battlexd
Haha! Thanks Elmage! And don't be so sure about that :p

nice gift <3
Anna, I like your ava. <3
Thanks Ricko :)
 

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I really like concept, and tag itself, there are 2 main mistakes you did.
First of all that distortion/smudge/blue or combination of these 3 you used on background and/or disco balls. They look super low quality, like 240p youtube video. =D

And second, fractals on the left bottom side, absolutely not necessary. You either gonna place sparkling stuff near focal or not place at all. Look at Twilight they have sparkling stuff near focal.

Last sentence was joke obv...
 

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I really like concept, and tag itself, there are 2 main mistakes you did.
First of all that distortion/smudge/blue or combination of these 3 you used on background and/or disco balls. They look super low quality, like 240p youtube video. =D

And second, fractals on the left bottom side, absolutely not necessary. You either gonna place sparkling stuff near focal or not place at all. Look at Twilight they have sparkling stuff near focal.

Last sentence was joke obv...
Sometimes I bypass sig rules and end up letting my imagination flow >_>
And I blurred the heck outta the background so I guess that's why it looks like that. Thanks for the insight :)
 

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Sometimes I bypass sig rules and end up letting my imagination flow >_>
And I blurred the heck outta the background so I guess that's why it looks like that. Thanks for the insight :)
Rules are made to be broken (c) Jinx :xD:

But that left side fractals just look ugly and off the place.
 

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I really like the tag you know :p

Well,as Just L said fractals on the sides were unnecessary,they draw attention from your focal point-render a lilttle bit.
I like the color palette here,really nice choice.And the text,it's cool,no,seriously...personally i'm shitty with them but yours looks quite good most of time.

I see you have a lot of spare time for gfxing lately heheh that's great,keep it up ;)
 

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I really like the tag you know :p

Well,as Just L said fractals on the sides were unnecessary,they draw attention from your focal point-render a lilttle bit.
I like the color palette here,really nice choice.And the text,it's cool,no,seriously...personally i'm shitty with them but yours looks quite good most of time.

I see you have a lot of spare time for gfxing lately heheh that's great,keep it up ;)
Hey Thanks Hei! :)
And yep! Trying to squeeze in as much as I can with PS while I can
 
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