Rise Of the Ranmyaku, The Naruto Sequal Scroll 1 chapter 2

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[size=+1] Rise Of the Ranmyaku, The Naruto Sequal
Scroll 1: A new Beginning
Chapter 2: The Results
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Senjiito walked down the path toward his house…

Senjiito: [thinks] I hope I pass, the only thing is I wonder if dad had anything to do with it?

Senjiito heard a voice coming from behind him; he turns to see Shikari running up the path…

Shikari: Senjiito…
Shikari stops next to Senjiito and catches her breath; she stands up straight and looks at Senjiito…
Shikari: Ummm would you like to go to Ichiraku Ramen?

After a few moments Senjiito finally realised what Shikari was asking him

Senjiito: Oh sure… um… I’ll pay!

“Well well… look what we have here…”

Shikari and Senjiito both look up and see, to their distaste, Itarito on top of a building grinning at them…

Itarito: 2 little love birds going on a date, how touching

Senjiito: What do you want…

Senjiito looks around
… and where’s your mob of obsessed zombies?

Itarito: Oh there of on errands that I sent them on…

Itarito jumped down from the building…

so I thought I might catch up with my favorite couple…

Senjiito looks at Shikari…

Senjiito: [thinks] I do admit I do have a crush on Shikari but… [says]
umm I don’t think we’re a couple… a couple of friends maybe…


Itarito: Yeah wateva… I know I’ve passed the exam already… see ya around.

And with that he walks away, not once looking back…
Senjiito: So…… we still on for ramen…?
[size=+1]3 days later
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Since their encounter with Itarito, Shikari and Senjiito have seen less and less of each other out side of the academy… the only time they do spend together is when they sit next to each other in class or when they bump into each other checking their mail for the results. This was noticeable by everyone finally someone asked…

Senjiito: Dad... you wanted to see me?

Senjiito stood in the doorway of the Hokage’s Office…

Naruto: Ah yes come in and take a seat..

Senjiito walks over to a vacant seat and sits down…
I’m worried about you and Shikari’s friendship, you two seem to be spending little time together…

Senjiito: so? Why is that any of your business…

Naruto: because I am your father and me and your mother are worried about you…listen the post arrives tomorrow, I want you to go down and get your results but I also want you to wait for Shikari and have a talk with her… take her out for some ramen or something but please try… if not for me do it for your mother…

That last sentence struck home…

Senjiito: Alright father I will…

And with that Senjiito leaves the room. Walking toward his favorite hang out place he started to think how this situation had occurred, without even noticing where he was going he bumped into a tree and he realised where he was… he was at the training grounds and standing right in front of him was a ninja from the land of lightning.

Lightning Ninja: Well Well Well looki what we `ave `ere than.

[size=+1]The next Morning
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Shikari walked down the path alone, she was going to get her results from the exam, as she stopped at her box she noticed that Senjiito’s box still had his letter in it that was strange he had said that he would be here first thing in the morning… a voice cried out.

Unnamed Shinobi: Shikari come to the hospital right away, something terrible has happened to Senjiito!

Shikari couldn’t believe it, she grabbed her letter as well as Senjiito’s and raced to the hospital as fast as she could, in little under a minute she was at the hospital barging in the doors and went to the front desk
Shikari: Where is Senjiito? Which room?

Desk Operator: Uhhh he is in room 135…

Before the nurse could finish Shikari was down the hall racing through corridors until she found room 135, she stopped and slide open the door and there was Senjiito asleep in the bed, she studied the room and found that the Hokage was here.

Shikari:Lord Hokage, I… please forgive this intrusion

Naruto: You don’t need to be sorry Shikari we..

A faint sound cut of Naruto…
“Shikari…? Is that you?

Shikari looked over to the bed and he heart jumped as she saw Senjiito start to sit up, but as he did the blanket fell off of his chest showing cuts and burn marks.

Shikari:W…What happened to you?

Senjiito: That’s not hard to explain it was that ninja that came to us seeking refuge he was actually sent on a secret mission to assassinate my father. But never mind that, by any chance did you go by my letter box?

Shikari pulled out his letter…

Shikari:Of course, here you go.

Senjiito opened the letter and looked at the single word on the paper…. It said

[size=+2]Congratulations
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To be continued in Chapter 3: [size=+3]Odd Squad!
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note that this thread can also be used to dicuss what you liked about it any suggestions that i can have to improve the series etc...
 
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Whoa - my guess was right. :D


Itarito: 2 little love birds going on a date, how touching

Senjiito: What do you want…

Senjiito looks around
… and where’s your mob of obsessed zombies?
I especially like this part. You did well to capture the personalities of each clan..(though I'm still looking forward to the Nara one, xd) and I like Senjito's humor. Just like his father, :D
And...the perfect word: OBSESSED ZOMBIES. I love that, man, can't tell you how much it makes me laugh...the perfect the subitution for FanGirls, xd.
They irritate me too....-_-
Update soon!
 
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