SoulReaper
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Well here is my fanfiction, it has nothing to do with Naruto.
Enjoy... and dont be to harsh on me plz xD
Prologue
Jack and Garth stepped forwards, entering the cave, and inmediatly they were surrounded by an impenetrable and utter darkness, which not only brought blindness to their eyes, but to their mind as well, making them forget all the thoughts of their homewtown Iellrd?n, the green forests of Iellrd?n, and any sort of thought wich remembered them of light.
Jack and Garth were panting as if they were running for miles, standing in the darkness in the silent cave in which the only sound to be heard were those of their deep breaths.
?Evansco`muttered Jack and an orb of light apperead floating next to him, illuminating the gloomy cave, and bringing back all those faded memories that the darkness took away, Iellrad?n, his friends, his family, the forest, but the best thing to remember was after all was the light, his eyes were wide and they showed fear, but he felt secure in the light.
Both Garth and Jack unsheathed their swords quickly staring at the entrance of the cave, as if they were expecting the devil itself to appear and take away their very soul. But nothing came, it was just them, surrounded by the light orb that Jack summoned, and the spiders that were crawling in the floor.
After some time both of them turned around and kept on going forwards, holding their swords firmly in their hands and looking back constantly. The cave wasn?t very welcoming, there were cobwebs everywhere, spiders crawling in the walls, water droping from above, and the more they ventured into the cave, the less light there was, it was as if the shadows were trying to take over the light, and then, all of the sudden, a sob was heard echoing threw the cave.
?What was that?`asked Jack holding his sword as tight as he could and his eyes wide opened.
Garth didn?t answer, he just kept on walking, his sword ready to strike, while Jack followed behind. They kept on walking for quite a distance untile the sob wasn?t an echo any more, it was clearly heard. It was coming from a little girl, not more than ten years, who sat in the corner over a puddle of blood crying, her arm cut off, blood dripping from a shirt. Jack recognized her and quickly dashed towards her and grabbed her with his left hand.
?Alicia?!`he asked shocked his hand was now stained with her blood.
?J… Jack?`She asked with fear in her voice and she looked up, her eyes were plucked out and blood was pouring from her eyeholes.
Jack dropped his sword in fright and closed his eyes, tears rolling down his eyes and put her head in his chest, while she continued sobbing.
?What did this to you?`Asked Jack angrily.
Alicia stopped sobbing and she muttered, ?It was the Shadows Jack, the Shadows.`
Jack quickly grabbed his sword with his right hand, kept Alice back in the corner and looked towards Garth, a small shadow was moving slowly towards his leg.
?GARTH, GET OUT OF THE SHADOWS!` shouted Jack but it was too late, the shadow got hold of Garth and pulled him to the darkness, loosing him out of sight.
Jack gave five steps forwards, then shocked, he looked back. Alice wasn?t there anymore. Jack started panting, while looking around, then he heard something move behind him, he spun quickly, pulled his sword back and shouted, ?Herfathar Heghl?r!` his blade was covered with flames and he sent a stroke forwards, sending a pheonix covered in flames towards where the sound came from.
There was a blast and Jack heard something fall, he walked towards the direction and the light revealed a creature in the floor with a hole in its chest. The creature?s skin was pitch black, as black as the shadows, Jack didn?t know if the creature had eyes, but if it did have them, they would be the same colour as it?s skin as they weren?t visibles. The creature had huge claws, the size of Jack?s forearm, and it?s tail was as sharp as the blade of his sword. Jack then struck his sword to the creature?s head.
He looked around and he a trace of blood which entered a hole in the wall so he walked towards it. The hole was big enought for him to enter so it was possible that both Garth and Alice had been taken in there. Jack couldn?t step forwards, he was to scared, tears rolling again down his cheeks.
?What?s the point, I am not sure if they?re alive?` thought Jack, but then he closed his eyes and thought, ?No… they must be alive, Alice survived after they got her, they must be somewhere in this damn cave`
Jack opened his eyes held his sword as tight as he could and entered the hole with the aid of his orb of light, leaving the passage in darkness, the same darkness he had faced when he entered the cave, the darkness he was afraid off, while memories rushed threw his mind
Enjoy... and dont be to harsh on me plz xD
Prologue
Jack and Garth stepped forwards, entering the cave, and inmediatly they were surrounded by an impenetrable and utter darkness, which not only brought blindness to their eyes, but to their mind as well, making them forget all the thoughts of their homewtown Iellrd?n, the green forests of Iellrd?n, and any sort of thought wich remembered them of light.
Jack and Garth were panting as if they were running for miles, standing in the darkness in the silent cave in which the only sound to be heard were those of their deep breaths.
?Evansco`muttered Jack and an orb of light apperead floating next to him, illuminating the gloomy cave, and bringing back all those faded memories that the darkness took away, Iellrad?n, his friends, his family, the forest, but the best thing to remember was after all was the light, his eyes were wide and they showed fear, but he felt secure in the light.
Both Garth and Jack unsheathed their swords quickly staring at the entrance of the cave, as if they were expecting the devil itself to appear and take away their very soul. But nothing came, it was just them, surrounded by the light orb that Jack summoned, and the spiders that were crawling in the floor.
After some time both of them turned around and kept on going forwards, holding their swords firmly in their hands and looking back constantly. The cave wasn?t very welcoming, there were cobwebs everywhere, spiders crawling in the walls, water droping from above, and the more they ventured into the cave, the less light there was, it was as if the shadows were trying to take over the light, and then, all of the sudden, a sob was heard echoing threw the cave.
?What was that?`asked Jack holding his sword as tight as he could and his eyes wide opened.
Garth didn?t answer, he just kept on walking, his sword ready to strike, while Jack followed behind. They kept on walking for quite a distance untile the sob wasn?t an echo any more, it was clearly heard. It was coming from a little girl, not more than ten years, who sat in the corner over a puddle of blood crying, her arm cut off, blood dripping from a shirt. Jack recognized her and quickly dashed towards her and grabbed her with his left hand.
?Alicia?!`he asked shocked his hand was now stained with her blood.
?J… Jack?`She asked with fear in her voice and she looked up, her eyes were plucked out and blood was pouring from her eyeholes.
Jack dropped his sword in fright and closed his eyes, tears rolling down his eyes and put her head in his chest, while she continued sobbing.
?What did this to you?`Asked Jack angrily.
Alicia stopped sobbing and she muttered, ?It was the Shadows Jack, the Shadows.`
Jack quickly grabbed his sword with his right hand, kept Alice back in the corner and looked towards Garth, a small shadow was moving slowly towards his leg.
?GARTH, GET OUT OF THE SHADOWS!` shouted Jack but it was too late, the shadow got hold of Garth and pulled him to the darkness, loosing him out of sight.
Jack gave five steps forwards, then shocked, he looked back. Alice wasn?t there anymore. Jack started panting, while looking around, then he heard something move behind him, he spun quickly, pulled his sword back and shouted, ?Herfathar Heghl?r!` his blade was covered with flames and he sent a stroke forwards, sending a pheonix covered in flames towards where the sound came from.
There was a blast and Jack heard something fall, he walked towards the direction and the light revealed a creature in the floor with a hole in its chest. The creature?s skin was pitch black, as black as the shadows, Jack didn?t know if the creature had eyes, but if it did have them, they would be the same colour as it?s skin as they weren?t visibles. The creature had huge claws, the size of Jack?s forearm, and it?s tail was as sharp as the blade of his sword. Jack then struck his sword to the creature?s head.
He looked around and he a trace of blood which entered a hole in the wall so he walked towards it. The hole was big enought for him to enter so it was possible that both Garth and Alice had been taken in there. Jack couldn?t step forwards, he was to scared, tears rolling again down his cheeks.
?What?s the point, I am not sure if they?re alive?` thought Jack, but then he closed his eyes and thought, ?No… they must be alive, Alice survived after they got her, they must be somewhere in this damn cave`
Jack opened his eyes held his sword as tight as he could and entered the hole with the aid of his orb of light, leaving the passage in darkness, the same darkness he had faced when he entered the cave, the darkness he was afraid off, while memories rushed threw his mind
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