Sacrifice Ch.1

[Qureshi]

here is a fanfiction I created, hope u like it


Many years after Naruto's death.......

chew,chew,chew

Itago: Do you really have eat your food now?

Kepto: You worry too much Itago

Itago: I'm just thinking about Meko Sensei, he's never been late

Hakibi: I think we should just go home, It's been 2 hours, Meko sensei probably forgot about todays mission

Itago: Fine


The next day...


Itago: where is he?

Kepto: We should probably tell the hokage that he didn't show up

At the Hokage's office

Hokage: No I don't know where he is.

The door blasts opem!!

Meko: Ih... Itago

Itago: SENSEI!!

To be continued ...

 

[Qureshi]

I know the chapter is short and nothing happened but please stay tuned

 

[Urda]

Too short, not enough detail, bad character development, no plot. Overall, nice story and keep working on it.

 

[Joten Uchiha]

Too fast for my liking, add some more content.

 

[naruto1414]

good so far, but to short

 

[Qureshi]

Too short, not enough detail, bad character development, no plot. Overall, nice story and keep working on it.

I know but i had a little time

 

[Qureshi]

If it's really that bad i'll redo the chapter later

 

[Fusion Reborn]

Itago

 

[cmilius]

WTH