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Shadow Saga: the beginning
The Beginning!- Part 1In the beginning, there was a village named Pamugenia,(exactly like the Leaf Village) who had a Hokage. This Hokage was nice and very respected. His name was PandaX, and he had Five Sannin who enforced the rules and protected the village. However, they were unaware that there foes looking for opportunities to strike and take advantage. The other Chunnins and Jounins are securing the area around the village, but there is a mysterious strange hiding in the trees above making sure that he is unspotted and it was a little harder to see him since it was pitch black outside. Suddenly, the strange begins to heading away from the village. Soon, two more strange individuals join up w/ him and continue heading deep in the forest. They get in the middle of the Forest and stop.
"I thought you said that they would be here by now", one of the strange men says. "They'll be here; they're never late." another strange. He takes off his ANBU mask, and it's ShyGuy! "When they say they're gonna be here, they'll be here! You just need to wait, Chu!"
"I can't wait forever! I need some action now!" Chu says. The last stranger reveals himself to be EduFish, and he senses that someone approaches. "Wait, I sense three people. Be on your guard!" Edu says.
With that, two shadow figures appear. It's ShadowNinja and Blackshadow from the Akatsuki. "Sorry we're late. We kinda ran into some ninjas on the way. And Black got overexcited and took his time getting rid of them. So, let get down to business. Do you guys have your end of the deal?" Shadowninja said.
"Come on now, you know me. ZOMG!" Shyguy nervously said. Immediately Black threw a kunai right pass Shy's cheek, right into the tree behind Shy. "What the ..." Shy shocked by what Black did. "Come out now!" Shadow said. It's LLPF (didn't feel like spelling all that out.)
"Wait, Wait, Wait! He's w/ us!" Shy said, trying to calm down Shadow and Black. "He's working w/ us to take down the Sannins." Shy continues.
"If he screws this up, we'll deal w/ both of you." Black says. "Ok, listen guys; we're not strong enough to take them on together so we have to take them down one by one." Shadow states. "but we'll meet again when we get more people to help us. Until then. Teleport Jutsu!" Shadow and Black disappear.
"That guy didn't have to be so cold!" Chu complains. "That's just how he is." Edu says.
"Come on guys, we gotta sneak back in the village before someone notices that we're gone." Shy tells them. So the four ninjas begin heading back to the village. They are within feet of the village and then suddenly Kembang appears!
"What are you doing out this late?? You better be careful. Don't roam out this late at night! You know how the Sannins feel about this." Kembang says.
So, the four ninjas were safe for now.
Meanwhile, Shadow and Black are standing by a lake and Black says "I don't trust the new recruits! They'll only get in the way."
"Well, you know sacrifices must be made and every pawn plays it's part." Shadow replies.
-End of Part 1-
 

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The Beginning- Part 2The Next Morning back in the village of Pamugenia, report about three shinobi killed in a massive assault reached back to PandaX. Three of the Sannin appear in his room.
"Sir, Three ninjas were just reported dead in an assault. Here are the three shinobi and their status." DarkR reported. "Hmm... weakjounin, SaixSan and Brucetrunks!? How is this possible?? What happened?" The elder gentleman sitting in the chair says.(PandaX)
"Well, we're not sure on how many enemies they fought but, judging by the landscale, they were severely outmatched. I have a team of high rank ninjas investigating as we speak." Omed says.
"You'll need more than." Chaldean says. "What do you mean, Chaldean?" asked PandaX.
"Considering the way the ninjas were killed, I'd say we need to send a Sannin to help along the investigation." Chaldean answers. "Are you volunteering for this assignment?" PandaX asked. "Not really." Chaldean said, hoping that Panda would pick the other Sannin. "Too Bad, b/c you just got that assignment! I expect a full-detail report by sunset." PandaX says. Chaldean sighs and says, "Understood, Sir!" then leaves.
"Sir, I have reason to believe that we may have a spy in our village." DarkR says. "Why do you think that?" PandaX asked. "Doesn't it seem a little strange that all three ninjas were completely destroy simultaneously!? How could all three ninja be caught in the same area in the same time, w/o someone organizing a trap!?" DarkR explains. "And what's more, some of the Sannin are beginning to act strange as well. Have you ever noticed that we you call us (the Sannins) to meet, certain ones continue to show up late and make excuses???"
"I see your point. I have a couple of ninjas who I trust and know that they will keep a eye out on the ones you expect. Which reminds me, who do you think the spy could be??" PandaX says.
"I definitely thinks it's Wrath." DarkR answers.
"I agree" Omed says. "He has been acting strangely."
"Ok then it's settled. Omed, go inform Kembang, Edufish and Chu of this and give them assignment." PandaX says. Omed leaves to complete his objective. "Keep a eye on Omed. I know he wanted to be the next Hokage but I refused to grant his wish. This may be a pretty good opportunity for him to get back at me." PandaX says to DarkR. "Understood, Sir. You can count on me." DarkR says, then he too disappears.

Meanwhile, back at the Akatsuki base (on the otherside of the Forest, deep in the caves.), Shadow and Black meet up w/ three mysterious. "Ok, now that you know what to do, we expect this to go w/o any errors. Good, in two days the village of Pamugenia will be no more." Shadow says. Everyone laughs (...you know that evil laugh).
-End of Part 2 and End of the Beginning Chapter.-
Tune in for the next episode entitled: "The Spy and the Trap!"
 

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Couple of things.

1. Hokage = Fire Shadow. Its a title unique to the village of Konoha, so having a "hokage" in a different village is a little silly.

2. Sannin = Three. The Legendary Sannin = The Legendary Three. Hanzo gave Jiraiya, Tsunade and Orochimaru that title because there were three of them. Calling five people the Sannin or the "three" doesn't really make sense. >.<
 

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The Spy and The Trap!Sunset arrives and Chaldean is following on some investigative work. He heads for the part of the forest where the attack happened and he is accompanied by two trustworthy ninjas, Shinning Soul and Night1994, and one medical ninja, Sakunachi, just in case they find some survivors. Chaldean leads the group in a hopes to find some more leads.
"I think I found something you should see, captain." Sakunachi said, looking at the remains of weakjounin. "He has a huge hole in his chest that looks to been cause by a extreme rush of power and a high level of chakra. I don't know what could have cause this." Sakunachi continues as everyone gathers around to take a look. Suddenly, Black appears!
"I think I know what caused it! hahahaha. I did it!" Black confidently says. "I have a bijju and it's called the Black Phoenix. I didn't have to transform to destroy them but I wanted to anyway. I revealed my first level and I went crazy. And when I finally calmed down everyone else was barely breathing." Black continues.
Pissed about finding out how his comrades died, Chaldean decide to try and battle against this seemly unstoppable foe. "Ok, team. Let's hold our ground until backup arrives." Chaldean says. "Captain, I'm scared!" Sakunachi said, as she got behind Chaldean. "Don't worry. I'll protect you." Chaldean said.
Suddenly, a kunai is jammed right through Chaldean's lung. Seeing that he is bleeding, Chaldean turns around to see Sakunachi holding the kunai. ".....ugh.......W....Why??" Chaldean says, as he struggling's to breathe. Sakunachi smiles and so does Shinning Soul and Night1994. "One down, Four to go!" Sakunachi says.
"Let me finish this. Stand back! Mult-Shuriken jutsu!" Night1994 said. Immediately, forty to fifty shurikens impale Chaldean through his back. "I can't believe he didn't see this coming. How sad!" Shinning Soul said.
Chaldean crawls w/ every fiber of his being, and Black is standing over him. "Just die already!" Black says as he kicks Chaldean into a tree, breaking it. Off in the distance, Kembang hears the tree fallen and decides to remain hidden until he finds out what went on.
Black puts up Chaldean's body and says, "Good work, now head back to the village and report to PandaX. Tell him that there was a violent attack in which you were barely able to survive. And wait for further instructions!"
"Yes Sir" Shinning Soul, Night1994, and Sakunachi said, and then head back to the village.
Kembang is stunned but what he has seen and knows that if he tries to head back the village, that he will be extremely outnumbered and outmatched in power, so he stays still for the moment. "What will I do??" Kembang asks himself.
He continues watching Black to see what more he have in store for the village, only to see that Black is looking directly at him. Kembang moves instantly but Shadow is there. "Mangeyou Sharingan!" Shadow says. And Kembang immediately collapses to the floor. Shadow's Mangeyou Sharingan causes Kembang to confuse reality, so he doesn't remember what he saw.
"What shall we do w/ this one??" Black asks. "Nothing, he is too late to stop the plan from proceeding. We'll leave him." Shadow answers. "We got what we came here for. Let go. Sunrise is about to come."
-End of The Spy and The Trap!-Tune in for the next episode: "Plans Revelaed: No More Secrets!". and don't forget to join the Shadow Saga FanClub.
 

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Plans Revealed: No More Secrets!It's Sunrise and Chaldean is no where to be seen. PandaX has sent Goku149 to retrieve him, unfortunately, Goku149 doesn't anything in the village. He checks the usually places that he could be: in his apartment, at the bar, behind the girls' locker room etc. Goku149 finally finds someone that make be able to help him out, Kembang. "Have you seen Chaldean? It's unlike him to be late or avoid PandaX. What's going on??" Goku149 asks. Flashes of last night fly through Kembang mind yet nothing makes sense. "I....don't know." Kembang replies as he holds his head. "Well, let me know if you hear anything from him." Goku149 says and then continues his search. While this is going on, PandaX summons all of the Sannin. All four show up: Moon, Ryan, omed, and Wrath. Goku149 appears and whispers something to PandaX then leaves.
"I have some bad news. I've just gotten word that Chaldean is missing. We can only assume that he was captured." PandaX says. "I want you guys to gather the strongest ninjas we have and form teams. And be extremely careful about the ninjas that are in your team. Each of you will have at least one Chunnin in your team.
Team Moon- X-Laws Macro, Goku149, Sakunachi.
Team omed- kembang, EduFish, Chutehjawa.
Team Ryan- daltong, Lyuse, LLPF (Lesbian Looking Pablo Francisco-username)
Team Wrath- Shinning Soul, Chidoridude55, Loki,
So go and get familiar w/ your fellow teammates and prepare for you first assignment." PandaX continues.
With that, Lyuse bust open the door and says, "Hokage!" Angry w/ this interruption, PandaX demands, "What is it?"
Lyuse continues, "Sorry sir. But we have just sighted two members of the Akatsuki approaching the front gate. Our first defense isn't strong enough to handle these two. One of them is known as BlackShadow and the other one we've never seen before. But we are sure that they mean business. What do you want us to do Sir?"
"I shall handle this matter myself!" PandaX states as he stands up. "But Sir, you're not dressed for combat." Ryan (DarkR) warns. "That means nothing to me. Now, let move out!" PandaX says to the Sannins and Lyuse.
PandaX and the Sannins arrive at the front gate to see what all of this is about.
"Ah, the great Hokage himself decides to show up!" Black says. "I've heard a lot about you, Black. What is the meaning of this, and who is this strange?" Panda says to Black.
"I'm surprised. You MEAN you don't actually recognize your own Sannin!?" Black states as the strange reveals his face. It's Chaldean!
"What the .......?" says Omed. "What is the meaning of this? What have you done to him?" PandaX asks.
"We just showed him the benefits we had to offer and he couldn't refuse. (Evil Laugh!)" Black says. "PandaX, the destruction of Pamugenia will come in just a few short days." He continues.
"But enough talk, time for you and Chaldean to have a nice reunion!" Black says. Suddenly, Chaldean captures Uchihachiby (who was standing near by), and runs into the middle of the village. Ryan and omed follow him back in the village. Black begins to walk away, when PandaX throws a kunai right at his foot. PandaX jumps in the way of Black, so he can't escape. Black laughs! "What the hell is so funny?" PandaX says. "You fools never see a trap coming until it's too late!" Black answers. Chaldean stands on top of a house w/ Uchihachiby in a chokehold, as Ryan and omed appear. "There is no way to escape, we have you surrounded. Give up." omed tells Chaldean. "I wasn't trying to escape. (Evil laugh) Did you ever think to yourself: Why is he running into the village? It’s too severely weakening this village!" Chaldean replies. "Katon!" w/ that.......
KABOOM!
a huge blast. Ryan and omed are thrown through nearby buildings and are knocked out. PandaX sees this and this distraction allows Black to leave w/o having to fight. The Blast kills Uchihachilby and the remain body of Chaldean. (The real Chaldean was controlled by Anonymous jutsu known as the Body Manipulation jutsu! *Remember, Chaldean was already died. The Akatsuki did that jutsu to fool and hurt the ninjas in Pamugenia. Apparently, Mission Accomplished!*)
-END of "Plans Revealed: No More Secrets!"-Tune in for the next chapter: The Destruction of Pamugenia!? Thanks for you support
 
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