Sacrifice Ch. 1

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This Story takes place 60 years after the events of Naruto

Itago: I can’t believe he’s not here yet, he’s never late
Haskro: You worry too much Itago * munch munch * something probably just came up * munch munch *
Kentre: Haskro’s got a point, anyways, it’s getting pretty late, I doubt he’ll come now, lets call it a night.
Itago: The chunin exams are 2 days from now, how can Zakre sensei miss today’s training.
Kentre: Calm down, I’m sure whatever it is he’s doing, it’s more important than this

The Next Day…
Itago: He’s not here today either
Haskro: Maybe he went * munch munch * to get food
Itago: WILL YOU SHUTUP AND STOP EATING!!
Haskro: Sorry…. * munch munch *
Kentre: He probably went on a mission
Itago: 2 days before the chunin exams?
Kentre: Possibly, lets ask the hokage

Note: in this time the hokage was Jiraiya Uzumaki IV

Jiraiya: What is it?
Itago: Zakre sensei hasn’t showed up for training since yesterday
Jiraiya: Itago…
* Door opens *
Unknown: He…. He’s gone
Itago: TRONTER SENSEI!!
Tronter: Za… Zakre, he’s gone * falls *
Jiraiya: NO, they couldn’t have!

Moments later…
Jiraiya: There are some injuries, but he’ll survive
Haskro: Do you know what he was talking about?
Jiraiya: You see, for a decade we’ve been having conflicts with the Sand village. I sent the two highest ranked ninjas in the village, Zakre and Tronter, thats all I know.
Itago: What can we do now?
Jiraiya: Fight back
To Be Continued…

Sorry, it’s pretty short. Rep and feedback would be appreciated
 
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Try writing fanfics closer to the current time period.
Plus describe some o he characters appearances and if you are staying in that time period it wouldnt hurt to give a little more background info as to what happened in those 4 years.
Lastly, Jiraiya Uzumaki 4th.... really?
 
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