Samurai' of the army

[Sasuke uchiha 185]

It all began on a mission command
Gen.Jackson:I need a soldier who can get those black market sellers
Marco:how about Shawn sir
gen.jackson:good idea Marco.Send in Shawn now!
Unknown sergeant:lutenant Shawn.Gen.jackson wants you prepared at the briefing room
Shawn quickly got to the brifieng room
Shawn:Is there a problem!
Gen.jackson:Umm,no. We need you to raid a black market go as fast as possible
Shawn:no back up
Gen. Jackson nodded
Shawn has getting prepared shinning his twin swords having pistol and dual smg magazines ready
Then Shawn got to the helicopter

Pilot:ready
Shawn nodded and the helicopter took off


Shawn got dropped in a dessert near a city
He leaned his hand into a rock and it opened
The black market was there
Shawn:time to blow thing up
He uncapped the grenade threw it
Then people started to look at Shawn with their weapons

Shawn:let's party
He took one of his swords and sliced anyone while dodging bullets
A guy threw a grenade then. Shawn swatted it away
He took his second sword and started slicing again then he threw the other sword which killed a lot
Many charged at him he drew his pistol shooting while slice all the people he jumped at his other sword
He unloaded the magazine then pressing a button on his sword which contained a magazine he took it and reloaded then he connected the sword and it became a dual sword

After the battle Shawn got to the city waiting the helicopter
End



(watch out for part two tomorrow if I'm not lazy)
(sorry it was short I got lazy)

 

[aniwth0z]

the conver at the begginng confused me
Too many name xd

 

[Sasuke uchiha 185]

the conver at the begginng confused me
Too many name xd

He was asking a soldier to raid a black market

 

[Urda]

It can be spacing between lines. The dialouge of the person speaking can be bolded or space out more by name so we can understand who's talking. I'm really confuse about the theme or concept of the story. It is short, if it was longer maybe I can understand and enjoyed it more. Overall great story.

 

[Sasuke uchiha 185]

It can be spacing between lines. The dialouge of the person speaking can be bolded or space out more by name so we can understand who's talking. I'm really confuse about the theme or concept of the story. It is short, if it was longer maybe I can understand and enjoyed it more. Overall great story.

Well expect the other 2 chapters longer I'm using an iPad so it's bad
Well thank for the compliment