[Raiton Training] - ~Xtsukune~

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as the kunai approaches me i build more raiton chakra, and release static bolts in a constant stream up to 2 feet away, in an attempt to divert the kunai
I'm going to need you to massively improve your definitions :p

*The kunai stops when it makes contact*

On to the next jutsu:

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

What I want you to do is gather up a large amount of raiton in your hands and then slam your hands on the ground, sending a wave of lightning across the ground towards my clone's fight therefore shocking him to death.

*Creates a clone*
 

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i'm sorry man, theres just not much i could describe with that jutsu without repeating myself in redundant ways :shrug:

this jutsu however...

i concentrate and channel raiton chakra into my palms, as i bend down to slam my hands on the ground, i use shape manipulation and disperse the chakra from my palms into and across the ground as a small wave, this travels across to your clone electrocuting him on contact.

Advantage(s): this attack can stun or paralyse an opponent and break through D-C rank doton techniques, this also would be a great jutsu against someone using underground fish projection technique or hiding like a mole technique.

Disadvantage(s): large scale doton attacks wont be hindered, easily dodged as it runs along the ground, not a large attack radius.
 

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i'm sorry man, theres just not much i could describe with that jutsu without repeating myself in redundant ways :shrug:

this jutsu however...

i concentrate and channel raiton chakra into my palms, as i bend down to slam my hands on the ground, i use shape manipulation and disperse the chakra from my palms into and across the ground as a small wave, this travels across to your clone electrocuting him on contact.

Advantage(s): this attack can stun or paralyse an opponent and break through D-C rank doton techniques, this also would be a great jutsu against someone using underground fish projection technique or hiding like a mole technique.

Disadvantage(s): large scale doton attacks wont be hindered, easily dodged as it runs along the ground, not a large attack radius.
Your getting better and I understand xd

On to the next Jutsu:

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder[/B

Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.


What I want you to do is Gather a large amount of your raiton chakra and then expel it so that it is all around. Then once you have done that I want you the vibrate your raiton chakra rapidly and shape it into an electric field around you (The vibrations will create the electricity if you don't know how to create the electricity manually yet.)
 

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lol thank you xd

gathering my raiton chakra, i disperse it all throughout my body evenly making sure it outlines me, i release the raiton chakra as a pulse around myself covering the surrounding area, i then use shape manipulation and cause the pulse to vibrate rapidly creatina an electric pulse current that permeates tye area electrocuting your clone.

Advantage(s): this will stop/destroy C-D rank doton techniques, it is also very wide range attack which can hit multiple targets shocking and paralyzing them

Disadvantge(s): not all that powerful, large attacks of other elements are un-hindered, if the opponent uses a water jutsu in the development of the pulse i could electrocute myself.
 

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lol thank you xd

gathering my raiton chakra, i disperse it all throughout my body evenly making sure it outlines me, i release the raiton chakra as a pulse around myself covering the surrounding area, i then use shape manipulation and cause the pulse to vibrate rapidly creatina an electric pulse current that permeates tye area electrocuting your clone.

Advantage(s): this will stop/destroy C-D rank doton techniques, it is also very wide range attack which can hit multiple targets shocking and paralyzing them

Disadvantge(s): not all that powerful, large attacks of other elements are un-hindered, if the opponent uses a water jutsu in the development of the pulse i could electrocute myself.
Good good

Next:

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

So what you are going to do is basically the same thing that you just did, except that when it comes in contact with my clone i want you to rapidly increase the pressure in your raiton chakra, causing it to explode and blow the clone back towards mid range.

*Creates a clone that starts running towards you*
 

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ok, so were doing the A.A.C.T with the normal training.

once again i store up raiton chakra the separate it to all parts of my body evenly, i release it all at once creating a pulse that is vibrating rapidly as a field of electricity, just before the field touches your clone i use shape manipulation to condense the pulse pressurizing it a mass of electricity, which expodes on contact.

Advantage(s): this like the other jutsu has a large range, can stop/destroy D-C doton, this also however can knock somebody into the air leaving them vulnerable to another attack.

Disadvantage(s): isn't effective against larger elemental attacks, they can stop the jutsu quickly by simply disrupting the pulse wave, if water is used during the use of this, i could electrocute myself
 

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ok, so were doing the A.A.C.T with the normal training.

once again i store up raiton chakra the separate it to all parts of my body evenly, i release it all at once creating a pulse that is vibrating rapidly as a field of electricity, just before the field touches your clone i use shape manipulation to condense the pulse pressurizing it a mass of electricity, which expodes on contact.

Advantage(s): this like the other jutsu has a large range, can stop/destroy D-C doton, this also however can knock somebody into the air leaving them vulnerable to another attack.

Disadvantage(s): isn't effective against larger elemental attacks, they can stop the jutsu quickly by simply disrupting the pulse wave, if water is used during the use of this, i could electrocute myself
Actually it was always a part of the original Jutsu, not AACT :p

However Yes I will be including them in your training

Good job. Now what I would like you to do is gather up a large amount of your raiton chakra in your hands while preforming the handsigns that I am going to show you in a minute. Then after you preform the handseals you are going to release your chakra towards my clone in one burst. Once that burst is released I want you to shape it so that it hits my clone in the form of a wave of lightning bolts (Not the full on omega powerful ones xd)

*Shows you the handsigns and the creates a clone*
 

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ok lol

i use my sharingan and memorize the handseals, i then channel raiton chakra to my hands whilst doing the handseals, after finishing the last handseal i release the built up raiton chakra in my hands all at once, once fully released i use shape manipulation and shape the burst into a wave of moderately sized lightning bolts.

Advantage(s): a more offensive based jutsu that has a large reach, can paralyze opponents and since there are several bolts lined up it is harder to dodge.

Disadvantage(s): this requires several handseals, slowing down the time of attack, easy to stop as the bolts arent large.

is it released from my hands as bolts or does it travel as a wave of chakra then become bolts?
 

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ok lol

i use my sharingan and memorize the handseals, i then channel raiton chakra to my hands whilst doing the handseals, after finishing the last handseal i release the built up raiton chakra in my hands all at once, once fully released i use shape manipulation and shape the burst into a wave of moderately sized lightning bolts.

Advantage(s): a more offensive based jutsu that has a large reach, can paralyze opponents and since there are several bolts lined up it is harder to dodge.

Disadvantage(s): this requires several handseals, slowing down the time of attack, easy to stop as the bolts arent large.

is it released from my hands as bolts or does it travel as a wave of chakra then become bolts?
They are released from your hands as bolts

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Anyway you have now mastered D ranks. So I want you to make a 3 move combo both defending you from clones attack and attacking him with a nice combo out of what you have learned so far.

*Creates a clone that throws 3 kunai at you*
 

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i put my hands forward, palms outstretched, as the kunai get close to me i divert their path with small static bolts, once the kunai are deflected i release a wave of raiton chakra from my body, as it hits your clone the condensed wave is released knocking your clone into the air, i then take aim at his position as he falls and fire a wave of lightning bolts.
jutsu used:
(Raiton No Jutsu) - Lightning Technique
Rank: D
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.
 

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i put my hands forward, palms outstretched, as the kunai get close to me i divert their path with small static bolts, once the kunai are deflected i release a wave of raiton chakra from my body, as it hits your clone the condensed wave is released knocking your clone into the air, i then take aim at his position as he falls and fire a wave of lightning bolts.
jutsu used:
(Raiton No Jutsu) - Lightning Technique
Rank: D
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.
*My clones jumps backwards just as you release the field and then slides under the wave of bolts coming his way. He then throws another three kunai at you.*

Unless you use a lot of description, which should be pretty easy since you are using three jutsu, my clone will not let up xd
 

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*sigh* as the three new kunai fly at me i release a raiton chakra wave from me pushing the kunai in different directions, as i release the wave i throw five shuriken one above the clones current position one at his throats current position one at his chests current position and two one at each side stomachs current position (not on the stomach to the sides) i then release a wave of raiton along the ground and immediately after i release several bolts in a wave around your torso.
-(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.
-(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.
 

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sorry for double post, i typically post on my ps3 browser and i cant type all that much. (im using it now)

(Raiton No Jutsu) - Lightning Technique
Rank: D
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.
 

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It's okay

*My clone poofs away*

Good job, now you only need to master C B A and S rank xd

Next Jutsu:

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

*Shows you handsigns*

Okay, what you are going to do fro this jutsu is gather up a large amount of raiton chakra in your hands and then preform the handsigns that I just showed you. After that you are going to release the raiton charka from your hands towards that boulder right next to you. If you use enough power and do everything right the boulder should be ripped through completely.
 

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lol alright.

i perform the shown handseals quickly thereafter i channel raiton chakra into my palms, gathering it and compressing it in my palms, i hold my palms up towards the boulder and release it at it as a large wave, this wave hits the boulder and rips through it turning it to rubble.

Advantage(s): a powerful raiton blast able to rip through solid rock, up to B-rank and also therefore able to rip through flesh and bone. this jutsu would also paralyze them if hit by it even in the sligytest.

Disadvantage(s): though powerful it requires handseals and is also weak to D-rank fuuton. it also isnt long range.
 

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lol alright.

i perform the shown handseals quickly thereafter i channel raiton chakra into my palms, gathering it and compressing it in my palms, i hold my palms up towards the boulder and release it at it as a large wave, this wave hits the boulder and rips through it turning it to rubble.

Advantage(s): a powerful raiton blast able to rip through solid rock, up to B-rank and also therefore able to rip through flesh and bone. this jutsu would also paralyze them if hit by it even in the sligytest.

Disadvantage(s): though powerful it requires handseals and is also weak to D-rank fuuton. it also isnt long range.
*The boulder is left with a scratch*

Add more raiton chakra into it, even after you release it
 

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i perform the handseals shown, then i charge and channel more raiton chakra into my hands, steadily adding more to it, i release the wave of raiton into the air but continue adding chakra to it making it more powerful.
 

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i perform the handseals shown, then i charge and channel more raiton chakra into my hands, steadily adding more to it, i release the wave of raiton into the air but continue adding chakra to it making it more powerful.
I said it did not work so you would use more description not less xd

Good :p

Anyway I am going to post two Jutsu for you to make into a combo for a Christmas present =DD

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

What I want you to do is Gather a large amount of your raiton chakra and then expel it so that it is all around. Then once you have done that I want you the vibrate your raiton chakra rapidly and shape it into an electric field around you (The vibrations will create the electricity if you don't know how to create the electricity manually yet.) This will send my clone flying backwards. While he is flying backwards I want you to gather ration chakra above your palm. This will be achieved by constantly sending your raiton chakra towards the location above your hand. After you can see the raiton chakra then you will shape it into the sphere using chakra manipulation and send it flying towards my clones direction, making sure to keep a constant flow of raiton chakra going into the ball to stop it from disappearing.
 
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lol yay

i charge up my raiton chakra, letting it flow into the extremeties of my body, i then release it outward all around my body, the i use chakra manipulation causing the raiton chakra to vibrate at a high frequency, as this expands, pushing your clone backwards and into the air, whilst he is hit by the eletrical wave i put my palms up and channel raiton chakra into my fingertips, i then concentrate and release it into the air above my fingertips and use shape manipulation to change its form into a ball, i release the ball as a projectile and fire it towards your mid-air clone i constantly supply it with raiton chakra to keep its form.
 

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*Nothing happens*

You need to use more detail man :p

If me telling you what to do has more detail than your moves then that is bad

And sorry for not replying in a while.
 
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