[Raiton] Everything is Better

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*Waits on a rock for Better Senpai.*

previous training (not long at all literly and I dont wanna template just give me jutsu and I explain >.>)
 

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Basically, what I want is you

To Quote My Post
4 Lines MINIMUM of you perfroming it.

We will have a spar after C rank and every rank after that.

Understood?
 

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Alright, lets begin!

You see that rock over there *points to small boulder* I want you to focus your raiton chakra into your hands and release it at the boulder, if you do it right, the boulder should break.

*Gin picks up the boulder and tosses it to Izuna*

btw for D ranks, the four lines isn't needed.
 

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Alright, lets begin!

You see that rock over there *points to small boulder* I want you to focus your raiton chakra into your hands and release it at the boulder, if you do it right, the boulder should break.

*Gin picks up the boulder and tosses it to Izuna*

btw for D ranks, the four lines isn't needed.
*Izuna grabs the boulder* *As I use my raiton chakra I focus it and let it flow to my hand, as I focus it to my hands I release it causing the boulder to break.
 

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good, simple technique.

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(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

Alright Moving on,

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

Now, concentrate your raiton in your hands and then slam them into the ground, this release a surge of lightning through the ground. Send it at my clone and shock him.

*creates clone*

Give me some advantages and disadvantages to this particular jutsu.
 

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good, simple technique.

You just performed

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

Alright Moving on,

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

Now, concentrate your raiton in your hands and then slam them into the ground, this release a surge of lightning through the ground. Send it at my clone and shock him.

*creates clone*

Give me some advantages and disadvantages to this particular jutsu.
#Better4Sensei?

*I start to concentrate my raiton chakra letting it flow to my hands I then aim at his clone, I slam my hands into the ground then release my chakra, and I start to see lightning across the ground.


Pros: It would not be easy to dodge because if you and your enemy was fighting on ground it would be hard for him/her to counter it.

Cons: But couldn't you get shocked as well if your on the ground too? What if they had a sword and they put it in thee ground so they wont get shocked? Because this jutsu only shocks the ground right?
 

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Well, with the disadvantages you are thinking too much. It's most biggest disadvantage is it's range. You see, only short range. When you fight, make sure you note that, it use to get me with all the techs xD

alright continuing

Moving on,

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

I want you to focus your chakra around you and then release it into an electric filed that covers your body, pretty weak tho, so i wouldn't recommend using it to defend from anything wild.

Perform, Advantages, Disadvantages please
 

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Well, with the disadvantages you are thinking too much. It's most biggest disadvantage is it's range. You see, only short range. When you fight, make sure you note that, it use to get me with all the techs xD

alright continuing

Moving on,

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

I want you to focus your chakra around you and then release it into an electric filed that covers your body, pretty weak tho, so i wouldn't recommend using it to defend from anything wild.

Perform, Advantages, Disadvantages please
It came to me when I remembered that Sasuke vs Deidara fight xD.
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*As I use my raiton chakra I focus it around my body thus I release the chakra, creating a shield around me (like a force field) that users cant enter unless they would get shocked by it.


Pros: If the opponent tries to come in it they would get hurt/shocked (I think they would get shocked xD).

Cons: The jutsu is short range so it wouldn't be much if the opponent was far distance from the range it goes to. Plus the jutsu is D-Rank so it wouldn't be very helpful in battles if your fighting a tuff opponent.
 

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coool, moving on.

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Create an electric field and then blow back my clone

*creates clone*

Perform it on my clone, Advantages and Disadvantages

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(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Focus raiton in your hands and then release it in waves of lightning bolts at my clone.

*creates clone*

Perform Advantages and Disadvantages please
 

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coool, moving on.

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Create an electric field and then blow back my clone

*creates clone*

Perform it on my clone, Advantages and Disadvantages

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(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Focus raiton in your hands and then release it in waves of lightning bolts at my clone.

*creates clone*

Perform Advantages and Disadvantages please
*I focus my chakra all around then release it, causing a electrical shield to form I then aim it at Better's clone then release it causing it to blow back Better senpai clone.

Pros: It can blow back the enemy leaving him in a confusion kinda.

Cons: The jutsu is short range so it wont go as far, say if the opponent was long range it wouldn't be long enough to hit the opponent.


 

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Good, Good

1. (Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

I want you to focus lightning chakra into your hands, and release it from your hands creating a wave of electricity, you can add more lightning chakra to make it as strong as you like. *points to boulder* Destroy it!

Perform, Combos, and Advantages Disadvantages

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2) (Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

Pretty simple, you gather your chakra into your hands and then you create an energy ball made out of lightning, and send it at your opponent.

All I want from this one is, How to counter, Advantages and Disadvantages


I want nice long details for each man, lets see what you can do
 

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1. (Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

I want you to focus lightning chakra into your hands, and release it from your hands creating a wave of electricity, you can add more lightning chakra to make it as strong as you like. *points to boulder* Destroy it!

Perform, Combos, and Advantages Disadvantages

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2) (Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

Pretty simple, you gather your chakra into your hands and then you create an energy ball made out of lightning, and send it at your opponent.

All I want from this one is, How to counter, Advantages and Disadvantages


I want nice long details for each man, lets see what you can do
1. *I channel my raiton chakra through my hands. I then release the chakra out of my hands causing a wave of electricity to be made. I then channel more chakra in to make the attack more powerful than before. I then aim at the boulder, and release the wave of electricity into the boulder and it cracks in half.
Advantages: You can use this with a water jutsu, so it can become more powerful. You can make it strong as you want it to be.

Disadvantages: This jutsu is short range so wont have much use if your fighting on a long or mid range field.

Combo's: I would use world shaking to get the enemy confused like because the ground would be shaking. I then would follow up by using Electromagnetic Murder and then use a water jutsu with it to create a much better attack.

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2. *I gather my chakra, then let it flow to my hands, making sure there is enough chakra I release the chakra and I see a energy ball has been created. I then aim at my target, precisely aiming for his/hers chest. I then run and send it at the target.*
Advantages: The jutsu requires no handseals so it would be quicker to pull of an attack.

Disadvantages: The jutsu isn't really long range so it wouldn't work doing a long range battle. You would need to have precise aim to hit the user because they would try to dodge it.

Counter: I would create an water wall to protect me from getting hit by the jutsu.
 

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With that first jutsu, you can extend it's reach by using it with a water jutsu that has a Mid-range reach. A perfect example would be a water stream jutsu that you release from the water close by you, where a clone would then use Electromagnetic murder to electrify it.

Understand?
 

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With that first jutsu, you can extend it's reach by using it with a water jutsu that has a Mid-range reach. A perfect example would be a water stream jutsu that you release from the water close by you, where a clone would then use Electromagnetic murder to electrify it.

Understand?
I understand senpai.
 

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(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

Charge your body with your lightning chakra and use it to manifest a weak sheath of lightning around yourself. This will shock whatever you touch however it will dissipate after one hit.

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together and running up a cliff face, the user causes stone and rock above him to become dislodged and rain down past him onto his opponents below by releasing a wave of electrical energy. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

Whilst running up a cliff side, perform the hand seals and then direct your lightning chakra through your feet, and up the face of the cliff, dislodging boudlers to fall past you and hit anyone chasing after you.

Fill out the following for both jutsu:

PHP:
One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
1.
2.
3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
1.
2.
3.
How you would use it in battle:
How you would counter it:
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
 

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One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
1. The enemy/opponent would be trapped.
2. The user can follow up with another jutsu since he's cant get out.
3. You can use this to shield yourself.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
1. Could be over powered by a jutsu above C-Rank.
2. This jutsu is short range so it would be useless in mid or long range fights.
3.
How you would use it in battle: In short range combat, I would use the jutsu World Shaking and while my opponent is confused ill use Lightning Strike Armour and then I could follow up using another jutsu.
How you would counter it: I would not be effected because I would cover myself up in a Lightning Shield.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): I focus my raiton chakra throughout my body, I then start to manifest a weakish like sheath of lightning.

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
1. The rocks is falling below the enemy so its hard to evade.
2. It hits anyone chasing the user.
3.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
1. The opponent can slice the rocks with raiton and still hit the enemy.
2.
3.
How you would use it in battle: If I see a nearby cliff I would run up on it and while my target is chasing me I will use the jutsu.
How you would counter it: I would create an earth wall on the cliff.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can): I focus my raiton chakra, then I perform the hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → . I then focus my chakra in my feet, whilst dislodging the rocks in the cliff and falling down on my target.



Im not really about creativity cause im evil, senpai.
 

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Seems alright.

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword and it will begin glowing a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shapt of a horn that spread outwards allowing it to attack multiple targets.

Hold out your dominant arm like you would be holding a sword and point it forward, then gather your lighting chakra into you extended hand and release the chakra as a pale yellowish glow. Then, shoot the lightning so that it is shaped like a horn, with the bolts of lightning spreading out to hit my clone, tell me where the bolts hit him of course.

( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s.

Infuse your lightning chakra into your sword and push the vibrations of the chakra to that it would be capable of easily cutting through metal, then cause it to levitate using the lightning chakra (electro-magnetic fields and other physics stuff xD). You'll then need to make two copies, one either side of the original, made out of lightning that appear to split from the sword. Make them start spinning very fast and fly towards my clone.

PHP:
[B]Three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B]
[B]1.[/B]
[B]2.[/B]
[B]3.[/B]
[B]Three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B]
[B]1.[/B]
[B]2.[/B]
[B]3.[/B]
[B]Strategies and combinations:[/B]
[B]How you would counter it:[/B]
[B]How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):[/B]
 
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