Sakura fan art. your thoughts?

[EuGenius]

Hello all so i got really bored so i thought id draw a picture of sakura based on FemmeFatale's clothes design.
No reference used except for femmefatales clothes
No copying
No tracing
only used my my hand, pencil, paper and ink pen.
sorry i couldn't scan it in because i no longer have one.

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[Ventalus]

Looks good! I would like to see some more details on the background, etc shadows, so it could of course be something you can do if you feel for it ^^

 

[EuGenius]

thanks. you're right i need to put more effort into the background. but i have do other work that covers the whole paper

 

[Frozenstein]

argh god no! please! no more sakura fan arts! argh...!!! *dies*

ok honestly. face is a little weird, head is a little too big and I can see boobs on that paper... ok joke, they should be a bit smaller too as far as I can remember.

 

[Kingu]

Nice! But somehow it reminds me of Family Guy.

 

[EuGenius]

argh god no! please! no more sakura fan arts! argh...!!! *dies*

ok honestly. face is a little weird, head is a little too big and I can see boobs on that paper... ok joke, they should be a bit smaller too as far as I can remember.

Thanks for pointing out the flaws. I need that feedback to help me improve my work and/also to develop my own style.

 

[EuGenius]

Nice! But somehow it reminds me of Family Guy.

Lol Family Guy

 

[Friendly Demonic Figure]

this is very nice... I like how clean it looks, but i think just to tip the scale of awesomeness, maybe apply some shadow affect to her body, just to give it some extra dimension, but still a great piece anyway

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

Nice try!!!

 

[Nakamazi Itchigo]

Nice work, thanx for sharing

 

[Zorø]

keep it up rudeboi im loving da pic