Raiton with a new Senpai

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  • - As it is a whip in general, it will hurt, mah man, it hurts... And it can be used to scare the opponent, although in our RP "Scared" and "Pain" mean nothing as we all are somehow perfect Shinobi... -
Disadvantage

  • - The hand that is using the jutsu cannot use another jutsu, nor can you perform any handseals -
Defense

  • - Hurricane fist his fist —_O -
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I begin gathering my chakra into my right hand, i concentrate and move the Raiton Chakra into my palm, i see that your clone i on his knees, like a slave, so i whip his ass to kingdom come, the clone disperses.
 

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Well, in our RP, we don't want to make our characters mess up right? So for example...

*User A uses Genjutsu that blocks the Orifice using flies (actual CJ btw)*

*User B uses a jutsu to get him out of the Genjutsu, making his bio ignore the Genjutsu, which is impossible*

Ofcourse, if someone owns a Naruto Uzumaki bio, they have to "mess up"... And let's move on and get to A-Ranks xd
 

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*User B uses a jutsu to get him out of the Genjutsu, making his bio ignore the Genjutsu,

I'm sorry but that made no sense whatsoever >_>
How can you get out of a genjutsu and then ignore it at the same time?
And no rush to A ranks, we must first cover all the basics.
But yea, for perfect shinobi you mean that in our rp no one has any fear or whatever, not like the ninjas from the show or people in real life.
 

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I meant, if you were inside an illusion with flies flying in your throat, would you be able to (example) use Nagashi? No, but since we all are "Perfect Shinobi" then the flies wouldn't be a hindrance, therefore you would be able to use Nagashi to get out of the Genjutsu... Moving on U_U
 

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I meant, if you were inside an illusion with flies flying in your throat, would you be able to (example) use Nagashi? No, but since we all are "Perfect Shinobi" then the flies wouldn't be a hindrance, therefore you would be able to use Nagashi to get out of the Genjutsu... Moving on U_U
I'd rather not bring up genjutsu into this. It is the responsibility of your gen sensei (or if you don't it will be) to teach you stuff like that.

Now then, next jutsu.

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.



Simply concentrate on your raiton chakra and then place it all into whichever hand is dominant until it radiates and forms a stream of lighting attached to a bolt of lightning.



Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.



Concentrate your raiton chakra into your mouth. When you have sufficient amount I want you to form it into a multiple smaller spears and attack my clones.

*creates clones*
 

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  • - The lightning beast can tie opponents up with the bolt/leash of lightning, and shock them aswell
    It's a spear, shot from your mouth, basic enough -
Disadvantage

  • - Can't perform handseals with the hand "holding" the "leash"
    How big is the spear?-
Defense

  • - Well, i only see using Hurricane Fist or making a few Kage Bunshin to be a counter...
    As with the spear, if freefrom i would just sidestep, while if it wasn't freeform, i guess and equally-fast wind jutsu, or just use the exact same jutsu -
Description
I concentrate my raiton chakra in my right hand, and expel it constantly from my palm, i use Shape Manipulation to make a Wolf from the chakra expelled, the wolf is tied to a bolt of lightning on my right palm, the Wolf ties around three of the created clones, they get shocked and disperse.

I concentrate my Raiton chakra in my throat, i channell it into mah mouth as my cheeks beging glowing blue, i shoot out a large lightning spear from my mouth, it splits into multiple smaller ones that attack your clones, they get pierced, and disperse.
 

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It's fairly large, there is a picture of it above. Also it can reach all the way up to long range so yea it's pretty long *depends on how big your opponent makes it er how long I should say.*


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.


Create a shadow of yourself and infuse it with lightning chakra. When you have done that I want you to use a B rank or below lightning combo using the jutsus that we've learned on my clone.

*creates clone*

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.




Grab your sword and infuse it with your lightning chakra. I then want you to engage with my clone in a kenjutsu fight and win.

*creates clone*
 

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You're right that a shadow clone is superior to this lol, but that doesn't change the fact that you have to learn this so give me a serious reply lol.
 

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It's fairly large, there is a picture of it above. Also it can reach all the way up to long range so yea it's pretty long *depends on how big your opponent makes it er how long I should say.*


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.


Create a shadow of yourself and infuse it with lightning chakra. When you have done that I want you to use a B rank or below lightning combo using the jutsus that we've learned on my clone.

*creates clone*

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.




Grab your sword and infuse it with your lightning chakra. I then want you to engage with my clone in a kenjutsu fight and win.

*creates clone*

Advantage

  • - Well, it has none...
    A very useful jutsu, Kenjutsu is very powerful, and i wish to learn it soon ^^ -
Disadvantage

  • - Many :|
    Not many disadvantages, but i might be careful to be very detailed while using this, as if i state in a Fight that i sheathed it but didn't state where i cancelled it, the opponent can use this to his advantage -
Defense

  • - *Points at Kage Bunshin no Jutsu*
    Well, i guess an S-Rank Kenjutsu, or an A-Rank... Thingy.... -
Description
I focuse the shitty part of my Raiton chakra, and exert it infront of me and use shale manipulation to turn it into a humanoid handsome being, i order him to charge at your clone, my clone pulls out an scalpel and charges Raiton Chakra throughout it, and cuts that clones arm, then he keeps running and he stops, looks back, and shoots a long-range spear of lightning, the spear of lightning goes through your clones heart, both clones disperse.

I focuse and channell Raiton chakra into my Kusanagi no Tsurugi, then i see your clone charge at me with a normal katana, i charge at him aswell and put my sword near my right knee, holding it as if i wasn't holding a sword, as i nearly clash swords woth the clone, i activate my sharingan to see where it's going to strike, as i see that its going to strike directly at my neck, i clash swords with it, i quickly and swiftly pull out my sword from near my knee unto his sword, i cut staright through his Katana, and instead of cutting the clone, i lean go the right with my upper body, as the clone is focused on my upper body, he doesn't notice that my left foor is 5cm away from his right ear, i kick the clone with an almighty roundhouse kick, sending the clone flying unto a metal wall, where it collides with it, making it disperse (I LOVE TAIJUTSU!!)
 

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I have to say it's pointless and has a disadvantage of: Why would you even use it?
It has the same restrictions as a normal Kage Bunshin, correct?
Then it is very useless U__U
 

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(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.

Creates clone

(Raiton: Shuriken Seigyo no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Shuriken Control Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take out two large shuriken or Windmill Shuriken and channel their raiton chakra into them. They will then throw them at their target to pin them down and maintain a connection with the shuriken through a electrical cable that delivers a numbing shock to paralyse the target and restrict their movements.
Note: Numbing Effect lasts for one turn.

~Creates clone~
 

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  • - 1. i used this before, but without officially learning it, it was useless, and i was fighting against CP, and he still blocked it :|

    Seems epic, don't see it used much, but i think it fits in a fight for fun :) -
Disadvantage

  • - Well, since CP managed to block it, something is seriously wrong with this jutsu :|
    Well, it takes time to take out and unfold a Fuma Shuriken, and it can be blocked with another Fuma Shuriken -
Defense

  • - Plasma Ball i think can block this, and it is next ^^
    Another Fuma Shuriken can deflect this, it is still a tool afterall -
Description
*I perform the Ram Handseal, and afterwards, raise my hand up into the sky, i trigger an Electrical Discharge. It comes down on your clone, frying it completely... * Who wants Fried Clone :eek:!?

*I take out, and unfold, a Fuma Shuriken, i afterwards take out another one and do the same, unfold it, i channel my Raiton chakra into them, i throw it at the Clone, pinning it by it's clothes, then afterwards shock it by an Electrical Cable, frying i completely* More fried clone on the way ;o
 

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( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.

~Creates clone~


( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into mid air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.

~Creates clone~
 

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  • - Not many attacks in Raiton are Short ranged (Well, not the higher ranks), so i think it can adapt to many situations, such as Freefalling from a plane at 20,000 m per hour.

    I think i saw this in a movie before, so i completely understand it -
Disadvantage

  • - The range can be an advantage and a disadvantage most of the time, but it's more of a contra...

    It takes some time to work, the orb could be difused in the meantime -
Defense

  • - I would honestly try to use a C rank wind and out of the techniques range before i'm fried

    The orb could be blown away with a C-Rank wind (Such as Daitoppa/Great Wind Breakthrough) before it begins shooting -
Description
I concentrate my Raiton chakra, and channell it into both my hands, as i see you form the clone, i Concentrate and release a wave of Purplish Lightning frok my hands, it shocks the clone, and makes it disperse.

I focuse my Raiton chakra, and channell it into my hands, i slowly exert it while condensing it into an orb of lightning, i simply release it, it floats into the air, as i watch closely, squinting my eyes, the Orb begins glowing brighter for half a second, and begins shooting Lightning bolts that rain down on your clone, piercing it many times, and making it disperse.
 
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(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.


How and when would you use the jutsus above and give me some advantages and disadvantages that come about in using it in the way you described.
 
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