quick preview of my new story

[SandFreak]

ks was born in a cottege on top of a hill near the forest she felt safe in the protected environment where her parents raised her since the day she was born a year later before her 13th birthday her parents left to go on a business trip in hawaii thinking lightly upon the matter she walked down the hill entering the forest for a stroll


that is all I have so far,

 

[Unpredictable]

Nice Beginning

 

[Yuka]

It looks Great

 

[Venus]

Good Intro

 

[SandFreak]

Thank You very Much For your support sage

 

[Jewelz]

*wags her tail* i want to see more =^-^=

 

[Colour]

Looks good but add the fullstops.

 

[RukiaKuchiki]

it was really short but Good