[Photoshop] Second Piece Of Work: Cascade - Help From Eternity! Feedback Appreciated :)

[Cascade]

So this is the second piece of work ive done with Eternity - this time putting feeling a lot more comfortable with Photoshop and really enjoying myself while making it

Any comments for improvement are much appreciated <3

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Let me know what you think of my second piece of work Hope ive improved!

 

[Natsu is legendary]

sweet
you wanna give me that right?

 

[basegirl]

they're awesome
and i always prefer the darker version, and this is no exception :3

 

[Cascade]

sweet
you wanna give me that right?

Haha we'll see, i dont really have use for it right now, so i might be able to change the text and see if you'll like it but i dont know what gray would think of me adding the name 'natsu is legendary' next to it hahaha

 

[sasukexx13]

Nice one

Oh i am Jelly

 

[WastedMonkey]

nice work

 

[Natsu is legendary]

Haha we'll see, i dont really have use for it right now, so i might be able to change the text and see if you'll like it but i dont know what gray would think of me adding the name 'natsu is legendary' next to it hahaha

graay wouldn't mind

 

[Titania Erza]

Look at the ice make in Gray's hands and then look a bit more up and right. It looks a bit weird like invisbible Lyon is standing behind Gray if you understand what I mean.

graay wouldn't mind

Yes he does and Natsu isnt that happy either. Watch out or I will call Natsu, I got plenty of fire in my sig xd

 

[Cascade]

Look at the ice make in Gray's hands and then look a bit more up and right. It looks a bit weird like invisbible Lyon is standing behind Gray if you understand what I mean.




Yes he does and Natsu isnt that happy either. Watch out or I will call Natsu, I got plenty of fire in my sig xd

haha i see. but i think thats just ur imagination <3

i wanna make another haha

 

[Negative Knight]

Lol this is some nice artwork, the first attempt itself was pretty awesome

+Rep for the nice work

btw didn't u say it was bad to post on people's profiles Lol

 

[Cascade]

Lol this is some nice artwork, the first attempt itself was pretty awesome

+Rep for the nice work

btw didn't u say it was bad to post on people's profiles Lol

this is for Cnc - constructive critasism on artwork, not asking people to look at your thread, but i see ur point lol

 

[Titania Erza]

haha i see. but i think thats just ur imagination <3

i wanna make another haha

That is competition time

 

[Powerflames]

Great improvement Cascade ^^

1st - The dark version looks more clean and Hq«Q (so that s the best version)
2nd- The effects on the bg create some flow and look good.
3rd - the render isnt well blended
4th- the text is decent, but in my opinion should be closer to the render
5th - I like the effect in the hand ^^

It is good Good work

 

[Cascade]

Great improvement Cascade ^^

1st - The dark version looks more clean and Hq«Q (so that s the best version)
2nd- The effects on the bg create some flow and look good.
3rd - the render isnt well blended
4th- the text is decent, but in my opinion should be closer to the render
5th - I like the effect in the hand ^^

It is good Good work

yeah i was given an effect by eternity to use on the hand and decided to find my own, i think i made a good decision...

i dont really know anything about text, i just put a text box there and wrote in it - added some embossment (wtv it is) until i liked how it looked...
no idea how to make cool text graphics (like what u had on yours)

as for the render blend - im not really sure how to fix that, any ideas? maybe changing his opacity a little bit

 

[Chaos.]

Great improvement Cascade ^^

1st - The dark version looks more clean and Hq«Q (so that s the best version)
2nd- The effects on the bg create some flow and look good.
3rd - the render isnt well blended
4th- the text is decent, but in my opinion should be closer to the render
5th - I like the effect in the hand ^^

I agree with the two bolded sentences above.....For me the hand freeze effect isnt good....you could do a better one....Text is meh....maybe if y make it slightly bigger..(or change font)Bg is boring......Y can do a lot better if y try.......And i can help if y'd like me to.......

 

[~MC117~]

Nice bro

 

[Frikid]

wow, nice man,
didn't knew you were this good at it

 

[Cascade]

wow, nice man,
didn't knew you were this good at it

niether did i haha

 

[Marcuss]

nice i like the darker one with opacity down +rep