Should my story be apart of the actual series?

[Guardian of the Rain]

Some people have said that my story about the Hokages and the Shinigami Realm is very realistic and should be part of the actual series. Please read it if you haven't already, I pormise you that it's worth it.
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[ReapTermin]

I read it the first time you posted it. It's pretty good. Should it be part of of the Series? I'm not really sure. I'd have to think about it. +Rep

 

[meowmeow]

Ummm idk about a part of the story. It was a little drawn out and I did not feel as if any of the dialogue would be actually said by any of the characters. Not a bad idea though.

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

I read it the first time you posted it. It's pretty good. Should it be part of of the Series? I'm not really sure. I'd have to think about it. +Rep

Thanks a bunch! I just love to hear that people like it, it really makes my day. Do you think it at least deserves to be a filler or movie?:shrug:
And +rep for you for making my day man

 

[cabby007]

message me when 5 comes out!! these are sweet

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

message me when 5 comes out!! these are sweet

Thanks dude, I will!xd

Ummm idk about a part of the story. It was a little drawn out and I did not feel as if any of the dialogue would be actually said by any of the characters. Not a bad idea though.

Wow, thats surprising, I feel I hit the dialogue spot on. Don't forget the first 3 Hokages most likely talked very formal but thanks for the feedback anyway

 

[ReapTermin]

Thanks a bunch! I just love to hear that people like it, it really makes my day. Do you think it at least deserves to be a filler or movie?:shrug:
And +rep for you for making my day man

I would say yes to the filler, but other people would argue about it being part of the actual storyline or a movie. Wish I'd made this before you. LOL

And you're welcome.

 

[meowmeow]

Its not just the format. I could not picture the past four hokages sitting on chairs just aimlessly talking about the stuff they did. I like the fact you put it in the Shinigami Realm though because I have always been interested in what all is going on there.

 

[Guardian of the Rain]

Its not just the format. I could not picture the past four hokages sitting on chairs just aimlessly talking about the stuff they did. I like the fact you put it in the Shinigami Realm though because I have always been interested in what all is going on there.

Well the story had to start somewhere that's blah. Then slowly progresses and becomes intense until it reaches the climax. Plus, what else could they possibly be doing in such a dull world? It's up to you guys to decide what they've been doing before the story started. You can imagine them sparring or whatever you like