[CJ] Sage ish.

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( Senpo: Waikyoku Zennou no Sennin ) - Sage Mode: Torture of the Almighty Sage
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Using the same principle as "Ice Release: 1000 Needles of Death" the user would focus his natural energy all around his opponent. Once done, the user would materialize the the natural energy into hundreds of small sized needles which surrounds all directions and angles of the opponent. At the user's will, the needles would all attack the opponent at once, piercing him from all angles. It could also be done at several enemies, but the number and power of the needles would be split according to the number of enemies. The needles need to be created at least one meter away from any opponents.

-Uses 2 turns on SM
-Can't use SM technique higher than A-rank the same turn
-Can't use SM technique higher than S-rank the following turn
-Can only be used once per battle


This move is toooooooo epic bro, and i GOT YOU FOR SURE BRO ^^
 

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(Senpo: Ribaiasan no aryūru) Sage Art: Leviathan's Allure
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per round to sustain)
Damage: N/a
Description: Leviathan's Allure is a sage technique that uses natural energy to breath life into a natural existing source in a gaseous state, for example; mist, smoke, smog, etc., devoid of chakra. This allows the user to gain control over said source to a partial degree, triggered with a single hand seal, the source is then guided by the user's will in terms of control. Once activated, the user is able to shape near solid serpent like leviathans out of the source able to; clench on, restrain, or hinder the target without preventing damage to them. Likewise the user can use these leviathans himself for many supplementary reasons during battle, and once per activation, the user can shape a special red-eyed leviathan with an A ranked defense to be used until destroyed or the technique ends. All creations except for the red-eyed leviathan, whose creation costs an additional move, hold strengths divided amongst each other. The leviathans can only be created if the source allows, or in other words is big enough, and their dimensions must be relative to the size of the source as well; small sources make a single or small plethora of leviathans within 3m dimensions, medium sources within 8m, large supplies have no limit. Being that the source in control is in a gaseous state, wind techniques of equal rank can break constructs while dissipating the source making it ineffective. Once activated this jutsu lasts for three turns, or until the source is dispersed/countered.
NOTES
►Can be used 3x per battle
►Has a 2 turn cool down
►No jutsu above S rank while active
►User must know Sage Mode
►Can only be taught by ZandaT
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Well hello there!

A pretty cool technique, it would've been really cool had it had an offensive usage, but I don't think the Mods would've approved it. lol

No questions here, a pretty useful and straight forwards technique u-u But boy would it be awesome to have a version like this for other matter state, like liquids and solids. Maybe we should try this?

Edit: I have a question, if I use Pervy's technique that increases the rank by one, would the red-eyed leviathan defense rank up too or would it still stay A-rank?
 
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The snake version is solids already I think so that leaves only liquid, which I give you permission to create if you want to, if not ill get to it eventually >_>

Hmmmm, we would have to ask Pery on this because normally that boosting tech works around the basis of adding senjutsu to techniques that arent sage jutsu thus making them sage jutsu and boosting its rank. If you did use it on an already sage jutsu tho I THINK it would just add more power to the sage tech and boost its rank but I have to re-read the description just to make sure.

People be petty....... e.e
 

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I think I did hear about it, never really read what I can't use lmao. I am cool with either, I got my hands full this cycle, so if you won't submit it this cycle yourself, I guess I will do so next cycle. o-o

Wait lmao, I just remembered it doesn't work on sage techniques xD Well, another technique to make lol

Until next time then!
 

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I think I did hear about it, never really read what I can't use lmao. I am cool with either, I got my hands full this cycle, so if you won't submit it this cycle yourself, I guess I will do so next cycle. o-o

Wait lmao, I just remembered it doesn't work on sage techniques xD Well, another technique to make lol

Until next time then!
Bruuuuh, the techs you can't use is the ones you take inspiration from and rip, I mean recreate >_> lol

Trust me, just ask the kings of customs on here
 

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(Senpo: Ken Kata) Sage Art: Blade Kata
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/a
Damage: 60
Description: Ken Kata, based off of the fighting style created by the toads of Mt. Myoboku called Frog Kata, is quite similar to its sister field in terms of positioning and using an aura of natural energy that surrounds and encapsulates the user's body while they perform close quarter combat. The difference being, unlike Frog Katta which utilizes this natural energy to amplify their taijutsu prowess, Blade Kata utilizes the encapsulating natural energy around the user to amplify the prowess to sage mode users who use kenjutsu. The user can use this aura as an extension of their sword(s) giving them longer reach within their kenjutsu even if they do not directly connect with its target. Sword slashes/thrusts that appear to have missed actually strike using the aura sending the opponents flying as they deal with the blunt damage, albeit, at a lower extent compared to the stronger Frog Kata.
NOTES
►Can be used 2x per battle
►Has a two turn cool down
►Can only be taught by ZandaT
►Extends range by a maximum of one meter
►Reduces SM duration by two turns
Dah dub U_U
 
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