[Approved] Rin Kuchiki

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Basic Information
Name: Rin Kuchiki
Nickname: Blue Devil
Age:17
Gender: Male
Clan: None

Appearance:* Rin exhibits a number of demon-like physical traits, such as his sharp-looking teeth, his slightly pointed ears, and his a black, fur tufted, long*elf-like ears, and his eyes turn bright blue, he wears a plain white shirt and blue jeans. He is often seen wearing a blue jacket.

Personality:Rin is a protective and supportive kind boy. He often support his friends and mostly encourage them and also helping them. At first time, Rin was seen to love to fight. He also wanted to surpass his brother one day.
He rains often as much as possible. He is well spoken doesn't care what people think.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konaha
Village Alliance: Akatuski

Rank//Chakra info.
Rank: Genin
Specialty: /
Elements: Fire *(need training)
Ninjutsu:

Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)*

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.*

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.*

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.*

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.*

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra

History: Rin is a 17 yr old boy. Born in konaha shunned for his demon resemblance. A year before oro put his eyes on sasuke his eyes were on rin. Oro took him under his wing taught Rin everything he knows. Him nd sasuke created a bond together knowing tht oro only wanted their bodies. They stuck together nd trained together. Pushing eachother farther nd farther. As of today no one knows Rins location it is said he trains in the mountains.
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Weapon: Rin carries the Angelic Sword. Thought to of fallen from the sky it shines with a heavenly glow as its master Rin wields it.
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Battles.
Win: 0
Loses: 0

~Approved~ He's not a demon, no demons =/ also no blue flames above your head
 
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The order is messed up.

All your ninjutsu E rank techniques go below "your ninjutsu"

Then history//background info. The appearance and personality is fine where it is. Last part should be the battles won/lost
 

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Your appearance and personality should be right underneath your clan broken down into it's own section. Though I suppose it COULD be approvalble like that as i've seen some get approved before.

Other than that, i'd add some pictures to it.
 

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Your appearance and personality should be right underneath your clan broken down into it's own section. Though I suppose it COULD be approvalble like that as i've seen some get approved before.

Other than that, i'd add some pictures to it.
Cool thank you for all your help :D

I think I finally have it right
 
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I changed it alittle bit I'd rather have an original character even though anyone can tell who he is he has a diff last name?? Nd whts wrong with the bio lol I thought It was good for my first one
 

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So this is the Rin Okumura you wanted to make?

I said to do him justice! T_T
I changed it alittle bit I'd rather have an original character even though anyone can tell who he is he has a diff last name?? Nd whts wrong with the bio lol I thought It was good for my first one
HIt me up on your next update and I'll help you make this bio look badass. ;)

Jeikobou-sama! :T_T:
 
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