[Romance] Regret

Waindo

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If I knew the last I saw you,
Was the last time that we would share.
I would have hugged you tighter
Showed you how much I care.

If I'd known the last we shared a laugh,
Was the last I'd see you smile;
I would have lingered longer
To sit and chat a while.

Allthough sunny days were endless,
Your road was soon to end.
I should've given more of me:
Be a better friend.

Sadly all that I have lost
Can never be retrieved.
Time I could have spent with you,
Before you had to leave.

It hurts to capture moments,
While loved ones still remain;
Than look back with a grieving heart
Filled with anguished pain.
 

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If I knew the last I saw you,
Was the last time that we would share.
I would have hugged you tighter
Showed you how much I care.

If I'd known the last we shared a laugh,
Was the last I'd see you smile;
I would have lingered longer
To sit and chat a while.

Allthough sunny days were endless,
Your road was soon to end.
I should've given more of me:
Be a better friend.

Sadly all that I have lost
Can never be retrieved.
Time I could have spent with you,

Before you had to leave.

It hurts to capture moments,
While loved ones still remain;
Than look back with a grieving heart
Filled with anguished pain.

I bolded the bard parts. The rest is nice I like it. I give it 8/10
 
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