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To be completely honest. I have absolutely no clue about lighting, I'm guessing you need great precision and delicatesy. I want to learn lighting because of azula to be truthful. And I can imagine myself using lighting to its fullest potential.
 

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To be completely honest. I have absolutely no clue about lighting, I'm guessing you need great precision and delicatesy. I want to learn lighting because of azula to be truthful. And I can imagine myself using lighting to its fullest potential.
Go look up on the wikia and use that as a guide. It should explain to you what it is, and come back here and post it in your own words.
 
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Sorry for my ignorance lol. I was thinking real life lighting not naruto. xD

Lighting release is one of the 5 basic elements a shinobi can learn. it's superior to earth, and inferior to wind. Fire and lightning are neutral. Lighting can be enhanced by water, because it is a conductor (which will cause more damage). Lightning is stronger than doton because, it can travel through it and destroy it. It is inferior because wind is a natural insulator, it insulates the lighting. Lightning can be refined into a sharp weapon for you in battle lighting. It can also be used in multiple distances in fighting. You can use it in CQC (chidori) and you can use it in mid - long range. (Shape manipulation spikes) which sasuke showed or kirin. Lightning can also be very lethal. You can be paralyzed, cut in half/have limbs cut off/decapitation, or have a giant hole on your body. Lighting is an technique that can greatly help you on the battlefield.
 
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Well done.

I shall add a little more!

Lightning is a vicious and powerful element. In the Narutoverse, it is one of the fastest elements that exist. With lightning and electricity, the molecules in the element move at such a high velocity they are so powerful and hard to control and that instability is reflected upon in the in the use of the element. In Raiton techniques, there is always some level of discharge showing the lightning’s rebellious and difficult to control nature. The speed generated by lightning doesn't only increase its instability but it can also increase properties such as sharpness. The radip flow of molecules being condensed to vibrate at high frequencies and speed allow for applications on bladed weapons. Take Sasuke's use of lightning with his katana, or Ameyuri Ringo, one of the seven swordsmen of the mist with her blades, Kiba. Lighting is added to those blades which increases their ability to slice through almost anything like butter. Though this isn't the only practical use for lightning, there is also the properties of electrocution. The amount of electricity a lightning technique possesses can cause so much damage from paralyzing one's opponent to completely overloading their bodies with electricity and killing instantly. Some cases (as suspected with Kirin though never proven), the complete obliteration of one's opponent. Not only electrocution but heat. One generally thinks of Fire when the word heat is brought up, however why is that? Higher energy is generated when molecules move more rapidly. As mentioned before, those within lightning and electricity move at great speeds, thus allowing for burns to be generated with lightning release as well, however that's not commonly thought of.

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After I take the paper from my master, I go sit by a nearby stream. I begin to feel insecure about my training and start to give up. But I remember a great ninja will never give up no matter what. I begin to think about what master told me about lighting. It's weak against wind and strong against earth. I envision myself on the moon, where there is no wind but just earth. I start to drift off in state of complete calmness, But a rapid strike of lightning dashed through my mind, ending the calmness. Lighting isn't calm nor peaceful, it's the complete opposite wild and fierce. My heart is beating faster and faster and I start to sweat. I start to feel vibrations in my chakra. I feel a slight shock in my hands and I open my eyes. Master I did it, I crumbled the paper.
 

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Good, that is good. Correct on all fronts. Now.

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Cool.

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

Simple enough technique, just gather up your lighting chakra from there you will release it, in front of you. As small bolts of lighting that you will send towards my clone, very simple.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1.The justu is short to mid range. It has some range
  • 2. The justu will be effective against earth
  • 3. The justu is simple to use
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. The justu is inherently weak against wind
  • 2. This justu is a D rank, which means it can be countered easily by your opponent
  • 3. It lacks the power to do heavy damage, so I will have to use this wisely
How you would use it in battle: Like I said above, this justu is D rank (which means it can be countered easily). So I will have to use this technique at the right time. Even though this technique is a offensive justu it will be used as a defensive justu by me.

How you would counter it: A simple D rank wind style can easily counter this. Wind is stronger than lighting naturally.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): I would perform this at the right time defiantly. I will use this justu where it can used. I wouldn't just use this justu just to be using it, that will be just waisting my chakra. This type of justu can be used as a start up for me to follow up with a stronger justu. And if I was battling, I wouldn't use this against windstyle.




After I received this justu from master I start to mold my chakra. I start to remember my training from before. Ration is strong against earth and weak against wind. I envision myself on a open field with no wind to interrupt me.

I'm ready!​


Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.




*Lighting bolts hit the clone and it dispersed*

How's that master?
 
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You don't need to call me master, lol. :p

That was good, well done!

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

With this one, I want you to gather up a small amount of lighting chakra in your hand, whichever hand you want. That being done, I want you to slam your hand on the ground to release a surge of lighting, that will race across the ground and shock my clones feet, this technique isn't overly powerful, more used in conjunction with stronger attacks.
 

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I'll call you what I want master. :p


One/three advantages:
  • 1. This justu can be used against taijustu users, and it will be very effective despite its rank.
  • 2. The justu is close range. A lot people focus on range techniques more by nature. So if you don't have close range attacks you will be in a disadvantage against someone who primarily fights in close range.
  • 3. The justu can be used defensively and offensively. It also gives you a chance to land another attack while your opponent is in shock.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. The technique leaves you wide open for attacks since you will be bending down. (Which will limit your mobility in fight)
  • 2. This techniques has a short range. So you will have to get close or let them get close. But the fight might be over by then if you're waiting just to use this technique. Which won't even do tjat much damage.
  • 3. This technique is easily dodged by just jumping. It doesn't take that much to escape this.
How you would use it in battle: I would use this justu in corporation with Lighting Release Technique. I also defiantly wouldn't use this technique if my opponent wasn't close to me. This technique has to many weak points than strong points.

How you would counter it:Just simply jump. Or throw a kunai at him/her. You don't really need a justu to counter this.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): I will perform this technique in a close range fight only. Once I stun my opponent, it will give me the chance to attack them with a stronger justu.


I start to build up small amounts of my lighting chakra in my right hand. *slams my hand on the ground*

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.




*Clones disperse in agony* Come on master stop giving me these weak justus. U_U
 

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Alright then performing the technique. Explain how you form the technique, what you plan to do with the technique.

Something like this: "Castiel gathers up a small amount of lighting chakra in the palm of his left hand, from that he then slams it on the ground releasing a surge of lighting across the ground the lighting surge heads for the clones feet, shocking him."

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Simple enough technique, gather your lighting chakra in your hand then release it outright in the form of a wave of lighting bolts, do it however you want.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. The justu seems like a pretty reliable justu despite it ranks
  • 2. The justu also seems like a technique you can instantly do against someone
  • 3. You can also use this as a distraction. While your opponent is focusing on the bolts, you can send a surge of lighting through the ground stunning them
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. The justu doesn't seem to have many weaknesses. It's weak against wind
  • 2. The justu is limited to a short-mid range attack range
  • 3.It lacks a strong impact ability
How you would use it in battle: I would use this justu in conjuction with this
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.




How you would counter it: Any type of water wall or wind shield. This justu is stronger than the the techniques you gave me previously. But I would still use a substitution to escape it, if it was me.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): As my opponent rushes me I would quickly wave my hand at them creating bolts of lighting striking them head to toe. While they stand there getting I blasted by the bolts, I would send a surge of lighting through the ground immobilizing them.

I start to build up small amounts of my chakra in my right hand. (Rembering my training and the precision needed for it) I'm lighting itself!
Take this​
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.




*my hand is whipped through the air releasing bolts of lighting instantly striking your clones head to toe* Your clones are no match against my lighting. I will destroy all of them. :coffee:

Master are you satisfied?
 

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Great, you can stop calling me master now. >_> I feel weird.

Now it is C-rank time!

(Raiton: Raigeki) - Lightning Release: Electric Attack
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles.

In short this technique all you need to do is perform the seals, then send your lighting chakra to your hand, which one you want doesn't matter. From that you will release it from your hand in the form of an electric current that can hit more then one person at a time.
 

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Sorry for the late reply >_>


One/three advantages:
  • 1. It can travel incredible distances
  • 2. It can hit multiple people atmthe same time
  • 3. This rechnique is the perfect follow up dor the pervious Justus you gave me.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.Seals are required. It isn't a instant justu
  • 2. From the description you gave, this technique seems to be linear and lacks the ability to extend in different directions.
  • 3. It's weak against wind
How you would use it in battle: I would use technique more openly then I would with the previous ones. I will use it to make my opponent back up. Since I lack taijutu skills, I will be using this to keep them at a distance. It will be a blend of Defense/offense

How you would counter it: simply by jumping up or use substitution. Since this technique is linear, and lacks the element of suprise. I will just simply jump up out of its path or substitute. A lot of people don't like substitutions, but my logic is use as little chakra as you can to counter something.

How you perform it (with as much detail as you can) As my opponent tries to get near me, I'll quickly create the seals Tiger → Snake → Dog. A current of lighting stops their attempt to getting close. I will also use this technique in conjunction with

Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.




This is too easy *performs the seals Tier → Snake → Dog* Lighting chakra is traveling through my right hand. *Pushes my hand towards the clones*
Take this!​


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles. ]





Nathan sama you're so emotional. >_> Go to sleep
 
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Emotional, wait wut.

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Short-Long depending on the water technique)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 to a water technique when used in conjunction)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

A simple wave of lighting, can be used in two ways; either by using it as a surge to shock your intended target, and also get you out of low ranked genjutsu. Or a stream of lighting that can cut though no enhanced rock. This technique can also be used with a water technique to give you a added bonus damage.
 
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