Rise of Tengen: Chapter 8

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(Hey guys, finally caught up with the bleach anime, so I can begin to devote myself to writing again! One Zenkutsu wraps up I am thinking of doing a Bleach FF featuring original Kuchiki characters from early in the history of the soul Society. I will do it to guage how my fans like it. Also still considering Naruto's eyes Part 2. I have an idea and I think it could work. For new readers and regulars, you may find a link to my regularly updated fanfiction list in my signiture below.)

Chapter 8: Heavenly subjugation

I felt the first sharp impalement in my lower stomach. The pain was excrutiating as I was not prepared for it. I almost lost my focus, but I kept my composure.

"Not bad you ugly eyed peasant. Not many have the will power to take a dagger to the gut and not even wince. Your endurance is like that of a samurai. But don't worry, I have all night. Even gods can break with enough pain," the warlord said as he walked around me. Then, three sudden bursts of pain erupted from my side as the fiend stabbed my kidney region in quick sessesion. I tightened my fist and held my ground. The man continued to circle me, comming to look me in the face before gashing my forhead, letting the blood cascade down my face and into my eyes. The scarlet liquid burned my eyes. However, this sensation inspired me. As the figure moved around me I began to work slowly. Using my pinky finger to pull on a small invisible thread sticking down my sleve, pulling it slightly. When the man made his way around I stopped and took his comming attacks then continued on my thread.

After about twenty minutes, the thread was pulled a considerable distance. I felt the bloody blade once again slide into a wound it created in my body. Uzima looked at me, her eyes watery and her expression full of grief for me. The man walked in front of me just as I pulled the string just enough to get my prize. A small ceramic ball fell into my hand. I crushed it in my hand, feeling it's powdery substance excape into the creases of my palm. I waited until the man was well behind me, the furthest distance between him and Uzima. Just as he prepared his final attack, I turned, opening my hand as the cloud of red dust flew into the man's eyes. He screamed in agony as he blinked his eyes. The glass and chili powder that entered his eyes, cutting and burning with every movement of his eyelids. The man fell to his knees as his eyes bled and he moaned. I ran to Uzima, picking her up and running out of the room with her. I sped down the hallway as fast as my aching body could muster, but as expected, the screaming of the commander awoke the guards downstairs. I heard the tremor of footsteps comming for me.

"Tengen!" Uzima cried in my arms.

"I'm sorry Uzima, but you are not going to want to see this," I said as I applied preasure on a point on her neck, her unconcious body fell limp in my arms. The army of grogy guards sped towards me. "Raido (way of lightning)," I exclaimed, holding my free arm forward. A surge of lightning arked through the halls, felling the 30 armed men. I ran to the wall in front of me. I knew it faced the front gate. My only way out. "Kazedo (way of wind)!" I yelled as a blast of wind was released from my pressed together lips. A hurricane was born in the hall, destroying the entire wall, opening a path to freedom. I moved to the opening, I looked down. Several soldiers stood at the bottom, firing flaming arrows that barelly grazed my long red hair. I looked to my immediate left. A large wall was nearby. I never used chakra to jump while carrying something as heavy as another person, but I was out of option. I planted my feet and with incredible force, launched Uzima and myself across to the wall, barely making the edge.

The soldiers looked up in amayzement of my superhuman abilities, but I didn't have time to impress them. I ran along the rooftops, avoiding the jumps as I felt my chakra deplinish. Though only theories, I assume that if I run out of chakra, my superhuman body wont be able to survive, and I will assuradly die. I must prevent my chakra from running out, unfortunatly though, I havn't mastered chakra yet. Just these superhuman feets along with Raido and Kazedo one after the other has left me almost drained. I just have to get away.

I made it over the gate and over the outer-most wall as I scrambled to get to the forrest and go into hiding until my chakra recovers. Alas, my plan would not work. As I landed I lost footing and fell down. As I struggled to stand from my wounds and loss of chakra. The roar of footsteps approached. I looked up in horror to see myself surrounded by an army, which aimed all of it's arrows at me. The bloody eyed commander, sitting upon his horse was well above his troops and was looking at me.

"Don't even allow a strand of hair to remain of them," the man ordered in a low moan. I felt a strange feeling. My body felt different. A dark aura flowed through me. The malefic chakra of the Juubi flowed through my veins. The streangth revitalized me. My wounds began to heal. It's chakra became my own. To think this is only a strand of hair from the tip of it's tail. And it has all this power. But as I stood and the dark aura surrounded me, I felt the animalistic instinct begin to take over. The soldiers stood back in fear. I struggled to maintain self control.

"Demon! Witch! Kill it!" the soldiers called out in terror as a cloak of black chakra surrounded me and a tail of pure black chakra emitted from my back. As if from instict the men fired, and without my command the chakra acted on it's own, flailing out and destroying the arrows in mid air and killing their firers. My body twisted, contorted and cracked in ways I never thought possible. I felt my body and mind turning into that of a beast. The uncontrollable power of the Juubi.

"It is consuming me!" I managed to scream as I felt the chakra strangling me. The remaining men looked on in horror and disgust. The chakra circled around me. I looked at the tail which raised in the air and aimed to slice the unconcious Uzima in half. I screamed as I tried to resist. Then everything went black...

I began to see myself in an unconscious state. I was in an out of body experience. I could like before see my chakra. My own chakra was insignificant from over use. The black chakra surrounded my body and was eating me away from the inside out. The only part of my body that was untouched, was my eyes. I saw my eyes, the solid purple eyes I was born with. I saw the black rings form as my body developed chakra. My eyes glowed with a strange, flame-like chakra that glowed in a bright green. The green chakra was soothing, calming, but at the same time, all powerful, almost god-like in nature. I watched in awe of the green flames, that emitted a light that caused the black chakra to receed and dimminish to nothing. I watched my body being filled with the green flames.

I woke up as the tail began to fall on Uzima. I opened my eyes wide. I held out my hands, and the black chakra was consumed, my body began to consume the demon chakra and turned it into human chakra. I felt the god-like green chakra surge through my body. The tail disipeared and the chakra of the Juubi completely disipeared. I felt a burning sensation. I felt the hair of the Juubi that was imbedded in my spine, burn away into dust and dissipear as the chakra I consumed from it instantly healed my wounds. My body glowed with a green aura. I was in full control.

The army had grown ten fold and charged at me from every angle. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. When I opened my eyes again, all I saw was white.
 

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Excellent chapter my friend....bravo!!!!
I loved reading this one....not only because of the story, but also because of the words you used to describe the situation :)
Truly awesome :)
 

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another great chapter! :ice:
i remember spending a whole afternoon reading 15 chapters of ur ff and i am doing it yet again! :lmao:

im moving on to your bleach ff! :overjoy:
 
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