[CJ] Serpent is too kind

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This first technique is rather simple, Its a wall of earth that rises up and blocks techniques of appropriate ranks. Afterwards, it will release hundreds of bullets upon the target. It's important to not, that if this technique blocks an attack that is equal or overpowers it. It will no longer be around to release the bullets.

(Doton: Tsuchi Kabe-Tama) Earth Release: Earth Wall-Bullets:
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description:a large wall raises from the ground in front of the user, the wall then shoots hundreds of little bullets at there opponent.
Notes:
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

This next one is useful in close combat. It allows you to drop down (possibly to evade an attack) to the ground and knock you opponent off balance and then punch them with an earthen fist. This will leave them air bound and open for another attack, meaning it's works well in Taijutsu combo's

(Doton: Hebi Higyou) - Earth Release: Crushing Uppercut
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: While close ranged with an opponent and facing hand to hand combat. the User will quickly drop to one one arm and spin around in a break-dancing manner in order so kick the opponents legs and send them off balance. As this happens, the user will be focusing chakra with the hand connected to the ground as an earthen fist will form over there hand. Once the opponent is knocked off balance, the user will spring up bringing the earth infused fist along the opponents body in an uppercut manner dealing a damaging blow to the opponent as the fist crumbles, this hit will send the opponent into the air.
Notes:
-Can only be used once per battle
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

Alright, preform the techniques on some NPC's and ask any questions you have.
 

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Questions about the first technique.
Do you need to be in contact with earth to perform this technique or can you do it mid-air?
Can you control the height of the wall?
How long can the wall shoot the bullets for?

*Gathering doton chakra through my core and channeling it onto the ground infront of me, I manipulate the earth to rise up and form a large wall as I exert more chakra that allows tiny bullets to be shot through the wall*

Questions about the second technique.
Why is it only usable once for battle? This surely could be used something like once every two/three turns and still be balanced.

*Again, gathering doton chakra through my core and onto my arms, I approach MR.NPC quickly and place my left foot forward as a pivot before ducking down on one arm(right) and using it to spin clockwise around and kick MR.NPC's legs with my left leg in a fluid motion. As he gets off balanced, I finish gathering chakra on my right and manipulate it to give earthen properties of the ground below it before springing up and swinging my right fist upwards into a shattering earth powered uppercut*
 

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1) The advanced technique is limited to being 25ft in size squared.. I would say this would have to be smaller or at most the same size. It's my understanding that Earth techniques that don't require handseals need to be used in contact with Earth. If not then their is nothing limiting you from doing so.

2) It was a limit that was added to the technique at some point. It's an older technique that was made in a time were harsh restrictions were being placed on most techniques. Truthfully, quite a lot of my techniques need to be updated..

You've done good. I'll add you to the trained list for the techniques.
 
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