First ever fanfiction, tell me how I did! ^_^
*Naruto is walking towards Ichiraku Ramen*
NARUTO: Can't wait for the ramen! I'm gonna have... Extra egg and red soup! So many choices...
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*Naruto walks into the ramen shop and sits down*
TEUCHI: Ahh, Naruto! What can I help you with?
*Teuchi has just prepared more ramen, no waiting this time!*
NARUTO: One bowl of red miso soup with extra egg, please!
TEUCHI: One bowl, coming up! It's on the house, you don't need to pay.
NARUTO: Wow, thanks! I better eat quickly to go train again... Hehehe
TEUCHI: *That young man has a lot of determination, he's much like his father.*
*Teuchi smiles while Naruto slurps up the ramen*
NARUTO: Thanks again! I really appreciate it!
*Naruto rushes out to the training field... It is the next morning at Naruto's house, Sakura knocks on the door*
SAKURA: Naruto! Come out, Kakashi needs us!
*Sakura notices the door is unlocked, and opens it...*
SAKURA: *Oh my, what a pigsty you have here, Naruto...*
*Sakura notices Naruto is not wearing underpants*
SAKURA: NARUTOOOOO!
*Sakura punches Naruto and rushes out and puts her back against the wall...*
NARUTO: Oops, sorry Sakura! I must have been-
*Naruto blushes*
SAKURA: I dare you to finish that sentence, Naruto!
*Sakura is getting angry*
NARUTO: Never mind, Sakura... Let's set off already!
* Naruto puts his clothes on, and he and Sakura head off to the training field... Upon arriving, the meet Kakashi-sensei*
KAKASHI: Ahh, hello Naruto, Sakura.
NARUTO & SAKURA: Hey, sensei.
KAKASHI: Do you know why you are here today?
SAKURA: For a mission, I believe?
KAKASHI: Correct. We are going to be escorting a certain someone to the Hidden Cloud, and back.
NARUTO: "Certain someone?" Who?
*Kakashi scratches his head*
KAKASHI: That I do not know. We will find out when we go to the Hokage's mansion tomorrow morning to collect our mission. You are free to do what you wish until then. Note that this will be a S-ranked mission, so no goofing around, got it?
*Naruto and Sakura nod. Kakashi poofs away and Sakura walks back to the village, Naruto is staying behind to go train...*
*Naruto is walking towards Ichiraku Ramen*
NARUTO: Can't wait for the ramen! I'm gonna have... Extra egg and red soup! So many choices...
_@:*Naruto walks into the ramen shop and sits down*
TEUCHI: Ahh, Naruto! What can I help you with?
*Teuchi has just prepared more ramen, no waiting this time!*
NARUTO: One bowl of red miso soup with extra egg, please!
TEUCHI: One bowl, coming up! It's on the house, you don't need to pay.
NARUTO: Wow, thanks! I better eat quickly to go train again... Hehehe
TEUCHI: *That young man has a lot of determination, he's much like his father.*
*Teuchi smiles while Naruto slurps up the ramen*
NARUTO: Thanks again! I really appreciate it!
*Naruto rushes out to the training field... It is the next morning at Naruto's house, Sakura knocks on the door*
SAKURA: Naruto! Come out, Kakashi needs us!
*Sakura notices the door is unlocked, and opens it...*
SAKURA: *Oh my, what a pigsty you have here, Naruto...*
*Sakura notices Naruto is not wearing underpants*
SAKURA: NARUTOOOOO!
*Sakura punches Naruto and rushes out and puts her back against the wall...*
NARUTO: Oops, sorry Sakura! I must have been-
*Naruto blushes*
SAKURA: I dare you to finish that sentence, Naruto!
*Sakura is getting angry*
NARUTO: Never mind, Sakura... Let's set off already!
* Naruto puts his clothes on, and he and Sakura head off to the training field... Upon arriving, the meet Kakashi-sensei*
KAKASHI: Ahh, hello Naruto, Sakura.
NARUTO & SAKURA: Hey, sensei.
KAKASHI: Do you know why you are here today?
SAKURA: For a mission, I believe?
KAKASHI: Correct. We are going to be escorting a certain someone to the Hidden Cloud, and back.
NARUTO: "Certain someone?" Who?
*Kakashi scratches his head*
KAKASHI: That I do not know. We will find out when we go to the Hokage's mansion tomorrow morning to collect our mission. You are free to do what you wish until then. Note that this will be a S-ranked mission, so no goofing around, got it?
*Naruto and Sakura nod. Kakashi poofs away and Sakura walks back to the village, Naruto is staying behind to go train...*
