Shodaime Shikage "Hei"

[Sade]

Basic Information
Name:Hei
Nickname:"Satan",Demon,Shinigami,Hate,Shi,Shikage...
Gender:Male
Age:24
Clan:N/A

Looks:Look at images...

Personality:

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Hei has a split personality...When he is fighting he is very selfish and hot-tempered...a person full in pure hate that wants to kill,in addition with his personality when he doesnt fight,he is calm,he thinks more and he is more shy...Both personalities has ONE common...They love to get DRUNK

Village Info.
Village of Birth:none
Village of Alliance: Demon Country (Oni no Kuni),later Missin-Nin

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:Sannin
Specialty:

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Raiton,Nintaijutsu,Taijutsu,Sealing,Speed,Stealthness,Chakra control,Kenjutsu(sword jutsus),assasinations...

Elements:all
Your ninjutsu:

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from elements nothing(-.-),genjutsu also nothing,taijutsu also(-.- , 3fails),ninjutsu-up to B-Rank(hahahh)

Weapon:

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Hei has a pair of small swords with chains,so he can grap enemies neck and transport Raiton element through this to the enemy...It looks like this

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Background Info.
History:

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Hei was born before the 2nd Great Shinobi War...His father was the 1st Raikage and his mother a member from Uzumaki clan...As he was getting older,step by step,he was getting stronger and it was noticable that he had a big talent...As long as the villagers were alliences because of the relationship of Raikage with the mother,and peace existed ,Hei was getting trained by his father in Ninjutsu,and specially at Raiton,in Taijutsu,Nintaijutsu and sword techniques and the mother in sealing techniques he came to master all of those in the age of 14 years old!Then the war started...His parents both died in battles...Hei lived unumerable horific scenes for the past 4 years that the war lasted, that made him to learn one thing,that hate is the only thing pure and true in this world,that anything that hate may was person he would be the one,so he became a Demon,he became HATE itself...Those past 4 years Hei was ableto earn a lot of experience,apart from the one that already had,that helped him in survive in this without end war...Day by day,kill by kill he was becoming even better from the previous day...After the war ended he decided one thing,to make a whole country in to the finest shinobis...So he found the Demon Country...He became the 1st,from the two, of the Shikages...With his power,determination and ability he made a very powerful country...The demon Country and his peaple was even able to take members from other high rank calns of other villages like Uchihas,Senjus,Ice user ...At the end he made a powerful and fearsome country,although he could deffend theirself he made allience with Konoha...However The other four Great Shinobi Countries made an invansion to the Demon Country ,and so Demon Country and the power that its name once reminder and make thousend of peaple to fear was destroyed...Hei was able to leave before they kill him,and so he continiue living as Missin-Nin...Now,even more full with hate and with the idea of revenge and killing anyone that he finds in his way,he is ready to eat you up!!!

Other

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Theme Song and Background Music:

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για εσένα SAMOR,LOL...

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[Sade]

Here posts only moderators

 

[Sade]

I hope it gets approved....if something doesnt fit tell me to fix it,cause i want this bio too much...everything has beed searched with names of villages etc etc...so i think i dont have made mistaakes.....if it gets approved sent me plz PM or visitor mesege....

 

[Caliburn]

This bio makes absolutely no sense at all.

What's Nintaijutsu? And you say you learned all elements and then you say you learned no elemental ninjutsu and if you didn't learn them, how can raiton be your specialty? Same goes for taijutsu and in a lesser extent kenjutsu.

Your history is also messed up. A raikage with an Uzumaki while the Uzumaki's are in alliance with Konoha Yes there was a Demon Country in a filler arc, however it was stated there that it was already pretty old, so you're way to young to founded it, not to mention that it would be impossible to get Senju's, Uchiha's and Ice users to your side ._.

Is this your first bio and if not did you actually had any training?

 

[Sade]

This bio makes absolutely no sense at all.

What's Nintaijutsu? And you say you learned all elements and then you say you learned no elemental ninjutsu and if you didn't learn them, how can raiton be your specialty? Same goes for taijutsu and in a lesser extent kenjutsu.

Your history is also messed up. A raikage with an Uzumaki while the Uzumaki's are in alliance with Konoha Yes there was a Demon Country in a filler arc, however it was stated there that it was already pretty old, so you're way to young to founded it, not to mention that it would be impossible to get Senju's, Uchiha's and Ice users to your side ._.

Is this your first bio and if not did you actually had any training?

no its not my first time at making bio...anyway..Nintaijutsu are these:

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course Uzumakis were allience with Konoha,but that doesnt mean that they couldnt be allience Uzumakis or Konoha with someone else,Hidden Village,or country...I knew that the back ground is VERY messy....also about the Demon Country...we just know that know the "Boss" its a Maiden,and we dont know what happened before,so i came up with this...about this i said they could win in battle Uchihas members etc etc...i meant that that the ninjas were strong...and yes i had training...(Bored to talk more)

 

[Caliburn]

no its not my first time at making bio...anyway..Nintaijutsu are these:

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course Uzumakis were allience with Konoha,but that doesnt mean that they couldnt be allience Uzumakis or Konoha with someone else,Hidden Village,or country...I knew that the back ground is VERY messy....also about the Demon Country...we just know that know the "Boss" its a Maiden,and we dont know what happened before,so i came up with this...about this i said they could win in battle Uchihas members etc etc...i meant that that the ninjas were strong...and yes i had training...(Bored to talk more)

Dude...that link leads to an empty page either way I found it and if you didn't learn taijutsu nor elemental ninjutsu, it can't be your specialty.

And no the Uzumaki's were related to the Senju. Konoha even have their symbol on their uniform. Then they are not going to make an alliance with another Village and certainly not the Cloud as they tried to kidnap Kushina and Hinata and probably a lot more + it's around wartime.

Also we do know the Demon Country at least goes 2 generations back, you're way to young to have founded it and saying that you collected all the strongest KG and ninja's into your country is way over the top.

Also if you haven't learned sealing, remove it. Same goes for most of your specialties. If you haven't learned taijutsu, it's impossible to be specialised in speed. If you didn't had any kenjutsu training or something along those lines, remove kenjutsu and it stille makes no sense that you say you learned all the elements and then say you didn't learn elemental ninjutsu =/
Have you learned them or not? If not remove raiton from your specialties.
Same goes for chakra control as why would you have that? Did you had any special training?

 

[Sade]

Dude...that link leads to an empty page either way I found it and if you didn't learn taijutsu nor elemental ninjutsu, it can't be your specialty.

And no the Uzumaki's were related to the Senju. Konoha even have their symbol on their uniform. Then they are not going to make an alliance with another Village and certainly not the Cloud as they tried to kidnap Kushina and Hinata and probably a lot more + it's around wartime.

Also we do know the Demon Country at least goes 2 generations back, you're way to young to have founded it and saying that you collected all the strongest KG and ninja's into your country is way over the top.

Also if you haven't learned sealing, remove it. Same goes for most of your specialties. If you haven't learned taijutsu, it's impossible to be specialised in speed. If you didn't had any kenjutsu training or something along those lines, remove kenjutsu and it stille makes no sense that you say you learned all the elements and then say you didn't learn elemental ninjutsu =/
Have you learned them or not? If not remove raiton from your specialties.
Same goes for chakra control as why would you have that? Did you had any special training?

man i already know all that you said about the relationship Senjs-Uzumakis...And maybe i didnt explain good the story...i dint mean that they collect peaple with KG but they could be good in battle bla bla bla....anyway...and yes you are right about the speciality...i forgot...anyway ,its okay...

 

[Shig]

You barely know to control an element.

Ninataijutsu? That's Raikage's ability, and it has been shown only to him, and no one else. Chakra Control? Again, you barely control a few elements.

You don't have Sealing, you need to take a test first of all, to recieve it. In order to have speed as a specialty, you should first of all get training in Taijutsu. And even so, I don't think only Taijutsu techniques are needed.

This bio will be approved when pigs will fly.

You gotta change a lot.

 

[Sade]

You barely know to control an element.

Ninataijutsu? That's Raikage's ability, and it has been shown only to him, and no one else. Chakra Control? Again, you barely control a few elements.

You don't have Sealing, you need to take a test first of all, to recieve it. In order to have speed as a specialty, you should first of all get training in Taijutsu. And even so, I don't think only Taijutsu techniques are needed.

This bio will be approved when pigs will fly.

You gotta change a lot.

i have to change nothing!!!!I HAVE TO DELETE IT !!LOL!!EPIC FAIL!!xdxdxd!!!!anyway..no prob...more i wanted to see sth...

 

[Shig]

i have to change nothing!!!!I HAVE TO DELETE IT !!LOL!!EPIC FAIL!!xdxdxd!!!!anyway..no prob...more i wanted to see sth...

Yes, the bio was an epic fail. ^^

 

[Sade]

Yes, the bio was an epic fail. ^^

it turned out in an EPIC FAIL...anyway..