the set up follows my other series set up naruto: rise of the uzumaki. but two totaly differnt things.
news caster hello im steve adkins and welcome to 32 alive. todays latest stories follows black watch and gentek's struggle to find alex mercer. the fugitive reponsible for the bio attack on new york city. the attack claimed millions of lives and costs billions in losses.
alex mercer jumps from a building onto a roof of a larger building. he feels his bio mass has grown heavy. he is on his way back to new york. to finish what his host started several months ago. the evolution of the human race is at hand he thought to himself. he leaps onto a street. he walks like any normal person.
Boy LET GO OF HER! (he yells in anger)
alex jumps to a building where he hears the disturbance at his blood begins to flow. he feels the presence of 6 people. 5 males 1 female.
Man get the outta of the way you little prick. (he yells)
the man shoves the teenager onto the pavement. a girl brings a knife out pointing it at the other man. the other 4 gang up on her and one punches her in the face.
girl Run!
the boy gets up. and alex looks intrigued
alex mercer *is he going to run or fight?* hmmmm (he hums in a low tone)
boy you bastards! (he screams)
he grabs the knive the women dropped and charges one of the man. he brings it down in the mans neck blood flows on his hands. he dodges a punch from one man. but a kick to his ribs from the right sends him to his knees.
alex mercer *lets see what they do next*
two of the man restrain the boy. the other man pulls a desert eagle out and puts it at his head.
leader of the gang you've gone done it now! (he says angery)
he walks over to the girl. he points the gun to her head and squeezes the trigger. the sound of the 50 cal rings through out the neighborhood. the boy struggles to get loose. sobbing and cursing.
Boy I'll kill you all! (he screams)
the man puts the gun to his stomach and squeezes the trigger. after the flash they leave in a hurry the boy lies down dying on the pavement. alex mercer jumps down to him.
boy what do you want? (he yells coughing up blood)
alex approaches him slowly. the boys tries to stand up. he manages toget up and walk to the direction of the ones who attacked
alex mercer who are you? (he says in curiosity)
Chris chr-is! (he shouts in pain)
alex mercer chris why where you attacked? (he said in anxeity)
Adam screw you! (he says coughing up more blood)
he falls back down to the pavement
chris im going to die anyway! so go ahead and kill me (he says in anger)
alex runs to his side and puts his hand on chris's shoulder. chris looks up at him. the man with silver eyes and black hair.
alex what if i could give you the chance to kill them (he says happily)
chris i knew you were crazy (he chuckles coughing up blood)
alex mercer clocks ticking (he says sarcastigly)
chris ponders this and he looks over to the dead women. her blood stains the walls and hears police sirens. but they will never make it.
chris DO IT (he says bitterly)
alex mercer as you wish (he says seriously)
alex transforms his hands and elongated bladed weapons he picks up chris. who is now terrified at the site.
chris your al-alex mercer (he says stunned and scared)
alex mercer today you shall see the world for what a hollow shell it really is (he screams)
as if on que after the final breathe of the word he sinks the claws into chris's abdomen and pumps a red liquid into it. chris conciousness begins fade. alex throws him off his claws
alex mercer mission: hunt and kill. targets: the people that killed you (he whispers in happy tone in chris's right ear.)
chris opens his eyes he is in a morque where a coriner is about to cut into his chest. the moriener freaks out and runs out of the office alerting guards. chris gets up and crashes through a window falling a good 50ft and surviving the landing. he looks at him self to make sure wha he did was real and begins to run at in human speeds when he hears police sirens
yep my new series i want some good feedback on this. this is to be released every saturday night. at 10:30pm
good night
news caster hello im steve adkins and welcome to 32 alive. todays latest stories follows black watch and gentek's struggle to find alex mercer. the fugitive reponsible for the bio attack on new york city. the attack claimed millions of lives and costs billions in losses.
alex mercer jumps from a building onto a roof of a larger building. he feels his bio mass has grown heavy. he is on his way back to new york. to finish what his host started several months ago. the evolution of the human race is at hand he thought to himself. he leaps onto a street. he walks like any normal person.
Boy LET GO OF HER! (he yells in anger)
alex jumps to a building where he hears the disturbance at his blood begins to flow. he feels the presence of 6 people. 5 males 1 female.
Man get the outta of the way you little prick. (he yells)
the man shoves the teenager onto the pavement. a girl brings a knife out pointing it at the other man. the other 4 gang up on her and one punches her in the face.
girl Run!
the boy gets up. and alex looks intrigued
alex mercer *is he going to run or fight?* hmmmm (he hums in a low tone)
boy you bastards! (he screams)
he grabs the knive the women dropped and charges one of the man. he brings it down in the mans neck blood flows on his hands. he dodges a punch from one man. but a kick to his ribs from the right sends him to his knees.
alex mercer *lets see what they do next*
two of the man restrain the boy. the other man pulls a desert eagle out and puts it at his head.
leader of the gang you've gone done it now! (he says angery)
he walks over to the girl. he points the gun to her head and squeezes the trigger. the sound of the 50 cal rings through out the neighborhood. the boy struggles to get loose. sobbing and cursing.
Boy I'll kill you all! (he screams)
the man puts the gun to his stomach and squeezes the trigger. after the flash they leave in a hurry the boy lies down dying on the pavement. alex mercer jumps down to him.
boy what do you want? (he yells coughing up blood)
alex approaches him slowly. the boys tries to stand up. he manages toget up and walk to the direction of the ones who attacked
alex mercer who are you? (he says in curiosity)
Chris chr-is! (he shouts in pain)
alex mercer chris why where you attacked? (he said in anxeity)
Adam screw you! (he says coughing up more blood)
he falls back down to the pavement
chris im going to die anyway! so go ahead and kill me (he says in anger)
alex runs to his side and puts his hand on chris's shoulder. chris looks up at him. the man with silver eyes and black hair.
alex what if i could give you the chance to kill them (he says happily)
chris i knew you were crazy (he chuckles coughing up blood)
alex mercer clocks ticking (he says sarcastigly)
chris ponders this and he looks over to the dead women. her blood stains the walls and hears police sirens. but they will never make it.
chris DO IT (he says bitterly)
alex mercer as you wish (he says seriously)
alex transforms his hands and elongated bladed weapons he picks up chris. who is now terrified at the site.
chris your al-alex mercer (he says stunned and scared)
alex mercer today you shall see the world for what a hollow shell it really is (he screams)
as if on que after the final breathe of the word he sinks the claws into chris's abdomen and pumps a red liquid into it. chris conciousness begins fade. alex throws him off his claws
alex mercer mission: hunt and kill. targets: the people that killed you (he whispers in happy tone in chris's right ear.)
chris opens his eyes he is in a morque where a coriner is about to cut into his chest. the moriener freaks out and runs out of the office alerting guards. chris gets up and crashes through a window falling a good 50ft and surviving the landing. he looks at him self to make sure wha he did was real and begins to run at in human speeds when he hears police sirens
yep my new series i want some good feedback on this. this is to be released every saturday night. at 10:30pm
good night
