[Raiton] - Kichiro Fujimoto

[Urda]

Alright. Let's get to it. ^^

 

[Detective L]

Cool,your last C rank.

Spoiler

( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm. The user will then slam their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.

Ok,so this is a pretty cool jutsu.By manipulating your Raiton chakra in your dominant hand (usually say which one),you generate electrical bolts of lightning around it.Then by slamming your palm onto the ground,you release those bolts around you up to 5 meters.It's a very useful but simple jutsu.

So since you don't like the template,you have to give me atleast 2 advantages and disadvantages of the jutsu,analyse it and then perform it please using as much detail as you can.If you have any questions,don't hesitate to ask.

 

[Urda]

Apologies for the late reply. I don't have my computer and I been busy. I'll try my best with my phone.

( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm

A basic Raiton technique which the chakra is converted into lightning and is generated to the forearm and extended to the palm of your dominate hand where it is manipulated to be discharge. After slamming their palm onto the ground, the electricity is released up to a 5 meter radius of the of the caster. The caster is able to stun or paralyze up to 5 meters if engage in close-combat. Any thing further from 5 meters is render ineffective. The Raiton technique is able to dismantle D-rank Doton techniques and can be fused with weapons to increase effects.

 

[Detective L]

Apologies for the late reply. I don't have my computer and I been busy. I'll try my best with my phone.

( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm

A basic Raiton technique which the chakra is converted into lightning and is generated to the forearm and extended to the palm of your dominate hand where it is manipulated to be discharge. After slamming their palm onto the ground, the electricity is released up to a 5 meter radius of the of the caster. The caster is able to stun or paralyze up to 5 meters if engage in close-combat. Any thing further from 5 meters is render ineffective. The Raiton technique is able to dismantle D-rank Doton techniques and can be fused with weapons to increase effects.

Hmm,analysis is alright and so is the advantages.What about disadvantages though? And seperate them from the analysis so I can clearly see it ^^

So just add disadvantages please.

 

[Urda]

One of the disadvantages were any thing above 5 meters is render ineffective. The technique is close-range which would be useful in close-counter combat. However, the concentration is placed on indirectly ands not direct. The caster has to place distance away from the target to prevent the technique of being interrupted.

 

[Shinta]

One of the disadvantages were any thing above 5 meters is render ineffective. The technique is close-range which would be useful in close-counter combat. However, the concentration is placed on indirectly ands not direct. The caster has to place distance away from the target to prevent the technique of being interrupted.

Re-word that, sounds like you are just typing for the sake of typing now O__O'

*Sensei goes back into lurk mode*

 

[Urda]

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