Sakura and tsunade poem ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ lady tsunade SAMA edition ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[Lady Tsunade Sama]

good morning members, it's me lady tsunade SAMA and I hope all of you slept well last night <3

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I love poetry that's why i made this poem to my favorites characters tsunade and sakura and I hope all of you like it :hug: kisses ♡


tsunade poem

Tsunade is so strong ..
she can break any tones ..
tsunade is so powerful ..
she can break susanoo ..
tsunade isn't old ..
she's still young ♡
tsunade is so strong ..
because ..
she is the hokage of course ♡

sakura poem

Sakura is the flower ..
She's so beautiful ..♡
Sakura loved sasuke ..
sasuke loved her back ♡
Sakura is every boys dream .
Sasuke is shy to admit ..
that sakura is his true love♡
Sakura defeated sasori.
sasori cried so loudly.
Sakura is from haruno ..
she's so strong ♡
she will unlock slug sage mode ..
and she will save ninja world . ♡

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what do you think of my poems <3

 

[God Of Destruction]

Nice work :flowers

 

[Kyuurama]

They need lots of improvement. Lots.

 

[Lady Tsunade Sama]

Nice work :flowers

thanks :hug:

 

[Lady Tsunade Sama]

They need lots of improvement. Lots.

why are u saying that ?

 

[The Amazing Spider Man]

This was an amazing poem! Brava! =D

 

[Zanithe]

... These poems lack what poems have... At least try making it rhyme so it sounds better. Seriously, I see no rhythm while reading it. #-#

 

[sv121]

I think u did a gud job.

 

[Kyuurama]

why are u saying that ?

You could start by improving each stanza by giving them the same amount of lines, or make it patterned such as 2, 4, 2, 4. Another thing you could improve on is choice of words, generally having a pattern with syllables too gives the poem better flow.

 

[Lady Tsunade Sama]

This shit is so bad, doesn't even rhyme and has no truth or meaning to it. Sasuke never loved Sakura back wtf? Also tsunade can break rib cage susanoo that's not as good as you think it is.

here another poem for you

sasuke loves sakura but he's shy to admit ..
tsunade broke sasunoo with single hit , ohhh yeaah

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[Conspirator.]

OT: Your poem is crap. In your last thread, you confirmed that your mathematical skills are shit with the whole "90 percent correct" thing. And now you have confirmed that from a literary standpoint, you stink as well. Thanks for the laughs!

 

[Lady Tsunade Sama]

You could start by improving each stanza by giving them the same amount of lines, or make it patterned such as 2, 4, 2, 4. Another thing you could improve on is choice of words, generally having a pattern with syllables too gives the poem better flow.
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but my mom told me that my poem was nice and she really love it

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Sakura is uselful
Lady Tsunade is too

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i fixed it for you :hug: kisses :glomp^^

I think u did a gud job.

thanks <3

... These poems lack what poems have... At least try making it rhyme so it sounds better. Seriously, I see no rhythm while reading it. #-#

but i made good rhyme on it , please read it slowly

This was an amazing poem! Brava! =D

thanks <3<3 kisses <3

 

[The almighty itachi]

The Sakura poem made me laugh because you said that sasuke loves her back
Well I think if you seen the latest manga chapter you would know that's never going to happen

 

[Gary777]

Y d hell no rhymes r poetic effects ??? U could have made it better

 

[Legitimate]

Why do you always keep hoping that the members here slept well last night?

 

[senjusana]

U need to improve a lot.

 

[Gary777]

Ur mom loves u thats y she say its good she too knows sakura is useless ... Sasuke stomped that debate of almighty sakura ...
On topic . More rhymes more stars

 

[Ame Konan]

omg i laughed so much so so so much ahhahahahahahhaha