Reborn Chapter 1

[~Deidara~]

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(I went through a “writer’s depression” and didn’t have time with AP work, and my youtube series, so I ended my Bloody Reconciliation. Here is my new, short fanfic from the soul, “Reborn”. This fanfic describes what I went through after my recent breakup)

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Chapter 1
Black Roses

Nathan pondered to himself as he stood in the wasteland in his mind.

Nathan: What is love? It’s deception. Inception. Pain. A chain. It grabs hold of you, and chokes you until you’re blue in the face, but you don’t know. It seduces, and tricks you into your doom. She didn’t care about me, she cared about my demise. It is a liar, a murder. It abandons you, and destroys your insides. It appears as a beautiful rose would. Then it stabs you with thorns, and turns into the blackest darkness. I need help. Help.

He walked forward into the abyss of his mind, and turned into a ferocious ocean.

Nathan: I am drowning, and dying. I feel terrified, but it’s too late to think of the value of my life. It’s meaningless.

Dead black roses littered the new walkway.

Nathan: If I stay like this, I’ll just keep walking on a path filled with black roses, black roses stabbing my living corpse. What am I? A cemetery filled with black roses.

 

[~Deidara~]

this is supposed to be short, and is about a recent breakup of mine. It describes my pain, and is more like a statement of philosophy than a story. If I were a singer, this would be my comeback album

 

[Train]

I haven't read your other stories, but your writing isn't bad, I liked his first thought/the first red paragraph.

 

[naruto kyuubi]

this thing clearly shows ur pain mate i dont knw wheather this is a story or not this is surely a nice piece of work

 

[Reborn]

this is supposed to be short, and is about a recent breakup of mine. It describes my pain, and is more like a statement of philosophy than a story. If I were a singer, this would be my comeback album

Damn, well I think you did a good job of describing your feelings

Pretty good...I mean bad (good writting and description, bad emotion if you were feeling that way).

 

[~Deidara~]

Thanks guys, and it's actually more venting than writing! My normal style is of actual paragraphs, and it's action-packed, and a Naruto adventure. This is more my new philosophy on life after that pain.