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Good, good. Role Play or Analysis? Choose one, and answer the classic question, what is Rain Release? xD
Analysis please, i've done the whole RP side to it when i first learnt it.

So rain is a mix of water and wind, forms the weather conditions to create clouds and then pretty much use a form of water release to control the falling water.

There are different methods to the rain and it's use:

1. Pein used it to cover ame to sense intruders, though he could only sense when someone entered the rain not their exact location
2. Traditionally empowering the falling rain, either making it dense and fall faster like a rain bullet, or gathering it together for a condensed pillar of rain.
3. The clouds, there are a couple of jutsu that use the clouds themselves to form dragons and such bending with the source of the rain to attack.

My plan is to combine rain with crow summons, from each drop a basic crow is summoned but is an infinite barrage, much like in the new Dracular how he controls the bats xd
 

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Haha, very good. Yeah, Rain Release is bad ass and sneaky as hell. Many of the techniques are vague and I even offered to re-write them or edit them for Scorps. So, there's that, other than that, its very useful in battle and too bad one can't have Sound and Rain on one bio.

Now, I'll just explain the technique then I just want you to give me a small analysis of it. Other than that, make it rain please (and not money U_U).
 

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Yeah sound and rain would be pretty epic, rain bullet was always my favourite its so small and sneaky but deadly at the same time. PM my main with the updates if you want me to look into that?

*does some handseals to perform the rain tiger at will making it rain*

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Adachi said he'll be taking a look at them, but I'll send them to you too, if you want.

Good, let's begin.


Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: By focusing chakra into the user's hand they are able to gather rain drops towards their palms, the rain is molded together by chakra and forged into a high pressured orb. Once done the orb will shoot away from the users hand and the user will be knocked back. If it hits the enemy the enemy will be sent away flying or unbalanced.



Alright, focusing your Rain based chakra to your hands, and gather rain drops towards your palms. Of course, it should raining when you do this. Utilizing chakra, the rain will be forged into a high pressurized orb of Rain. After doing so, the orb can be shot towards the opponent, hitting them back with some force, much like a bullet would hit someone back. However, this is a mere D rank technique, so it doesn't do that much damage, and can be used to interrupt the opponent, or cause some minor damage.
 

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Adachi said he'll be taking a look at them, but I'll send them to you too, if you want.

Good, let's begin.


Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: By focusing chakra into the user's hand they are able to gather rain drops towards their palms, the rain is molded together by chakra and forged into a high pressured orb. Once done the orb will shoot away from the users hand and the user will be knocked back. If it hits the enemy the enemy will be sent away flying or unbalanced.



Alright, focusing your Rain based chakra to your hands, and gather rain drops towards your palms. Of course, it should raining when you do this. Utilizing chakra, the rain will be forged into a high pressurized orb of Rain. After doing so, the orb can be shot towards the opponent, hitting them back with some force, much like a bullet would hit someone back. However, this is a mere D rank technique, so it doesn't do that much damage, and can be used to interrupt the opponent, or cause some minor damage.
It can be useful in a tai fight too, knock them back to give you the chance to go on the offensive, get in a leaf hurricane after it too xd
 

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Indeed, fast and deadly.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When user makes it rain and then changes the compounds of the water(materials in the air).Then makes the rain sticky which binds the opponent in place for 2 turns.this jutsu lasts for 2 turns.



With this technique, you will focus your Rain chakra into the falling rain, and change the compounds of it. This allows you to make the rain sticky, binding the opponent in place for up to two turns, and this technique also lasts two turns. Pretty useful if used right, and a pretty cool technique overall.
 

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Indeed, fast and deadly.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When user makes it rain and then changes the compounds of the water(materials in the air).Then makes the rain sticky which binds the opponent in place for 2 turns.this jutsu lasts for 2 turns.



With this technique, you will focus your Rain chakra into the falling rain, and change the compounds of it. This allows you to make the rain sticky, binding the opponent in place for up to two turns, and this technique also lasts two turns. Pretty useful if used right, and a pretty cool technique overall.
If you use this on the rain infront of someone and they run at you, will their feet stick to the ground like glue and how long would it last after it's fallen? Still only two turns?
 

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Three is my limit, but give me a good analysis on each, then we good.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a reflection of the user, this clone is unable to touch physical objects or cause harm. Every move that the user makes the clone mimics at the same time. The reflection clone is destroyed after one hit, this is a tactical technique.



One of the very weird techniques of Rain where you will manipulate your Rain based chakra to create a reflection of yourself. This reflection is purely supplementary and even mimics your movements.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A jutsu that can only be used in rain to conceal oneself, this jutsu is considered a dynamic form of henge. After performing a row of hand-seals, the user seems to disappear. In truth, they have merely assumed a form that mimics rain. Fast movements and physical contact with others may reveal the user



After the formation of a few hand seals, and then manipulating your Rain based chakra, you will conceal yourself within falling rain. You assume a form that mimics falling rain, you can still be sensed, fast movements and physical contact cancels the technique.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user manipulates their chakra to condense a single raindrop into a more solid form. The raindrop becomes as sharp as a blade. The disadvantage to this jutsu is that the raindrop falls in a straight line.



With this technique, you utilize your Rain based chakra to condense a single rain drop, and make it more solid and sharp. It becomes like a blade, deadly, however just falls in a straight line.
 

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Three is my limit, but give me a good analysis on each, then we good.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a reflection of the user, this clone is unable to touch physical objects or cause harm. Every move that the user makes the clone mimics at the same time. The reflection clone is destroyed after one hit, this is a tactical technique.



One of the very weird techniques of Rain where you will manipulate your Rain based chakra to create a reflection of yourself. This reflection is purely supplementary and even mimics your movements.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A jutsu that can only be used in rain to conceal oneself, this jutsu is considered a dynamic form of henge. After performing a row of hand-seals, the user seems to disappear. In truth, they have merely assumed a form that mimics rain. Fast movements and physical contact with others may reveal the user



After the formation of a few hand seals, and then manipulating your Rain based chakra, you will conceal yourself within falling rain. You assume a form that mimics falling rain, you can still be sensed, fast movements and physical contact cancels the technique.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user manipulates their chakra to condense a single raindrop into a more solid form. The raindrop becomes as sharp as a blade. The disadvantage to this jutsu is that the raindrop falls in a straight line.



With this technique, you utilize your Rain based chakra to condense a single rain drop, and make it more solid and sharp. It becomes like a blade, deadly, however just falls in a straight line.
(Touei Ame Bushin) - Reflection Rain Clone - A brilliant distraction jutsu, while raining you have a reflection of yourself, in close combat you can use it to keep them on their toes. I mean reflection of a slash from your clone they have to defend from that you can get in a cheap shot.

(Amegakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Rain Technique - pretty much a hiding jutsu, good to use with a distaction. Keep on the attack and move, then you can use this to bide time. I'd use an attack, move, hide, and use this. But with that time you can save yourself for a turn with jutsu that say "no s ranks in the following turn" just something to bide your time, great for sage mode stuff, don't you think O_<

(Hitoshirenu Ame Sai) - Hidden Rain Slash - doesn't matter if it falls in a straight line, without sensing this is a hard jutsu to counter, they would have to use reasoning and think outside of the box. With my sharingan bio, i use this with precision timing so the slash hits their back leg as their running, that's if i want to keep my distance, if not it's good as it's an attack from above, so it can't be sent back at you.
 

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Good job, man. Next three.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user of this technique must place chakra into one or more raindrops. As the drops of rain hit the ground they create a small sized spike of water from puddles on the ground. For this technique to work there must be water on the ground and it must be raining.



A very weird technique that can only be used when its raining and there are some puddles on the ground. You will focus your Rain chakra into a single raindrop. When this raindrop hits a puddle of water, it creates a spike which inflicts the opponent.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By using chakra to condense a large amount of rainwater into one place, the user creates a spear of water in the clouds. The spear can at any time be called down to strike an opponent with only one hand-seal. The water will stay in the form of spear for a short amount of time (three posts). If the spear is not used by that time it will fall uselessly as rain. The only warning this technique gives is a second pause in the rain when the water is gathered and condensed.



Use your Rain based chakra to condense a large amount of rainwater in one place in the air. This is then formed into a spear, which can be called down with a single hand seal. It can stay as a spear for up to three turns, after that, it falls uselessly as rain.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique causes a target of the user's choice to "attract" raindrops. The water in the rain drops will attach themselves over an opponent. Once enough water has gathered over an enemy it will also attach to the ground, holding the user's opponent to the ground.



Another really cool technique where you will use your Rain based chakra and focuses it around the opponent so that they act as a magnet for they rain to gather onto. This rain gathers onto the opponent, and sticks them to the ground as well.
 

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Good job, man. Next three.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user of this technique must place chakra into one or more raindrops. As the drops of rain hit the ground they create a small sized spike of water from puddles on the ground. For this technique to work there must be water on the ground and it must be raining.



A very weird technique that can only be used when its raining and there are some puddles on the ground. You will focus your Rain chakra into a single raindrop. When this raindrop hits a puddle of water, it creates a spike which inflicts the opponent.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By using chakra to condense a large amount of rainwater into one place, the user creates a spear of water in the clouds. The spear can at any time be called down to strike an opponent with only one hand-seal. The water will stay in the form of spear for a short amount of time (three posts). If the spear is not used by that time it will fall uselessly as rain. The only warning this technique gives is a second pause in the rain when the water is gathered and condensed.



Use your Rain based chakra to condense a large amount of rainwater in one place in the air. This is then formed into a spear, which can be called down with a single hand seal. It can stay as a spear for up to three turns, after that, it falls uselessly as rain.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique causes a target of the user's choice to "attract" raindrops. The water in the rain drops will attach themselves over an opponent. Once enough water has gathered over an enemy it will also attach to the ground, holding the user's opponent to the ground.



Another really cool technique where you will use your Rain based chakra and focuses it around the opponent so that they act as a magnet for they rain to gather onto. This rain gathers onto the opponent, and sticks them to the ground as well.
You know, rain spike could be a great surprise jutsu. Like you star tout making it rain (or heavy rain a later jutsu) and don't use any rain jutsu, wait until they are running towards you, in a previous move mention how puddles start to form (make it seem like rp effect) then when they are about to strike surprise water spike from below xd

Rain spear is another brilliant jutsu, they have only one sign of the coming which you can cover up using wind to blow the rain around them around so they don't notice the gap in the rain.

Sweet another binding jutsu, use this just to slow people down like people with lw, sure it wont work on gates but this will keep them trapped and make for a lovely combo with lightning.
 

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Great job.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A jutsu that creates false clones of the user around drops of rain. Every clone is totally harmless and is destroyed by one hit or if they collide with the ground or the enemy. This technique is used as more of a distraction than anything.



A weird technique where you will use your Rain chakra to create false clones around drops of rain. Basically just a distraction based technique.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A jutsu that actually uses the victim's clothing as a medium to effect him or her. By filling the clothing with water-elemental chakra the user causes the clothing to fully retain all water it comes in contact with which will gradually cause the clothing to become heavier and heavier. Unfortunately, this jutsu that does not create water, so it is only useful in a rainy or otherwise wet environment



This technique targets the opponent, by focusing one's Rain chakra to their clothes, it causes their clothes to retain the Water from the falling rain. This makes the opponent heavier and heavier.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A jutsu that creates a clone from the Rain clouds in the sky. The clone resembles the user but keeps the appearance of moving clouds with only the shape and color of the user. Because of this the clouds cannot be used as a distraction. The clones are able to attack and receive attacks.



Another weird technique where you will use your Rain based chakra to create a clone from the rain clouds in the sky. This clone can attack, and also be damaged.
 

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Great job.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A jutsu that creates false clones of the user around drops of rain. Every clone is totally harmless and is destroyed by one hit or if they collide with the ground or the enemy. This technique is used as more of a distraction than anything.



A weird technique where you will use your Rain chakra to create false clones around drops of rain. Basically just a distraction based technique.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A jutsu that actually uses the victim's clothing as a medium to effect him or her. By filling the clothing with water-elemental chakra the user causes the clothing to fully retain all water it comes in contact with which will gradually cause the clothing to become heavier and heavier. Unfortunately, this jutsu that does not create water, so it is only useful in a rainy or otherwise wet environment



This technique targets the opponent, by focusing one's Rain chakra to their clothes, it causes their clothes to retain the Water from the falling rain. This makes the opponent heavier and heavier.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A jutsu that creates a clone from the Rain clouds in the sky. The clone resembles the user but keeps the appearance of moving clouds with only the shape and color of the user. Because of this the clouds cannot be used as a distraction. The clones are able to attack and receive attacks.



Another weird technique where you will use your Rain based chakra to create a clone from the rain clouds in the sky. This clone can attack, and also be damaged.
(Ame Bunshin) - Raining Clones - Not the best of jutsu but you can use it as a distraction. Go all cammo, create a fake clone like this from above so you can strike while they are distracted.

Heavy rain - if you can keep this up then it's brilliant to slow speedsters down. Not only that but with that much water on them, it just calls out for you to bring some raiton to the game xd

Rain cloud clone - When you make a clone out of the clouds, does rain keep falling from it? xd not only that but can the clone use the rain jutsu. I'm just thinking of the later technqieus where you pull the rain around you to cast rain jutsu xd
 

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Nah that technique is just to tank techniques, however, some techniques are extremely vague and I am working on it.


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user does the necessary handseals and focuses chakra into the rain, the rain draws together and forms several bullets of rain. The "bullets" fall at an accelerated rate and feel like large rocks falling from the sky.



Utilize your Rain chakra and form some hand seals, allowing you to cause rain to draw together in the air. This forms "bullets" of Rain which fall at an accelerated rate.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User performs the necessary handseals and places their hands out in front of them. Using chakra they gather up a large amount of rain and create a wall of solid water. The water is dense and difficult to move through, thus protecting the user from most taijutsu attack and fire attacks. Earth based jutsu and Lighting jutsu are highly effective against this technique. The user must keep his hands connected into the wall at all times or the wall will return to its normal state. If struck by electricity it will move through the water and strike the user as well.



Perform some hand seals and point your hands outwards. Gather some Rain water, which is then formed into a solid like wall, tanking Taijutsu and Fire attacks but making you vulnerable to Lightning. Hands must stay connected to the wall to keep it in shape.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By sending subtle chakra waves into the clouds, the user is able to create unusually large nuclei for the water droplets to condense on. The end result is big raindrops that fall to the ground at a faster then normal rate. They aren't big or fast enough to cause any real damage, but they are quite distracting.



Send some Rain based chakra into the clouds, to create large nuclei for raindrops to condense on and become bigger. They then fall faster, and are quite distracting.
 

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Nah that technique is just to tank techniques, however, some techniques are extremely vague and I am working on it.


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user does the necessary handseals and focuses chakra into the rain, the rain draws together and forms several bullets of rain. The "bullets" fall at an accelerated rate and feel like large rocks falling from the sky.



Utilize your Rain chakra and form some hand seals, allowing you to cause rain to draw together in the air. This forms "bullets" of Rain which fall at an accelerated rate.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User performs the necessary handseals and places their hands out in front of them. Using chakra they gather up a large amount of rain and create a wall of solid water. The water is dense and difficult to move through, thus protecting the user from most taijutsu attack and fire attacks. Earth based jutsu and Lighting jutsu are highly effective against this technique. The user must keep his hands connected into the wall at all times or the wall will return to its normal state. If struck by electricity it will move through the water and strike the user as well.



Perform some hand seals and point your hands outwards. Gather some Rain water, which is then formed into a solid like wall, tanking Taijutsu and Fire attacks but making you vulnerable to Lightning. Hands must stay connected to the wall to keep it in shape.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By sending subtle chakra waves into the clouds, the user is able to create unusually large nuclei for the water droplets to condense on. The end result is big raindrops that fall to the ground at a faster then normal rate. They aren't big or fast enough to cause any real damage, but they are quite distracting.



Send some Rain based chakra into the clouds, to create large nuclei for raindrops to condense on and become bigger. They then fall faster, and are quite distracting.
(Ame Ame Tama) - Raining Rain Bullets - multi shot from above, can't be sent back at you, B rank is good and it's hard for them to tell it's coming. Can be a good destraction.

Toku no Ame) - Shield of Rain - a nice counter to tai users and other speedsters, it's a shame it needs handseals. I watched the film Now you see me 2, he "controls the rain" in that making a wall of rain like this, would be great with hand gestures more than anything but still, it's basically a water wall. Don't get why it's weak to lightning though.

(Ooki Kouu no Jutsu) - Big Rain Skill - basically seems like a form of heavy rain that annoys and soaks them. Can use this to make them extremely wet to follow up with lightning. Or could you use this to focus and create a water source in a desired locaiton like behind them? Or would it slow them down while running?

Sorry for the late reply sensei :(
 

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No to both, it wouldn't be enough water. Its cool xD Ik you're busy.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique defines the users chakra control and for tactical measures for other techniques. The user creates the necessary handseals and every rain drop stops in mid air or wherever they are



A simple technique where you will use your chakra and form the necessary hand seals in order to stop all rain drops in mid air, leaving them hanging where they are. Cool to make a dramatic entrance in Amegakure, or to simply stop Rain users from using rain based techniques. Great technique.


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: A simple jutsu that gathers the rain with chakra and then forms it into a dagger-like weapon. The chakra gives the water a more solid form so that it can be used for attacks. The water returns to normal shortly after creation. When the dagger cuts into something the water from the dagger expands within the cut to increase the damage.



A technique where you will gather rain into a dagger like weapon, where its given a solid form in order to be used for attacks. However, it forms back into water shortly after being made and once the dagger impales something, the water from the dagger expands within the wound, increasing the overall damage of the cut.


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A helpful technique for staying dry in the rain. After a few short handsigns, the user can create an invisible umbrella by extending their arm over their head and holding an open palm towards the sky. This "umbrella stops all rain, but cannot stop jutsu that take a more solid form like the Rain spear technique. This technique was actually made to stop the acid rain technique and other average falling rain techniques from touching the user.



Lastly, a real umbrella like technique where you will form some hand seals and extend your arm over your head with an open palm. This creates an umbrella like technique which stops all normal rain except the more solid based ones. Great for using against Acid Rain technique.
 
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