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*Melissa gathers her raiton chakra into her palms and thinks of a small electric surge. She runs up to a nearby tree and and swings both of her palms inward, ultimately releasing a combined wave of electricity, cutting and scorching the tree to a degree*

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Short-Long depending on the water technique)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 to a water technique when used in conjunction)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

How many hand seals does it have: None.
Advantages: Can hit multiple targets, goes up to long range and can move around obstacles which is awesome.
Disadvantages: Can get insulated with a greater wind attack.
How to defend against it: Going underground to avoid it's linear path or it can get canceled with a greater wind attack.
Image of the technique: Can't find any.



Took me forever to figure out the mac controls and the size of this miniscule keyboard so if anything is wrong, I apologize. I am not on my own computer. u.u
 

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looked at the application she was sent in order to meet up with a new student. "Melissa" was her name. This particular applicant had been asking her for training, and this was the first time she was meeting her in person.

Upon arriving at the training grounds, she could see a single girl who had caused ample destruction to the field. Reading the previous sensei's memo, Aigis noted where training was to be continued from. Taking a breath and steeling herself, she walked up to Melissa.

Something about her irked Aigis. She seemed like one of those punkish, rebellious types. Just looking at her instilled Aigis with a sense of anarchy, even. This contrasted with her own personality: ordered, strict, and perhaps even cold at times. This interesting dichotomy spoke a thousand words even before any words were spoken. At the very least, this would be an interesting training session...

Wearing her Mandalorian Armor under her Konoha shinobi attire, Aigis's neat and clean look was apparent as she stood up straight, looking at Melissa with a tall, proud posture. She spoke in a clipped, efficient, curt voice.

"Greetings, I am Aigis. I shall be taking your training from here."

"Let's get right down to business. For the next jutsu, I want you to mold your Lightning chakra through all your chakra points, and release it, creating a wild aura around you. Control it with shape manipulation to form something akin to the Fourth Raikage's lightning armor, except a weaker version."

"This jutsu can be used offensively and defensively. Tell me how. And also, the standard things like advantages and disadvantages. I want what is IMPORTANT. Don't say things simply to try and sound educated, because they're likely not, and simply filler."

"Ask questions if you have any."


Her demeanor was professional; even cool. Perhaps it would take some time before she would warm up to her student.

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.
 

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*Seeing her new teacher walk onto the field, Melissa takes off running towards her, ultimately falling and landing on her face but quickly gets up to brush herself off* "Hi! Nice to meet you! I am Melissa! Well... You might already know that from the look of those notes..." *She takes a peek at the notes and giggles. She was acting amazingly playful*

"Alright let's do this let's go go time hammer time!"

*Without further ado, Melissa molds her chakra to raiton chakra, thinking about a small lightning storm and squishes her hands together with her fingers intertwined*

"Ha!"

*The lightning slowly emits a blinding light and momentarily protected her by covering her entire body then dims and eventually goes away*

"How was that?" *She winked and gave the kunoichi a "thumbs up"*


Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.



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Strengths: Could easily be used in CQC to get the opponent off of you and it could defend against a lot of earth techniques as lightning breaks up earth in most cases. Also no seals.

Weaknesses: Not logical to use this with anything but close range, could get yourself fried by a water tech.
 
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Aigis watched as her student performed the technique with a relative simplicity. There was something almost... primal in the way Melissa moved. She acted as if through her instincts and nothing much more. But first impressions could be wrong...

"In the future, I expect a little more thought and effort. You performed adequately, but I expect better."

"In order to expedite your training, we shall perform two techniques per round. Show any form of incompetence and I shall perhaps ask you to repeat jutsu performance or even revert you back to a single one."


Aigis looked at her with a serious expression. She had that no-nonsense attitude. At the very least, she could acknowledge Melissa's eccentric behaviors. All students she taught were different; variety was perhaps the spice of life.

Beckoning Melissa to walk with her to a nearby cliff, Aigis performed the Snake → Upside down Tiger hand seals. Clapping her hands together after that, she pressed her open palms at the base of the cliff, sending a surge/wave of electricity upward, through the cliff's side. After a moment, the rocks started crumbling and breaking off, beginning to fall as a landslide to the side of Aigis and Melissa. It was quite sizable. When the rumbling stopped, part of the cliff had been broken off, and a bunch of debris lay off to the side.

"Do as I did, on that side of the cliff. This technique is highly dependent on location. As usual, provide a standard analysis afterwards, as well as creative uses and counters if an opponent were to use this technique on you."

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together when near a cliff , the user causes stone and rock to become dislodged and rain down on anyone below it by releasing a wave of electrical energy which weakens the rock and makes it fall as it crumbles. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

"Once you've completed that technique, I want you to mold lightning chakra and raise your hand in front of you. I like using my dominant hand. Your hand should glow yellow, and subsequently release lightning bolts in a horn shape. The nature of this technique allows it to spread outwards and attack multiple targets."

"Hit the ones I've set up."


There were a few targets set up in front of Melissa; in trees, on the ground, all mid range from her.

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword. It will begin glowing in a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shape of a horn that spread outwards, allowing it to attack multiple targets.
 

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*Melissa disliked Aigis' words as she mocked her in her thoughts* "Little more effort... BLAH BLAH BLAH... How Dare she? Are my tactics not enough!?"

*All Aigis could see was Melissa daydreaming, staring straight forward. After a moment, she snapped out of it and took out her scythe. She started to literally gnaw on the blade as she walked to the mountain as she followed Aigis. She watched her technique very closely and didn't much care for it. She wanted fireworks. Explosions! This is what caused her to open her big mouth*

"Explosions! When do we get to do those?" *She said with her mouth full of blade as her gums start to bleed from biting on the hard metal*

*Without further ado, she puts her scythe up and weaves the Snake and Upside down Tiger hand seals and slaps her palm onto the ground, releasing a very large amount of raiton chakra into the rock. After a few moments, the rocks starts to break off and emit tiny but very visible bolts of lightning*

"How was THAT? Do I meet your expectations now?! Hahahaha!.." *As she started to laugh, Melissa wasn't paying attention to wear the rocks were breaking off and falls down with a big bunch of them. Thinking extremely quickly, Melissa exerts chakra into her feet and pushes off of a big chunk of rock that was falling with her. She does this and then makes her way to the mountain in mid air. As she gains contact, due to her chakra, she sticks to the side. She runs up the side to once again meet Aigis on the top*

"Hue..."

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together when near a cliff , the user causes stone and rock to become dislodged and rain down on anyone below it by releasing a wave of electrical energy which weakens the rock and makes it fall as it crumbles. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.



Explanation (I'm going to do this in an RP form since you are RPing. So I'm just going to break down the usefulness and disadvantages all in one. If that's not cool, just tell me and I'll go back to the regular break down.) : "Alright... Well let's see here... I think other than looking cool, this jutsu is crap! If you are located near a mountain, it is very useful to try and crush or disable your opponent but it's very heavily location based... Not something you would get to use very often if at all..." *Melissa says this with a bored look. She wasn't at all impressed with the technique*

*Moving on, raises her right hand and channels raiton chakra into it. After this, her hand begins to glow a pale yellow and she directs it forwards in the middle of the practice dummies on the ground. Bolts of lightning shoot out from her hand and hit the dummies one by one, scorching them and setting them ablaze. She then raises her hand slightly upward to the targets in the trees and directs her attack there with the same result.*

"How was dat?.." *Melissa looked at Aigis with a face such as :3 *

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword. It will begin glowing in a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shape of a horn that spread outwards, allowing it to attack multiple targets.



Explanation:"Well, I think this jutsu is okay. It's quick and requires no hand seals and allows you to hit multiple targets. It goes up to mid range and it's easily guide-able. And although it has these advantages, it would have a main disadvantage of not being streamed, therefor it's linear and could be easy to dodge or have a wind attack insulate it."
 

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(That's fine. I actually prefer if you explain things in an RP way.)

Aigis's irritation was beginning to build. She kept her cool, though, taking a deep breath and exhaling slowly. Melissa's personality was getting on her nerves, but she'd endure. After all, she'd met much worse in her career.

"Good. Nothing of note from my end."

"Now, I want you to brandish a sword, I'm sure you have one. Channel your lightning chakra through the sword's blade, and control your chakra to make it levitate in front of you. Then apply your chakra to form two extra copies, similar to clones, but actually tangible and lethal. Make them all spin, and use a series of hand gestures to direct these spinning blades towards your targets."

"Cut through some trees if you want. Test the destructive capability of this technique, if you please."


( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.

"Then, we'll move on to the final C-rank technique. Manipulate your lightning chakra to channel through your dominant hand, forming electrical currents and bolts on your entire arm. Then, slam your palm onto the ground, discharging the electricity around you up to short range. This is an effective short area-of-effect jutsu."

Aigis observed Melissa cautiously.

( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm. The user will then slam their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.
 

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*Sivlagne steps onto the field to take the place of Melissa. Without a word she takes out her scythe and channels raiton chakra into it. She lets it go in it's place and it stays afloat. She puts her hands next to it and widens their proximity to it, and two identical forms of her scythe come out of it, one on each side, full of raiton chakra. She raises her right hand above her head and the scythes start spinning. She motions her hand forwards into the forest and sure enough it decimates several trees. She signals it back and the two raiton copies disperse and her scythe returns to normal as she grasps it*

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.



*Moving on, she opens her palm very calmly and lightning starts to jump in the center of her palm. As she quietly stands still, the lightning creeps up her forearm and just as this happens, she harshly kneels and slaps the ground and a fence of lightning bolts burst from the ground all around her 2 meters away from her body*

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm. The user will then slam their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.



*After the technique ends, she stands up and doesn't speak*
 

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Aigis, in hibernation mode, reawakened (activated?) in response to the external stimulus of a shinobi performing jutsu. She thought this session had been abandoned, but surprises creep around every corner.

Inside her head, one thing came to mind:

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Quickly reacclimatizing herself, she continued onward as if it had only been a minute since the previous jutsus were performed.

"Welcome... I trust you'll be more diligent than Melissa. In any case, Let's begin with the B-ranks. The first one has you performing the Ox hand seal. Then, hold out your hands in front of you, and release your lightning chakra. By applying your shape manipulation, you'll form a large lightning wall that will protect you from frontal attacks. If enemies come close or come into contact with it, they'll experience something... 'shocking'... apologies, that was a bad pun."

"What do you think this jutsu can specifically defend against? Give me ranks and elements."


Aigis nonchalantly tossed a few kunais at Sivlagne, as a concrete example of how to defend herself with this technique.

(Raiton: Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Release Wall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.

Once that was done, Aigis moved right along. Taking a momentary water break, she spoke again.

"And now, you'll create a half dome of lightning in front of you, applying the same principles as the Lightning Wall. Except this time, instead of holding the dome in front of you, you'll push it forward like a wave of lightning. This one's pretty fast and it can push away annoyances, as well as paralyze your target."

From the corner of Sivlagne's eye, a Shadow Clone of Aigis began charging at her.

(Raiton: Reijingu Sandā) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a half shaped dome of lightning that can be pushed forward in a similar way to a "wave of lightning" attack. It has both paralyzing and shocking properties as well as physical momentum.
 
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"Hmph... I know of Melissa. And whilst her methods were unorthodox, she was a hell of a fighter." *Sivlagne answered quickly and seriously*

*As Aigis spews a somewhat bad pun, Sivlagne laughed. It wasn't... To bad* "Heh. That was funny." *As she follows her sensei's orders and performs the ram hand seal, Sivlagne speaks* "Pardon but I don't believe I got your name." *She smiles* "My name is Sivlagne."

*She holds out her hands in a pyramid shape in front of her as the kunai head towards her and her hands start to emit a bright light and no later does the electricity make a wall and cover the front of her body in a very sparky enclosure and inevitably deflect the kunai and throw them off-course*

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.



*As the jutsu ends, Sivlagne gives her reason to what the jutsu is useful for* "The jutsu felt nice. It would easily be able to defend against frontal taijutsu, without a doubt. Only one hand seal, so quick quick to prepare at that. It could absolutely defend against most freeform projectile attacks or even technique related ones. It could probably dice and short-range earth attack such as rock flying your way or something of that caliber."

"May I have some of that water you've got there? I don't believe I brought my own today... Heh.." *She smiles as if she was slightly embarrassed*

*Moving along, Sivlagne cups her hands downward and focuses her chakra in her palms. As sparks of lightning start to jump towards the ground, Sivlagne widens the proximity of her palms and the dome grows quite big. About waist-high from the ground. She pushes both of her palms outward towards an empty space in the field and not much happened rather than it looking cool before it faded

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a half shaped dome of lightning that can be pushed forward in a similar way to a "wave of lightning" attack. It has both paralyzing and shocking properties as well as physical momentum.



"Well that was weird... Anyway. This technique seems extremely similar to the prior technique but instead travels and has a bigger proximity in the technique itself. All the reasoning from my first technique could be applied to this, but this technique is more aggressive by far. That would be the main difference."
 

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"My name is Aigis." she replied curtly, tossing Sivlagne a bottle of water.

"For this one, you'll gather your Raiton chakra around a closed fist. Use your shape manipulation to condense it into a sphere of lightning. If you punch a target with said fist, the sphere will discharge and cause an electrical explosion on the target, making for an interesting fusion of Taijutsu and Lightning. Nothing overly complex."

"Try it on this watermelon. It should explode, I think..."


Aigis placed a watermelon in front of Sivlange.

(Raiton: Sandā Sāburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. The user can then punch a target, unleashing the lightning in the form of a localized electrical explosion.

"After that, raise your hand and release an electrical discharge into the sky. If you want to look fancy, try it with a weapon like a sword. This electrical discharge will create lightning strikes from the sky that will hit in the locations you aim for, whether on the ground, or in the sky. The strikes are fast and occur almost immediately after the discharge is sent up into the sky, so be sure to know where you're aiming before using the jutsu."

"I've set up a few targets around you; be sure to try and get them all."


All around Sivlagne, there were small disc-shaped targets to hit; five in total. Two were behind her, and three were in front of her.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.
 

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*Sivlagne catches the bottle of water and sips some of the water. Not necessarily liking Aigis' attitude, she was indeed nice enough to give her a water bottle. Perhaps she still had the same attitude from Melissa as a student. It is highly likely. Although, unfortunate for Sivlagne*

"Thanks. Nice to meet you." *She smirked, trying to give Aigis a kind gesture as she was there to work and not annoy Aigis in any way*

*As she closes the water bottle and sets the water bottle on the ground, Sivlagne questioned her sensei* "Only a watermelon? Just a uhhh... Watermelon? You do know my power exceeds that of a fruit, hm?.." *Sivlagne was not questioning Aigis' intelligence but rather curious if Aigis knew anything about her*

*Sivlagne stepped up to the watermelon and put her right hand under her chin, thinking of a way to dominate this fruit. And so she did!*

"Hiya!!!"
*Sivlagne ducks quite like a boxer and swoops low, coming up with the utmost might and power. She focuses lightning chakra into her right fist and it sparks with bright lightning. She punches the watermelon with a blow that would be deadly to most living things and discharges the lightning, making the watermelon explode. And it exploded all over her sensei, Aigis, in a fruity and tasty mess*

Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. The user can then punch a target, unleashing the lightning in the form of a localized electrical explosion.



*Immediately noticing the mess she had bestowed upon her sensei, she immediately ran to her aid* "I am so, so sorry..." *She she picked up chunks of watermelon from her face, and tried to wipe her face off, she explained the jutsu*

"Well, this jutsu would be good exactly how I used it, with a taijutsu combination. It could most likely be useful for breaking an earth defense in half and to anyone's body, could make a hit from this technique rather deadly."

*Moving on, Sivlagne holds up a katana. Choosing the more "fancy" way to do this technique.She discharges a mass amount of pure raiton chakra into the sky and immediately after, the lightning strike the ground uncontrollably. After she focuses on one target, the lightning strikes it in front of her. Again with the two other targets in front of her and the one she remembered behind her*

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.



*As the technique ends and Sivlagne notices her one missed target upon basking in what appeared to be perfection, she threw a fit and her demonic side started to show. Her eyes grew a dark black and she runs up to the only missed target and karate chops it in half in what appeared to be way more force than she actually needed to break such a fragile thing. As the target break and flies into one hundred little pieces, Sivlagne continued the chop and split the target's post straight down the middle until her hand reached the ground which even then, cracked the ground quite a bit. After her outburst, she stood up and returned to normal to explain the technique*

"This technique seems streamed, so you must keep focus on it for it to stay in effect. Although only one target can be focused on at a time, you can easily switch the technique between targets and it is quite fast so as soon as you emit your chakra in the sky, the technique reveals. I'd use it quite often. My type of technique."


*How could she be so calm after her demonic outbursts? The world may never know*
 
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Aigis had watermelon splattered all over her outfit. She clearly looked irritated as she cleaned herself off.

"It's fine, focus." she said, almost a little harshly as Sivlagne tried to help her.

At least she had enthusiasm... it would take some time before she would warm up to her, though.

"Moving on. Weave the Ram, Boar, Dog, Bird, and Hare hand seals, while molding Raiton chakra and releasing it through the ground. This lightning will displace the earth and forcefully shape it into four pillars around a target- in this case the Shadow Clone I'll create. These pillars will surround her and subsequently release barrages of lightning bolts that assault her."

"The range of this jutsu is excellent, although he pillars are large and conspicuous, which makes them somewhat easy to see and counter. You can even trap things like summons if you're skilled enough."


Aigis creates a Shadow Clone.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.


"The second one also has hand seals; Rabbit, Dog, Boar, Ram, and Rat. In that order. You'll create lightning in your hands. This current can be discharged in two ways; an unfocused wave, or through a conductive material for a more focused attack. If you combined this with a water technique, you'll add extra damage. If you have any Suiton techniques, I want you to perform this in a combination with one. If you don't... simply fire this jutsu at the lake over there and note the effects it has."


(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40 (+20 to Water Technique)
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals, the user generates a large amount of lightning from their hands, which can then be either released in an unfocused manner or passed through conductive materials to improve the electrical power of the technique, namely in conjunction with Water Techniques. In fact, certain users have showed that its possible to, if the user has the ability to mold both Water and Lightning chakras at the same time (for example, Darui who has Storm Release), unleash this particular technique at the same time as they exhale/spit some water technique (which needs to consist of a stream of water), combining both in a seemingly consecutive move. Other ninjas will need to use a clone or an ally for the same effect.
 

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Going to try a new dialogue layout. Let me know if you do not like it because I plan to use it universally from now on.



As Sivlagne notices the irritation simply plastered on her sensei's face, she just shuts up and listens to the next set of orders. She kind of thought she screwed up by making the mess, but there was no way her sensei was dissatisfied with her last performance, regardless of the mess she might have made

"I understand. Seems quite fun, yes?" Sivlagne nods and smiles, hoping to get a warm smile in return. She wanted to befriend Aigis but because of her upfront and blatant professionalism and strong stature, she couldn't really see that happening. But what's the harm in trying? If you don't try, there is no chance, Sivlagne always thinks

Sivlagne weaves the Ram, Boar, Dog, Bird, and Hare hand seals as she channels a large amount of chakra into her arms and hands. She gently places her hands on the ground as she kneels down and releases her raiton chakra in the earth, letting it travel up to mid range, where the target resided. As the earth forcefully and unnaturally gets formed at Sivlagne's will, earth pillars form, one after another eventually surrounding the shadow clone. Once the pillars are set in place, the lightning radiates from the earth pillars and uncontrollably shock and stun the shadow clone, inevitably paralyzing it and then killing it. As the clone disperses from the immense pain, the lightning stops and the pillars crumble and turn to rubbish as they scatter across the field in small bits and pieces.

She stands up and looks at her sensei again whilst smiling
"How was that, Aigis-sama?"

Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.



Moving on Sivlagne listens carefully as Aigis explains the next technique. She immediately smirks when she hears her sensei command her use a water jutsu in collaboration with this lightning technique. If anything, Sivlagne was an expert in the field of water. There would be nothing more pleasurable than to utilize water with these current techniques to "spark" up the training. Get it? She nods and begins the combination process

Sivlagne closes her eyes and takes a deep breath. After, she quickly weaves the Boar, Dog and Ram hand seals and holds out her right hand beside her and then she opens her eyes. In her hand forms a ball of water, spiraling and ready to fly. Sivlagne chucks the ball and immediately after, she focuses raiton chakra in her left hand and she weaves the Rabbit, Dog, Boar, Ram, and Rat hand seals. By this time, the water vortex that was previously thrown only got bigger and eventually creates a water wall, violently heading towards some trees. Because of it's expansion, it only made it an easier target for the lightning to mix with it. Ready for the next technique to take action, Sivlagne waves her left hand, releases the wave of lightning into the water wall, making a deadly combo. Before the water could touch any trees and perhaps demonstrate an effect, it dies out and leaves behind and electric puddle which even then, looked to be a threat.

Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After waving the Boar → Dog → Ram hand seals, a water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiraling wall of water which can then be used to attack or defend.
Note: No water source required



Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40 (+20 to Water Technique)
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals, the user generates a large amount of lightning from their hands, which can then be either released in an unfocused manner or passed through conductive materials to improve the electrical power of the technique, namely in conjunction with Water Techniques. In fact, certain users have showed that its possible to, if the user has the ability to mold both Water and Lightning chakras at the same time (for example, Darui who has Storm Release), unleash this particular technique at the same time as they exhale/spit some water technique (which needs to consist of a stream of water), combining both in a seemingly consecutive move. Other ninjas will need to use a clone or an ally for the same effect.



Sivlagne looked to Aigis-sama for approval
 
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For wave of inspiration, though it is known to work best along side water, it can still be used alone. Also, when using it with water, be sure to use it with projectile based water techniques, unless you have storm, where then you can just use water and lightning at the same time, whether be streaming based or not.

So seems like the training you have here seems well. I'm not going to hit you off, we will continue doing this form of training, since you seemed to enjoy it. I will just provide the technique with a decent explanation and you do what you were doing with Souji before. We can also RP it out a lil if you want z.z

I'll give you three this set, all very basic.


(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

So, bring your hands close together without touching them and focus your raiton chakra to each hand. Small static sparks will fly between your palms, and then you can slam your hand on the ground. Like a technique you learned earlier, this will send the lightning through the ground as tendrils of electricity, which can be broken up into multiple tendrils, to attack anyone standing on the ground. I like this technique because, with a good diversion, you can shock a person's legs and make it hard for them to move, leading up to a great finisher. However, if your opponent can get off of the ground, then it's basically useless except to destroy earthen structures you don't want to be there.

(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Rod
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air, charging lightning. He will then unleash the lightning energy at the enemy target in the form of a lightning bolt.

So, raise your hand into the air, focus your lightning chakra to your hand, and release it as a horizontal lightning bolt towards the target. Simple. A simple projectile technique, this jutsu is useful for straightforward attacks, or for taking out a moving target like a kunai or a summon. However, once shot the technique can't change course, making it dodgable. Aside from that... it's a rather basic technique.

(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra between his/her palms forming what appears to be a lightning "rope". The user can then whip that lightning around as if its a true whip, hitting his target.

So, first you will hold your palms facing each other and focus your raiton chakra between them. Then, using your shape manipulation, you will form that lightning into a rope shape. From there, you can "grab" the rope with one hand and begin to swing it around. The rope can extend up to mid-range, allowing you to hit people at a distance. The rope can also be used to wrap around your opponent and bind/paralyze them at the same time. It's a very useful technique, but mainly as a supplementary usage. Without someone else (clone) to throw in the offensive part of a combination, it doesn't have much going for it as it's a streaming technique. However, it's also very good for electrocuting a streaming water technique without fear of it being redirected to avoid the lightning, as you can also redirect the whip. So, like every other technique, when used in the correct situation it can be pretty deadly.
 

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Ramlethal slaps her hands together, directing chakra all around her hands and arms. Furthering the process, lightning crackles around both her hands and arms quite violently. She raises her hands and then slaps them roughly on the ground, sending a mass amount of electrical current towards a practice dummy. Once reaching the target's location, the lightning comes from the ground, striking it and devouring it from below.

Raising her hand, Ramlethal charges chakra all around to to a point where a mass amount of lightning was gathering around it. Taking aim, Ramlethal unleashes the devastating beam towards the already downed practice dummy and it strikes it, completely annihilating it and breaking it to hundreds of pieces.

Holding her hands together, Ramlethal gathers chakra in him and converting it into lightning, she stretches her hands and between both palms, a thin rope of lightning emits. She detaches it fro her right palm and grabs the rope with her right hand, dragging the rope of lightning out of her left palm completely. She whips the electrical whip around and wraps it around a nearby box of ninja tools, breaking the box in pieces and electrifying the tools so much to a a point the tools looked like a bright electrical technique themselves.
 

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(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting and rampages towards his target.

Another very basic technique, you channel raiton chakra to your hand and create a stream of lightning away from you. At the end of the stream, use shape manipulation to create a hound. From there, you can make the hound run around at your will. While the dog has to remain close to the ground and can't be flying through the air, it moves at rather quick speeds and can be used to easily penetrate defenses. Breaking through a defensive wall is probably the best way to use the lightning hound. And, just as other lightning streaming techniques, basically any suiton technique is bad news for you while using it, so be careful about that.

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

A fairly simply technique. Focus raiton chakra into your mouth, open your mouth, and release the lightning outwards like a spear. Now, the spear remains connected to you, making this a streaming technique, but since you can split the spear apart and choose where it goes with minimal physical motions, it's a fair tradeoff. The spear can be split up into as many different branches as you want, but remember that the more branches you make the weaker each one becomes. And yeah, that's the basics of the technique.

(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.

So, first you will need to take a sword, or a kunai should work. Then, allow your raiton chakra to flow through the blade of your weapon. As the lightning flows, the intense frequency and vibrations, not to mention a numbing effect, will transfer into the blade and increase the cutting power. This is a very good technique for augmenting kenjutsu or freeform sword strikes, and especially if the opponent forms an earth armor around themselves to protect from a normal sword. The only real "weakness" to the technique is how limited it is in use, as most "augmentation" techniques are.
 

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Focusing chakra into her right hand, although she's ambidextrous, Ramlethal creates a stream of lightning from her palm. After the stream of lightning touches the ground behind her, it takes the shape of a wolf and the way the lightning sounded, it "roared". Quite loudly at that. Keeping focus on the hound, Ramlethal directs it to a tree down the field and it instantly takes off, running and roaring until it comes to the tree which it headbutts quite viciously and breaks it in half. Figured she saw enough, Ram let the technique go and stream of lightning and the lightning wold slowly disappeared whilst swiftly leaving behind an outline of its viciousness but that too disappeared in time. It was a sight to see.

Gathering a giant amount of chakra into her mouth, Ramlethal opens her mouth and suddenly a sharp and dominant spear of lightning comes out of her mouth. Traveling at a blinding pace, the spear quickly hits a nearby practice dummy and pierces straight through it with great ease and much like butter. Discontinuing the technique, all it left behind was a big, perfect hole in the practice dummy's chest that had smoke coming from it from the electrical burns. She could easily see the capability packed in this technique. One she shall truly cherish.


Taking out one of her giant swords, Ramlethal channels chakra into it and converts it to lightning. Emits the lightning, Ramlethal violently swings her sword into a tree and it cuts it almost more than half way through. It sets part of the tree on fire and gets stuck... She stops channeling chakra into the technique and starts to pull on the sword. She hangs onto the sword and puts both feet on the tree, near her sword, lifting her completely off of the ground. She finally pulls it out, hitting her head on the ground and having the flat side of her sword bash her in the face. She was tough so she didn't care. She got back up, ready to perform the next technique, showing no emotion whatsoever.
 

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(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

A great tool to use, the user will simply create a clone of himself made of lightning. This clone is very similar to a regular shadow clone, it can move physically and use taijutsu. Its very proficient if used correctly. Now a difference is it can only use B-Rank techs for lightning and nothing else. When killed it turn back to a regular state of lightning and disperses. Now their is a way to take advantage of this, the fact that it turns back to lightning chakra means it still has lightning properties. Anyway an extra man in the battle is always good especially if its on your side. Combos are endless as well.

(Raiton: Dai Denki hoden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.

Okay with one hand seal the user will raise their hand towards the sky sending a electrical discharge towards the opponent from the sky. Now its visible for the opponent to see you send the charge in the sky, so they can anticipate an attack, ways to mask them from knowing is hurting their vision. Its a fast performance tech with just a couple of gestures but slow overall for the attack portion since it will be sent up and then have to go down taking two roads. It is though a normal jutsu and can be used to lure the opponents attention to the attack or used to try to attack in all angles of the opponent. The range of the jutsu is what makes it so handy in battle. A basic combo is to have a clone use the technique while you (the original) send multiple attacks to divert their attentions.

( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.

A basic technique and one that is usually never used, the user will gather raiton chakra and then release the lightning but the color of the lightning will be different, the color purple. The hands will aim towards the enemy or anywhere you want making it a nice technique on command which you can have nice control of at all times. It can shock and push an opponent back like any other normal raiton attack, though its main purpose is to push them backward. Its a fast technique to perform and great to use if an opponent is trying to charge at you with speed, it can also be used to combo with close range tai and ken. By using it to shock and distract them you appear and send some quick attacks. Very basic and projectile based right when you send it. One of the downsides is it does not go any longer then short range so it is a limited technique.
 

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Ramlethal releases chakra from her back, channeling it to lightning and a form takes shape that looks quite like Ramlethal but her skin was jumpy and the form was making a buzzing noise. The real Ramlethal steps to the side as the lightning clone of Ramlethal hops forwards, performing a series of admirable and honorable taijutsu moves and then takes a judo stance. After a few seconds of standing there, it explodes, releasing multiple waves of lightning capable of killing a man.

Raising her right hand to the sky, Ramlethal quickly sends an electrical discharge into the sky. After a few seconds, the discharge came down with a quickness in the form of a large lightning bolt, striking a practice dummy and shattering it to pieces.


Channeling chakra into her palms, Ramlethal releases the chakra and it turns into purple lightning. Very, very weird-looking. The blast was powerful... But went only a few spaces away from her... Other than it looking cool, it is useless and boring, she thought...
 
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