Shrouded Skies: Chapter One

[Ragnaroc]

very nice...may i suggest a bigger font, its a bit hard to read, but very good none the less

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

Awesome, I pwn xD

You will have a bigger part in the next chapter, sir.

very nice...may i suggest a bigger font, its a bit hard to read, but very good none the less

Thank you, and I will keep that in mind when I'm writing the next one.

 

[Madara Uchiha]

You will have a bigger part in the next chapter, sir.

K and keep up the good work. And yea a bigger font would help

 

[Rin Hatake]

Very nice ^^
I like the old timely feel of your ficlet.

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

Thank you very much.

 

[Oblivion]

cooool !
it's a really good fanfic !
great job KeotsuEclipse !

 

[+Kariru+]

Nice Very Medieval!!xd

This is the first time I've read your work and it is very impressive!!(hope I can be as good as you..T_T)

Hope to see the next chapter!!

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

cooool !
it's a really good fanfic !
great job KeotsuEclipse !

Thanks!

Nice Very Medieval!!xd

This is the first time I've read your work and it is very impressive!!(hope I can be as good as you..T_T)

Hope to see the next chapter!!

Thank you.

And, I'm not really that good. But, just practice writing, and you'll be good. I wasn't a very good writer at first, but I've gotten alot better since writing for the base.

And chapter two has been out for months, and chapter 3 was out about 2 weeks ago.