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Much better ^^.

Ok, keep the mindset that you had for the last one with this, but instead of shooting out a bunch of senbon, shoot out one, long spear. So basically, you make the chidori, and then you simply extend the lightning. The sharpness isn't really what you have to worry about as Chidori is already sharp enough.

(Chidori Eisou) - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending blade
of lightning. Though unstated, this blade probably takes on Chidori's characteristics,
including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to
strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the
target to go numb from the electrical charge.

okay sensei

(Chidori Eisou) - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending blade
of lightning. Though unstated, this blade probably takes on Chidori's characteristics,
including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to
strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the
target to go numb from the electrical charge.

hmm theres a blade over there! >< okay *sends the chakra through the blade*
I think there's something wrong with your quotes. O_O

Well, you don't need an actual sword. Just shoot out lightning in the shape of a blade. A sharp, straight blade. All you really have to do is extend the chidori.

*stands 5 meters away from you*

This is about the distance that it usually extends to. Let's see if you can reach me.
 

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I think there's something wrong with your quotes. O_O

Well, you don't need an actual sword. Just shoot out lightning in the shape of a blade. A sharp, straight blade. All you really have to do is extend the chidori.

*stands 5 meters away from you*

This is about the distance that it usually extends to. Let's see if you can reach me.
Quotes...?.?

(Chidori Eisou) - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending blade
of lightning. Though unstated, this blade probably takes on Chidori's characteristics,
including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to
strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the
target to go numb from the electrical charge.

*Pushes the chidori from my hand towards you*
 

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Quotes...?.?

(Chidori Eisou) - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending blade
of lightning. Though unstated, this blade probably takes on Chidori's characteristics,
including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to
strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the
target to go numb from the electrical charge.

*Pushes the chidori from my hand towards you*
*the chidori gets about half way towards me*

Almost, simply a matter of putting more chakra into it to make sure it reaches me.
 

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*the chidori gets about half way towards me*

Almost, simply a matter of putting more chakra into it to make sure it reaches me.
ok

(Chidori Eisou) - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending blade
of lightning. Though unstated, this blade probably takes on Chidori's characteristics,
including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to
strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the
target to go numb from the electrical charge.

*adds more chakra to the jutsu*
 

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ok

(Chidori Eisou) - Thousand Birds Sharp Spear

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending blade
of lightning. Though unstated, this blade probably takes on Chidori's characteristics,
including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to
strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the
target to go numb from the electrical charge.

*adds more chakra to the jutsu*
*jumps up and over you as it's about to stab me*

*lands directly behind you*

Very well... This is probably the hardest A rank to learn since you've gotten used to basing everything else upon chidori.

Raiton: Rairyuu No Tatsumaki (Lightning Style: Lightning Dragon Tornado)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Lightning that covers the user and spun around there body till its shape like
a dragon of wind and lightning which doesnt need to hit the opponent directly to cause
damage. If it misses a bolt can leap from it and strike the opponent on the users order.

Focus lightning, and then allow it to spin around you like a ring of lightning. Then, when the lightning's spun around you enough, make a dragon form from the ring of lightning, and then make it come towards me. Remember to put a little excess chakra into this one in case I dodge.
 

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*jumps up and over you as it's about to stab me*

*lands directly behind you*

Very well... This is probably the hardest A rank to learn since you've gotten used to basing everything else upon chidori.

Raiton: Rairyuu No Tatsumaki (Lightning Style: Lightning Dragon Tornado)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Lightning that covers the user and spun around there body till its shape like
a dragon of wind and lightning which doesnt need to hit the opponent directly to cause
damage. If it misses a bolt can leap from it and strike the opponent on the users order.

Focus lightning, and then allow it to spin around you like a ring of lightning. Then, when the lightning's spun around you enough, make a dragon form from the ring of lightning, and then make it come towards me. Remember to put a little excess chakra into this one in case I dodge.
right *puts serious face on*

Raiton: Rairyuu No Tatsumaki (Lightning Style: Lightning Dragon Tornado)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Lightning that covers the user and spun around there body till its shape like
a dragon of wind and lightning which doesnt need to hit the opponent directly to cause
damage. If it misses a bolt can leap from it and strike the opponent on the users order.

*spins the lightning chakra around me while focusing more chakra into the jutsu as the rings spins round faster and faster* HYAH!!!
 

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right *puts serious face on*

Raiton: Rairyuu No Tatsumaki (Lightning Style: Lightning Dragon Tornado)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Lightning that covers the user and spun around there body till its shape like
a dragon of wind and lightning which doesnt need to hit the opponent directly to cause
damage. If it misses a bolt can leap from it and strike the opponent on the users order.

*spins the lightning chakra around me while focusing more chakra into the jutsu as the rings spins round faster and faster* HYAH!!!
*jumps out of the way*

*the lightning just passes me by and doesn't jump to me*

Hm... almost, add more chakra that almost makes a coat around the dragon so that it can jump out to me when I dodge.
 

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*jumps out of the way*

*the lightning just passes me by and doesn't jump to me*

Hm... almost, add more chakra that almost makes a coat around the dragon so that it can jump out to me when I dodge.
HYAHHHHH!!!!

Raiton: Rairyuu No Tatsumaki (Lightning Style: Lightning Dragon Tornado)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Lightning that covers the user and spun around there body till its shape like
a dragon of wind and lightning which doesnt need to hit the opponent directly to cause
damage. If it misses a bolt can leap from it and strike the opponent on the users order.

*bursts out with chakra creating a lightning dragon*
 

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HYAHHHHH!!!!

Raiton: Rairyuu No Tatsumaki (Lightning Style: Lightning Dragon Tornado)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Lightning that covers the user and spun around there body till its shape like
a dragon of wind and lightning which doesnt need to hit the opponent directly to cause
damage. If it misses a bolt can leap from it and strike the opponent on the users order.

*bursts out with chakra creating a lightning dragon*
*jumps high into the air*

*looks back to notice it following me*

*shoots out a blast of lightning equal to A rank, and both equally collide*

Very well. It jumped to me, and it was still quite strong.

Ready for S ranks?
 

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Alright, we're gonna go a bit out of order. As Raikiri is easier than Gian since you already did chidori and like 4 chidori based moves.

Raikiri (Lightning Blade)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A more concentrated version of Chidori.

Exactly like chidori, only add much more chakra than last time. So simply focus the lightning chakra in your hand, allow it to materialize into actual lightning, and try going through that tree over there.

*points to the tree behind you*
 

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Alright, we're gonna go a bit out of order. As Raikiri is easier than Gian since you already did chidori and like 4 chidori based moves.

Raikiri (Lightning Blade)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A more concentrated version of Chidori.

Exactly like chidori, only add much more chakra than last time. So simply focus the lightning chakra in your hand, allow it to materialize into actual lightning, and try going through that tree over there.

*points to the tree behind you*
*charges lightning chakra*

Raikiri (Lightning Blade)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A more concentrated version of Chidori.

*dashes towards the tree*
 

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*charges lightning chakra*

Raikiri (Lightning Blade)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A more concentrated version of Chidori.

*dashes towards the tree*
*as your using Raikiri I shoot fire into the sky*

*looks back at you and sees that you completely went through the tree*

Good job ^^. And we'll be using the fire I just used a little bit later, so don't worry about that for now.

Raiton: Gian (Lightning Style: False Darkness)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by
an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Focus lightning chakra in both of your palms, and then release it in one, quick blast, shooting those trees over there.
 

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*as your using Raikiri I shoot fire into the sky*

*looks back at you and sees that you completely went through the tree*

Good job ^^. And we'll be using the fire I just used a little bit later, so don't worry about that for now.

Raiton: Gian (Lightning Style: False Darkness)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by
an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Focus lightning chakra in both of your palms, and then release it in one, quick blast, shooting those trees over there.
Yes rikutoki ><
Raiton: Gian (Lightning Style: False Darkness)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by
an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

*builds chakra into my palms and releases at the trees*
 

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Yes rikutoki ><
Raiton: Gian (Lightning Style: False Darkness)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by
an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

*builds chakra into my palms and releases at the trees*
*lightning shoots the tree but the tree only has small burn marks on it and a small hole*

Make the lightning shots wider, and more powerful. Just add more chakra and remember to spread it evenly through both of the blasts.
 

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*lightning shoots the tree but the tree only has small burn marks on it and a small hole*

Make the lightning shots wider, and more powerful. Just add more chakra and remember to spread it evenly through both of the blasts.
Raiton: Gian (Lightning Style: False Darkness)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by
an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

*as i generate the chakra and release it, i spread it wider, towards the trees*
 

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Raiton: Gian (Lightning Style: False Darkness)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by
an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

*as i generate the chakra and release it, i spread it wider, towards the trees*
Better ^^.

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a
circular area destroying all thats in its way.

This is a little similar to Gian, make chidori and release it from your palm. Basically, you're sending the lightning from the chidori, into the air, and making it come back down as lightning bolts.
 

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Better ^^.

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a
circular area destroying all thats in its way.

This is a little similar to Gian, make chidori and release it from your palm. Basically, you're sending the lightning from the chidori, into the air, and making it come back down as lightning bolts.
Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a
circular area destroying all thats in its way.

*gathers chakra and sends a chidori into the air*
 

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Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a
circular area destroying all thats in its way.

*gathers chakra and sends a chidori into the air*
*the chidori goes into the sky, but doesn't come back down*

Hm... remember to make the chidori come back down to the ground, in the form of lightning bolts.
 

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*the chidori goes into the sky, but doesn't come back down*

Hm... remember to make the chidori come back down to the ground, in the form of lightning bolts.
right

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a
circular area destroying all thats in its way.

*gathers a large amount of chakra and thrusts it into the sky*
 
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