[HA] Smoking hookah with an underground Detective

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Eye wait for L as I prepare the hookah in a dimly lit environment. It is night and rainy outside, and we're in a small, comfy and warm room.
 

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Smoke Release is the utilization of the smoke element. The elements which make this up is Fire and Wind. You can generate bodies of smoke from the atmosphere or your body. I'll look forward to learn more about it during the training.

As to why i wanted this ability, I see potential in it corporating with my Dark Release.
 

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A more supplementary based ability, which focuses around trapping the opponent and subsequently suffocating them. Overall, its a nice ability to couple with most things, since it can be useful in an abundance of scenarios. Nonetheless, let us move on.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a clone made out of smoke from their hands. When it is struck, it turns into a smoke similar to the smokescreen the user creates. The smoke clone is mostly used as a diversion tactic like other clone techniques, however, the user can also turn the clone into a source for smoke ninjutsu at any time.
Note: The clone can only use smoke related jutsu.
Note: Can only be used by smoke bios.



Now, for the first technique, you will create a clone made of Smoke, from your hands (the smoke emerges there). When struck, the smoke turns into a smokescreen, and is mostly used a diversion for further attacks. However, the clone can be used as a source for future Smoke techniques.

Analyze the technique, and talk about it, how you would use it, etc.
 

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Alright, a clone related technique. I guess every element gotta have these. The clone is formed by smoke which comes from your hands. I got a question; can it go past short range at all? Also, up to what rank can he use smoke techniques?
As to how I'd use it, I guess for diversion obviously. Considering how it can disperse into smoke which can be used as a source for other smoke techniques, it's worth it.
 

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It can, and I believe only C rank and below.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their smoke to wrap around the opponent with a minimal level of physical power that will prevent them from moving.
Note: Can only be used by a smoke bios.



Manipulate your Smoke to wrap around the opponent. This is basically in order to trap and suffocate them within the smoke, pretty damn useful.
 

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This technique is a binding one of sorts, which allows the user to manipulate the smoke towards the opponent and grab him by any limb. The fact that it doesn't indicate which limb or part exactly, gives you a lot of freedom to make creative usages of this technique. I'd most likely go for grabbing the hands so they don't make handseals.
 

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Good, now for the next one.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will shoot out small dark bombs from his palms that will then release thick smoke to create a veil of smokescreen that will suffocate the target.
Note: Can only be used by smoke bios.



With this technique, you will unleash some dark bombs from your palms, aimed at the opponent. These will release a thick smoke, which creates a veil like smokescreen, which aims to suffocate the opponent. Pretty simple.
 

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A cool diversionary Smoke technique in my opinion. The dark bombs can travel up to medium range which is handy and upon detonation they'll release a thick smoke. What I mainly like is that this smoke doesn't only suffocate the target, but also obstruct their vision. To put this smoke away, the opponents may also use Wind, which will just be candy for my Dark Release ability.
 

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Great job, and sorry for the delay.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: After creating a single smoke clone, should it be sufficiently struck, the user will cause the smoke to spread in ordercreate additional multiple smoke clones.
Note: The clones can only use smoke related jutsu and the user can create up to five clones
Note: Can only used by smoke bios



A technique which is sued after creating a smoke clone. Once its struck, you will manipulate the chakra to spread, and create up to 5 more clones, which can attack once more. Pretty lit.
 

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Oh, this technique is a hidden gem. Should an already existing smoke clone get hit/struck, the smoke which will be spreading from the impact will be used to create other (up to 5) clones, which can use smoke related techniques and normal Tai/Ken I believe (?). It's a good technique to ruin the opponent's plan if he intends to get rid of clones, as this will make his matter worse by multipling the clones in the field. Personally, I'd most likely use this technique to pull an Uzumaki Barrage like technique just for the fun of it.
 

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It can only use Smoke techniques. Which is great if you have an arsenal built around it.


Type: Attack
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will release smoke from his wrist launchers and manipulate it into spherical spinning cloud of smoke around their hands. Within the smoke the user will have released multiple small shuriken from their hand. The shuriken will move through the smoke, though this would be unknown to the enemy. As the smoke and shuriken are rotating around the users fist the user will then punch the enemy and the spinning shuriken slice the enemy once contact is made.
Note: Courtesy of Omegā.



A donated technique where you will release smoke from your wrist launchers (probably have to be edited to hands now) and manipulate it into a spherical shape around your hands made of spinning smoke. Within this smoke, you will unleash some Shuriken which move through the smoke and just hang there till you strike someone. This causes you to both strike someone, and cut them with the shuriken. Pretty simple premise.
 
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