Rise of the Ranmyaku, Chapter 5

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Rise of the Ranmyaku, Chapter 5
Comrades to Arms! Bonds Strengthen! And a Secret Power Unleashed!

Senjiito opens his eyes and looks up to see Saku…with a kunai blocking the sword…

Dante: And who might you be?

Saku: I am the son of the Noble Sannin Sakura Haruno, and “The Handsome Beast of the Village Hidden in the Leaves, Rock Lee”. I am “The Ferocious Beast of the Village Hidden in the Leaves, Saku Lee”!

Senjiito: (whispers to Saku) You always have to have a title don’t you?

Saku: (whispers back to Senjiito) Hypocrite!

Dante: “The Ferocious Beast”? That’s stupid… more like “The Lame Beast”
And if your anything like your father than you should take that Title. And if your friends with that idiot than you'll be glad to get your arse kicked! Hahahahaha...


As Dante finishes his laughing, Saku throws a fist into his gut and hits him back 5 meters...

Saku: (Angry) Your gonna pay for that! I can deal with you bad-mouthin me! and i can even tolerate you insulting my father to some degree but when you insulted my friend you crossed the LINE!!!! but hurting my best friend IS UNFORGIVABLE!!!!!! I'm gonna beat you to a pulp! I'm gonna tear you to shreds! I'M GONNA ANNIHILATE YOU!!!!!

Dante: (sarcastically) Ooooooooooo I'm shakin i'm shakin...

Saku: (thinks) This guy is dangerous, i can see it in his eyes... (says) If you really think that you can beat me...

Saku feels something sharp touch his neck...

Dante: O and by the way i don't think i can beat you...I know i can beat you!

Dante begins to slice Saku's neck only to find that he is cutting air...

Dante: (thinks) Where the hell did he go?

Saku: Do you really want to know? LEAF HURRICANE!!!!

Saku appears below Dante and causes him to fly further away from Senjiito...

Saku: I'm gonna go all out on you and to do that i must open THEM!!!

Senjiito: No don't! Remember the condition!

Saku: I remember the condition! "To protect and Maintain one's own Ninja Way!" and my ninja way is to protect my friend at any cost!

Saku crosses his arms and closes his eyes...

Dante: (thinks) Open? Condition? what in hell's name is he talking about?

Saku: (thinks) The 1st Gate: Gate of Opening...Open! The 2nd Gate: Gate of Rest...Open! The 3rd Gate: Gate of Life...Open!

Saku's hair begins to rise up as he opens the 3rd gate

Saku: (thinks) The 4th Gate: Gate of Pain...Open! The 5th Gate: Gate of Closing...Open!

Dante: (thinks) Oh no... this boy can open up the 8 inner gates!? This is gonna be more funner than i thought!

Saku: (says) 2 more and then we're finished here... The 6th Gate: Gate of Vision...Open! AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! The 7th Gate: Gate of.......Shock.....Open!

Dante: (thinks) What the Hell! He can open up 7 of the 8 gates and still keep his appearance? (says) What the hell are you?

Saku: I told you..."The Ferocious Beast of the Village Hidden in the Leaves"

Saku, at a speed no living human should ever be able to reach, appears before Dante and tries to punch him... Dante dodges the attack and kicks Saku in the face...

Dante: Your faster than i originally thought! No matter...

Saku: (thinks) He can keep up with my speed, this is very bad!

Saku races over to Dante and tries to kick him up for the Hidden Lotus but Dante stops him by catching Saku's foot...

Dante: If you want to inflict pain...

Dante kicks Saku in the private area, making him fly across the lake...

Dante: In the place that hurts the most and that is the most vulnarable!

Saku lands on the surface of the water 3 metres away from Senjiito...

Senjiito: No absolutely not! Don't you dare! If you open the 8th gate...you'll......you'll.......you'll DIE!!!!

Saku: You always point out the obvious, don't you! But i can't afford to lose now so i MUST!!!!

Senjiito: (rivers of tears pouring from his eyes) Please...I need you! Don't Leave ME!!!

Saku: (yells at the top of his lungs) THE 8TH GATE: GATE OF DEATH OPEN!!!!

For the first time in history someone has opened all 8 gates...

Dante: (thinks) The Idiot... his muscles are gonna tear him apart! huh what the...

Dante is kicked up into the air by Saku, who appears behind him...

Saku: I am not the only one who is going to die here!

Saku starts his ultimate High speed taijutsu. by using his speed and chakra control he punches Dante multiple times and continues to pound him...

Dante: (thinks) This has gone on long enough, if i want to win this i must use that jutsu!

Dante spins around and performs a series of hand signs...
Ushi, Saru, Tora, Inu, I, Tatsu, Mi!

Dante: Lightning Style:...

He appears behind Saku just as he was about to punch him...

Dante: Lighting Strike!

Dante strikes Saku in the back with such force that he creates a crator in the ground next to the lake... Dante lands in the centre of the lake and waits for the jutsu to complete itself...

Senjiito: (rivers of tears from his eyes) SAAKKKUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!

He runs over to Saku's cold body and cradles his head, looking up at the sky just as the lightning strikes them...

Dante turns around and begins to walk away, until he feels something hit his back and he realizes that it is his lightning jutsu...he feels cold as he senses a dark malice emanating from Senjiito...

Dante: (thinks) Wha.....What is this feeling of dread? (says) Is....is this the first time that a friend of yours has died? Hahahahaha such is the life of us shinobi...

Senjiito: Twice....

Dante: What is that meant to mean?

Senjiito stands and turns to face Dante, his head bowed...

Senjiito: This is the second time!

Dante: What that you have lost a friend?

Senjiito: (crying) That dreadful day, I made a vow...a vow that even to this day i am bound to...or so i thought, that day i lost a friend, my first friend EVER!!! Who even gave up his life so that i could go on!

Tears were falling from Senjiito's chin...

Dante: What good would a vow do? it's just words! and anyway only a **** would give up their life for someone of the likes of you!

Senjiito: THAT VOW WAS I WOULD NEVER LET MY FRIENDS DIE, THAT I WOULD PROTECT THEM EVEN IF IT COSTED ME MY LIFE...Saku HAD A DREAM THAT HE VOWED TO FULFILL BEFORE HE DIED!!! HE WANTED TO PROVE HIMSELF TO HIS MOTHER AND FATHER!!!!! AND MOST OF ALL HE WANTED TO PROVE HIMSELF TO ME!!!!

The ground around Senjiito begins to crack, rocks begin to float into the air... A strange red energy forms around Senjiito...

Dante: (thinks) What in the world is he?

Dante noticed that the red aura around Senjiito begins to form something monstrous and that the scratches and bruises had healed completely... The form of the aura had formed to look like an upright fox with 3 tails...

Senjiito: (Demonic) YOU ANNIHILATED SAKU'S DREAM AND NOW.....I'M GONNA ANNIHILATE YOU!!!!!!!! RAAAAAWWWWWWWRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!

Next Chapter: Battles End! "The Demon of the Hidden Leaves"! and Ninja Reborn!
 
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Oh snap !!! Foxy is here !!! o_O

I never thought that guy will die ... so I didnt expect fox coming out >.<

Cool chapter , Next time : "Dante gettin ass kicked " :D
 

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LoL! So, it's a NaruHina future AND SakuLee.... I was wondering who she'd hook up with since Sasuke got with Karin...

Good fight! I wonder if this means Naruto took the Fox out of himself and gave it to his son? Or is this perhaps some other tech or maybe another bijuu???
 
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