Rise of the Ranmyaku, Chapter 4

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Rise of the Ranmyaku
Chapter 4
Luvstruck! The Plot Thickens...

In a dark cave, somewhere in the middle of the 5 Great Shinobi Nation, 1 figure stands up in front of a line of 12 others...

???: Member 7 and 13 please come forth...

2 figures step up onto the alter that the leader was standing on...

???: Yes Mistress?

???: What do you require Mistress?

???: Devi...since you have joined the Ranmyaku you have succeeded in everything that you have been requested of...but as I have foretold you will die in the next mission...the thing is it is your favorite type... Assassination.

Devi: Mistress BiBi, i thank you for the kind gesture... and i will make sure that this mission is a....

Devi stops abruptly and coughs up blood...he wipes away blood from his chin...

Devi: Success...

???: Sin, when Devi's time comes, please perform that jutsu...

The other member bows her head...

Sin: I will do it just as you taught me BiBi

BiBi: Very well?Now Unleash HELL!!!!

Sin and Devi disappear in clouds of smoke?

500,000 meters from the Ranmyaku?s Hideout Sin and Devi were walking down a path?In the light of the outdoors you can see them clearly, they?re cloaks blowing in the wind. The cloaks were a deep black color with dark fluorescent blue flames on them.

Sin: I was unaware that BiBi had foretold your death?

Devi: It was quicker than I thought?She performed her ?Blood Style: Blood Future Jutsu? and she foretold my death? how does it work?

Sin: I don't know exactly...

Devi looks at the name and picture of the target that is in his hand...

Devi: Rei, the heir to the thrown of the Crescent Moon Island! This will be fun!

The 2 of them continue down the path and walk into the warm glow of the sunset...

Konoha, The following morning...

Makoto walks down the street with her squad and Rei and Zanji, they were heading for the village gate to meet up with Team Ryosku...

She had noticed that Itarito and Shikari had been acting strange ever since they had met the rain Gennin, Senjiito was the same except that he was a little moody. They reached the gate and saw 5 not 4 people waiting for them, as they got closer they saw that there was Team Ryosku and there was a leaf gennin awaiting their arrival...

Senjiito: Saku? What are you doing here?

Saku: I'm joining the mission...father and mother talked to lord Hokage and they let me come along...Oh and my dad said that you have to wear these...

He reveals 2 weights from behind his back...

Senjiito: Oh god please tell me Lee isn't serious! How heavy are they?

Saku: They are the same weight as mine... go on put them on!^^

Senjiito: Ummm Saku, the thing is i already have got weights on... and they are heavier than yours...

Saku: Ok that's fine...

the weights poof away...

He looks and sees that the rest of his squad had gone over to Team Ryosku...

Makoto: Alright now Sasuke is joining us and will be Leading Sorutso, Itarito and Katami, you 4 will be a team and i will go with Ryosku and Kyiotsu.

Senjiito: Yes Sensei!

Makoto: Ok go we will meet you at the designated rendezvous point i showed you yesterday...and Senjiito...take these and learn them...

She hands him 3 scrolls...

Saku: Where is the point?

Senjiito: It is the where the plains meet the desert... about a day from here... alright Zanji, Rei are you ready?

Rei: We are ready when you are!

Senjiito: Ok lets go...

They start they're long journey...

5, uneventful, hours later...

Senjiito: Ok we we are kinda behind schedule , let's rest here for a minu...

He stops

Senjiito: Saku 300 meters behind us, he don't look friendly! Take Rei and Zanji to the rendevous point, i'll hold him off!

Saku: Are you crazy!? you can't hold him off just by yourself!!

Senjiito: Saku GO! We don't know how many are here so it would be better if 1 of us stayed and fought them OFF!!! NOW GO!

Saku: NO! you can't take him by yourself!

Senjiito: Fine if you want me to come with you! SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!!!!

Senjiito makes 5 shadow clones...

Senjiito: Now go...i'll be fine...

The clones take hold of Rei and the other 2, running as fast as they can to make as much distance from each other as possible...

Saku: SENJIITOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The figure appears in front of Senjiito...

Unknown Ninja: So what is a meer Gennin gonna do against the Mighty Dante..? Hmm?

He punches Senjiito in the gut and as Senjiito floats in the air Dante does 1 mighty kick at Senjiito's side, kicking him through the forest that was next to them, pushing him into a forest side lake...

Senjiito hits the water with a great splash and bounces off the surface 18 times till coming to a stop on the surface of the water in the center of the lake..

Senjiito: (thinks) This guy is tough... he has one good kick... and he is fast...

Dante appears behind Senjiito and does a spiral kick at his legs taking them out from underneath him and then grabs his hair and yanks him toward him...

Dante: Your a fool... did you honestly think that you could stand a chance against me?

Senjiito coughs up blood...

Senjiito: Did you really think your attack through?

The clone that Senjiito had made and that had taken his place disappeared and from underneath the water Senjiito burst out of the water with a Resangan Uppercut at Dante's jaw...

Dante, at a speed that is beyond human capabilities, moves his head out of the way of Senjiito's attack and quickly grabs his arm and hold him while he kicks him in the gut, letting him go just as he striked him and letting him bounce off the surface yet again...

Senjiito chuckles....

Senjiito: Hahahahahahaha you have fallen for my trap!

He starts to perform his jutsu...just as from underneath the water chains burst out from underneath Dante and encircle him...a clone jumping out of the water with the chains from his sleeves...

Senjiito: Ushi, Saru, Inu, Tatsu, I, Uma, Mi, Tori, Hitsuji, Tori, Mi, Ne, Tori!!! Water Style: Tidal Wave Devastation!!!!
(yells) Prepare for one of my best jutsu!


The water pulses and begins to rise up...

Dante is bewildered at the extent of the jutsu...

Dante: (chuckles) You ignorant little brat! Using a jutsu of this size your clone will disappear in about 2 seconds...

2 seconds pass and the clone disappears in a cloud of smoke...

Dante: There see what did i tell you! You waste all of your chakra before the fight can get started!

Looks up with an evil look in his eye!

Dante: I thought i would get some enjoyment outta this fight but i guess i was wrong...

He appears behind Senjiito and kicks Senjiito in the spine forcing him upward he than appears above Senjiito in the air and grabs hold of his arms, and forcing him to face the ground that they are speeding toward...

Dante: Taijutsu Skill: FACE-DOWN BELLY DROP!!!!

and at the last second Dante jumps off of Senjiito's back and lets him perform the biggest Belly-flop in History...

Dante: Ouch...

He waits to see him float back to the surface, after a minute or two a hand bursts out of the water and Senjiito starts to pull himself out of the water...

Senjiito: If you think that i will be beaten that easily...you are mistaken! I am the son of The Lord Hokage and I can't be beaten by the likes of YOU!!!

Dante: Well if you want to die, I'll be happy to apply!

Senjiito: Come on then...make.....my.....day...

Dante runs at Senjiito and bringing out a sword that seemed to appear from nowhere, and swing at his head, Senjiito closes his eyes and waits for his fate and then he heard the familiar clash of metal against metal...

Next chapter- Comrades to Arms! Bonds Strengthen and a Secret Power Unleashed!
 

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Great, again! I like how you described the effect of Dante's sidekick on Senjito, skipping across the water. It reminded me, for some reason, of the fight between Naruto and Sasuke at the Valley of the End.
 

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excellent. All the details are well portrayed...
Looking forward to the next one...=D and GL in the contest...(I'll vote 4 u...I plan to participate too...XD)
 

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O_O
I have 2 of them........The Stalker Thread..(for a group.)
And there's this other one called "That Precious Book" <-Ima enter this one once I'm done with the third chapter...
I'm a pure Naruto FanFic writer...(thus, Ive past 100k in words on FanFiction.net...) and so all my characters are pure Naruto...O_O
But I think my stories suck...but hey, it does with encouragament...:D
 
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