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well tell me what i did wrong and i make it better so i qickly gather up my sand then i send it up toward a tree or sumwhere then i trap it and crushing and then i rise my hands and i make send come from the sky on to the tree.



(Sabaku Rou) - Sand Prison
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge sphere of sand that traps the opponent in and then crushes them.

(Suna Arare no Jutsu) - Sand Hail Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Gaara gathers his sand into large clumps and then drops them from the sky on to his opponents
 

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well tell me what i did wrong and i make it better so i qickly gather up my sand then i send it up toward a tree or sumwhere then i trap it and crushing and then i rise my hands and i make send come from the sky on to the tree.



(Sabaku Rou) - Sand Prison
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge sphere of sand that traps the opponent in and then crushes them.

(Suna Arare no Jutsu) - Sand Hail Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Gaara gathers his sand into large clumps and then drops them from the sky on to his opponents
i don't see anything wrong with this. though, here is what i would do
i would use sand prison to completely cover the opponent, then i would use added weight rock to make it that much heavier. those two together would

1) boost the technique into s-rank
2) make it impossible to move, so the opponent can't move nor can they preform hand-seals.
3)since it is A-rank earth, the user can't use Exploding colliding shock wave to break free from the prison
 

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well tell me what i did wrong and i make it better so i qickly gather up my sand then i send it up toward a tree or sumwhere then i trap it and crushing and then i rise my hands and i make send come from the sky on to the tree.



(Sabaku Rou) - Sand Prison
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge sphere of sand that traps the opponent in and then crushes them.

(Suna Arare no Jutsu) - Sand Hail Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Gaara gathers his sand into large clumps and then drops them from the sky on to his opponents
well if yusuke ever went to shukaku while fighting you, you could just use

(Messaba Kusou) - Destroying Desert Burial
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A huge variation of Imperial Sand Burial that crushes with such force that it leaves behind only a giant crater.

which in essence kills the shukaku. since it is made out of sand, you can just have the sand crush itself which should kill yusuke xD
 

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yeah i no that but will u beat yesuke you got to take the test and thats not going to be easy for no body to do look while you thank im trying to get stronger but yesuke you a justu called moutain smash i did not know how to block his move or nun thats y i lost
 

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yeah i no that but will u beat yesuke you got to take the test and thats not going to be easy for no body to do look while you thank im trying to get stronger but yesuke you a justu called moutain smash i did not know how to block his move or nun thats y i lost
you could use


(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

to destroy one half of the mountain which shouldn't take long. since he has to put his sand on the ground to use, you could just use:

(Suna no Te) - Hands of Sand
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: Gaara will manipulate his chakra to create a hand or multiple hands made of sand t deal with a single opponent or multiple oppnents and binding the legs preventing them from moving.

(Sabaku Soso) - Sand Waterfall Funeral
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Once the opponent is already covered in sand, the user clenches his fist, making the sand compact itself, crushing the unfortunate target

to cause hands to sprout up and grab a hold of his hand and then crush his hand so he can't preform hand-seals anymore
 
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