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Thank you for forgiving me…[/CENTER]

Name: Sakumo Hatake
Nickname: Konoha's White Fang
Gender: Male
Age: about 30
Clan: N/A

Looks: Sakumo's appearance has regularly been compared to that of Kakashi, often when Kakashi is mistaken for his father. Like his son, he possessed the same silver-coloured spiky hair with the addition of a long ponytail similar to Jiraiya's, and a mess of hair on his head hanging over his forehead protector. His facial features were more distinguished compared to Kakashi's visible ones. He wore a standard Konohagakure-nin uniform complete with a flak jacket, with the addition of distinctive short white sleeves over his shirt's ones, with red jagged edges and the standard crest of Uzushiogakure, and a belt worn diagonally over his right shoulder to which he attached his White Light Chakra Sabre.

Personality: Sakumo was a very kind and loyal man. Despite his tremendous fame and power as a ninja, he was a very humble man, which made his only son Kakashi truly look up to and idolise him. He had a deep devotion to Konoha and an even greater commitment to his allies and loved ones to the point he would put their well-being before anything else; his commitment was so great that he would sacrifice the completion of a mission in order to save his team-mates, which led to him being a public figure of hate and ridicule.[/border]
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance:

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: None
Elements: Raiton(needs training)
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
History
Sakumo was a famous and powerful ninja of Konohagakure who, during his early life, had the same level of respect as the Sannin up until he was dishonored for failing a mission. His son, Kakashi, idolised him and sought to become just as great a ninja as his father; his wife had died when Kakashi was very young. Sometime during a war, Sakumo killed Sasori's parents, earning Chiyo's hatred. Five years before the events of the Kakashi Gaiden, Sakumo and his team were sent on a mission of great importance to Konoha. When his team-mates' lives were endangered, Sakumo chose to abandon the mission in order to save them. The impact of the mission's failure caused Sakumo to be vilified by the Land of Fire, the villagers of Konoha, and even those he had saved.​
Other.
White Light Chakra Sabre: The White Light Chakra Sabre is a tantō that originally belonged to Sakumo Hatake. It is a straight-bladed tantō with a small circular hand guard. It gives off a white streak of chakra when it was swung, earning Sakumo his title of "Konoha's White Fang".
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Daddy? o.o

On topic: It's alright I've seen better but it's okay. You might want to look at a few examples from the approved bio section. This one doesn't seem to have a style to it size change and color change doesn't always look that good.The spacing isn't good either you should add spaces after the colons so it looks like Name: Sakumo Hatake. Also Hatake isn't a clan it's just a surname so you should remove that.

Edit: Don't say that your bio is dead take that out. Basically you are trying to get a corpse approved. You said your bio committed suicide and even saw his son in the after life O_O
 
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On topic: It's alright I've seen better but it's okay. You might want to look at a few examples from the approved bio section. This one doesn't seem to have a style to it size change and color change doesn't always look that good.The spacing isn't good either you should add spaces after the colons so it looks like Name: Sakumo Hatake. Also Hatake isn't a clan it's just a surname so you should remove that.

Edit: Don't say that your bio is dead take that out. Basically you are trying to get a corpse approved. You said your bio committed suicide and even saw his son in the after life O_O
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Thank you for forgiving me…

Name: Sakumo Hatake
Nickname: Konoha's White Fang
Gender: Male
Age: about 30
Clan: N/A

Looks: Sakumo's appearance has regularly been compared to that of Kakashi, often when Kakashi is mistaken for his father. Like his son, he possessed the same silver-coloured spiky hair with the addition of a long ponytail similar to Jiraiya's, and a mess of hair on his head hanging over his forehead protector. His facial features were more distinguished compared to Kakashi's visible ones. He wore a standard Konohagakure-nin uniform complete with a flak jacket, with the addition of distinctive short white sleeves over his shirt's ones, with red jagged edges and the standard crest of Uzushiogakure, and a belt worn diagonally over his right shoulder to which he attached his White Light Chakra Sabre.

Personality: Sakumo was a very kind and loyal man. Despite his tremendous fame and power as a ninja, he was a very humble man, which made his only son Kakashi truly look up to and idolise him. He had a deep devotion to Konoha and an even greater commitment to his allies and loved ones to the point he would put their well-being before anything else; his commitment was so great that he would sacrifice the completion of a mission in order to save his team-mates, which led to him being a public figure of hate and ridicule.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance:

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: None
Elements: Raiton(needs training)
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
History
Sakumo was a famous and powerful ninja of Konohagakure who, during his early life, had the same level of respect as the Sannin up until he was dishonored for failing a mission. His son, Kakashi, idolised him and sought to become just as great a ninja as his father; his wife had died when Kakashi was very young. Sometime during a war, Sakumo killed Sasori's parents, earning Chiyo's hatred. Five years before the events of the Kakashi Gaiden, Sakumo and his team were sent on a mission of great importance to Konoha. When his team-mates' lives were endangered, Sakumo chose to abandon the mission in order to save them. The impact of the mission's failure caused Sakumo to be vilified by the Land of Fire, the villagers of Konoha, and even those he had saved.​
Other.
White Light Chakra Sabre: The White Light Chakra Sabre is a tantō that originally belonged to Sakumo Hatake. It is a straight-bladed tantō with a small circular hand guard. It gives off a white streak of chakra when it was swung, earning Sakumo his title of "Konoha's White Fang".
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Thank you for forgiving me…

Name: Sakumo Hatake
Nickname: Konoha's White Fang
Gender: Male
Age: about 30
Clan: N/A

Looks: Sakumo's appearance has regularly been compared to that of Kakashi, often when Kakashi is mistaken for his father. Like his son, he possessed the same silver-coloured spiky hair with the addition of a long ponytail similar to Jiraiya's, and a mess of hair on his head hanging over his forehead protector. His facial features were more distinguished compared to Kakashi's visible ones. He wore a standard Konohagakure-nin uniform complete with a flak jacket, with the addition of distinctive short white sleeves over his shirt's ones, with red jagged edges and the standard crest of Uzushiogakure, and a belt worn diagonally over his right shoulder to which he attached his White Light Chakra Sabre.

Personality: Sakumo was a very kind and loyal man. Despite his tremendous fame and power as a ninja, he was a very humble man, which made his only son Kakashi truly look up to and idolise him. He had a deep devotion to Konoha and an even greater commitment to his allies and loved ones to the point he would put their well-being before anything else; his commitment was so great that he would sacrifice the completion of a mission in order to save his team-mates, which led to him being a public figure of hate and ridicule.
Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance:

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: None
Elements: Raiton(needs training)
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
History
Sakumo was a famous and powerful ninja of Konohagakure who, during his early life, had the same level of respect as the Sannin up until he was dishonored for failing a mission. His son, Kakashi, idolised him and sought to become just as great a ninja as his father; his wife had died when Kakashi was very young. Sometime during a war, Sakumo killed Sasori's parents, earning Chiyo's hatred. Five years before the events of the Kakashi Gaiden, Sakumo and his team were sent on a mission of great importance to Konoha. When his team-mates' lives were endangered, Sakumo chose to abandon the mission in order to save them. The impact of the mission's failure caused Sakumo to be vilified by the Land of Fire, the villagers of Konoha, and even those he had saved.​
Other.
White Light Chakra Sabre: The White Light Chakra Sabre is a tantō that originally belonged to Sakumo Hatake. It is a straight-bladed tantō with a small circular hand guard. It gives off a white streak of chakra when it was swung, earning Sakumo his title of "Konoha's White Fang".
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[B][I]Thank you for forgiving me…[/I][/B][/CENTER]

[B][I]Name:[/I][/B] Sakumo Hatake
[B][I]Nickname:[/I][/B] Konoha's White Fang
[B][I]Gender:[/I][/B] Male
[B][I]Age:[/I][/B] about 30
[B][I]Clan:[/I][/B] N/A

[B][I]Looks:[/I][/B] Sakumo's appearance has regularly been compared to that of Kakashi, often when Kakashi is mistaken for his father. Like his son, he possessed the same silver-coloured spiky hair with the addition of a long ponytail similar to Jiraiya's, and a mess of hair on his head hanging over his forehead protector. His facial features were more distinguished compared to Kakashi's visible ones. He wore a standard Konohagakure-nin uniform complete with a flak jacket, with the addition of distinctive short white sleeves over his shirt's ones, with red jagged edges and the standard crest of Uzushiogakure, and a belt worn diagonally over his right shoulder to which he attached his White Light Chakra Sabre.

[B][I]Personality:[/I][/B] Sakumo was a very kind and loyal man. Despite his tremendous fame and power as a ninja, he was a very humble man, which made his only son Kakashi truly look up to and idolise him. He had a deep devotion to Konoha and an even greater commitment to his allies and loved ones to the point he would put their well-being before anything else; his commitment was so great that he would sacrifice the completion of a mission in order to save his team-mates, which led to him being a public figure of hate and ridicule.[/border][border="Village Info."][center][B][I]Village of Birth:[/I][/B] Konohagakure
[B][I]Village of Alliance:[/I][/B]

[B][I]Rank//Chakra Info.[/I][/B]
[B][I]Ninja Rank:[/I][/B] Genin
[B][I]Specialty:[/I][/B] None
[B][I]Elements:[/I][/B] Raiton(needs training)
[B][I]Your ninjutsu:[/I][/B]
[SPOILER](Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink) 

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence. 

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. 

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns. 

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).[/SPOILER][/CENTER][/border][border="History"] [Indent]Sakumo was a famous and powerful ninja of Konohagakure who, during his early life, had the same level of respect as the Sannin up until he was dishonored for failing a mission. His son, Kakashi, idolised him and sought to become just as great a ninja as his father; his wife had died when Kakashi was very young. Sometime during a war, Sakumo killed Sasori's parents, earning Chiyo's hatred. Five years before the events of the Kakashi Gaiden, Sakumo and his team were sent on a mission of great importance to Konoha. When his team-mates' lives were endangered, Sakumo chose to abandon the mission in order to save them. The impact of the mission's failure caused Sakumo to be vilified by the Land of Fire, the villagers of Konoha, and even those he had saved.[/indent]
[/border][border="Other."][B][I][U]White Light Chakra Sabre[/U]:[/I][/B] The White Light Chakra Sabre is a tantō that originally belonged to Sakumo Hatake. It is a straight-bladed tantō with a small circular hand guard. It gives off a white streak of chakra when it was swung, earning Sakumo his title of "Konoha's White Fang".
[SPOILER][CENTER][IMG]http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg197/scaled.php?server=197&filename=sakumo.jpg&res=medium[/IMG][/CENTER][/SPOILER][/border][Border="Picture[s]"][SPOILER][CENTER][IMG]http://www.narutobase.net/forums/picture.php?albumid=9221&pictureid=116734[/IMG]
[IMG]http://www.narutobase.net/forums/picture.php?albumid=9221&pictureid=116732[/IMG][/CENTER][/SPOILER][/border][border="Theme Song and Background Music"][CENTER][YOUTUBE]otPxoVQiIGo[/YOUTUBE][/CENTER][/border][border="Battles"][B][I]Won:[/I][/B]
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