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So this is the second piece of work ive done with Eternity - this time putting feeling a lot more comfortable with Photoshop and really enjoying myself while making it :)

Any comments for improvement are much appreciated <3

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Let me know what you think of my second piece of work :) Hope ive improved!
 
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Eternity000 said:
Look at the ice make in Gray's hands and then look a bit more up and right. It looks a bit weird like invisbible Lyon is standing behind Gray if you understand what I mean.




Yes he does and Natsu isnt that happy either. Watch out or I will call Natsu, I got plenty of fire in my sig xd
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haha i see. but i think thats just ur imagination <3

i wanna make another haha
 
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Great improvement Cascade ^^

1st - The dark version looks more clean and Hq«Q (so that s the best version)
2nd- The effects on the bg create some flow and look good.
3rd - the render isnt well blended
4th- the text is decent, but in my opinion should be closer to the render ;)
5th - I like the effect in the hand ^^

It is good ;) Good work :D
 
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Powerflames said:
Great improvement Cascade ^^

1st - The dark version looks more clean and Hq«Q (so that s the best version)
2nd- The effects on the bg create some flow and look good.
3rd - the render isnt well blended
4th- the text is decent, but in my opinion should be closer to the render ;)
5th - I like the effect in the hand ^^

It is good ;) Good work :D
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yeah i was given an effect by eternity to use on the hand and decided to find my own, i think i made a good decision... :)

i dont really know anything about text, i just put a text box there and wrote in it - added some embossment (wtv it is) until i liked how it looked...
no idea how to make cool text graphics (like what u had on yours)

as for the render blend - im not really sure how to fix that, any ideas? maybe changing his opacity a little bit o_O
 
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Powerflames said:
Great improvement Cascade ^^

1st - The dark version looks more clean and Hq«Q (so that s the best version)
2nd- The effects on the bg create some flow and look good.
3rd - the render isnt well blended
4th- the text is decent, but in my opinion should be closer to the render ;)
5th - I like the effect in the hand ^^
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I agree with the two bolded sentences above.....For me the hand freeze effect isnt good....you could do a better one....Text is meh....maybe if y make it slightly bigger..(or change font)Bg is boring......Y can do a lot better if y try.......And i can help if y'd like me to.......
 
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