Zerolegends
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Second Chapter to my Fan Fic, im getting the hang of it i guess xD... again just doing this for fun really xD, still trying to make it... anyways onto Chapter 2...
persona:
Rick:Boy/Son
Jamie:Girl/daughter
Kevin: Deceased
Kelly:Mother/woman
Mr.Henry:Guitar player:Male
9:30PM
The Story Starts out in a hospital, in Room 302, the Family goes to visit Their beloved Father who recently Died from a Construction accident.
Kelly:*sobbing* "Oh! Kevin Please wake up! You cant leave us three behind!"
(Jamie's standing outside the door listening in on the Family's Grief"
(rick is having a flashback about the day before with his father)
Kelly:Kevin Please!... we need you!
(Rick clenches his teeth and begins to Run out to the Door)
Jamie:RICK! Where are you going!? Come back!
(Rick ignores the Call of her sister and Run pasts all the doctors and nurses)
Jamie: Mom im going after him!
(Rick Runs into a Small alley in downtown Manhattan, Trash bags and Glass lied everywhere)
Rick: (What have i done... i never got the chance to say sorry and i never will...)
(Distant Honks can be heard from the next blocks over, Across the street from him a man asks for the Taxi to stop for him, but it moves on anyway. The man tries to run After him shouting "HEY Come back here.")
Rick: (Im so sorry dad...he Remembers the time his dad Play the song Ritual Dance for him..
(Just then a faint noise could be heard coming in from the building)
a light sound)
Strum
(There it is again a very familiar sound)
(Rick couldn't help himself but to go and check out the source of the noise)
(he slightly opens the door, it makes a soft creak)
Creeeeak
(it was a hallway, but at the end of it, there was a faint light The source of the noise was getting louder, slowly making his way tot he end of the hall, his neck stuck out eager to see who it was.)
Step
(when he got to the end of the hallway, there was a door to the left, and a staircase going down and Up. This Must be the first Floor he thought to himself).
*opens door*
(The Noise that he had heard was getting louder, it was the sound of a guitar. With courage he began down The hallway with Multiple doors the path was very dark, the lights were dim, at the end, there was a Larger Door.)
Step
(Rick took careful steps towards the door, but accidently hit something in the dark which made a loud Crash noise.)
Rick: oh no....
(The music stopped)
(Rick felt it was only right to go and show himself, to apologize)
*opens door*
(At first the light was very blinding to rick, but the room became clear. it was a large room filled with Musical instruments, there was a case full of medals and a picture that laid there. There was guitars on the walls, Violins and Violas, Basses, Drums, Cello's, A piano, and many more.
but there was one Guitar that laid on the ground next to the chair, it was plugged into a Box, the Light on it was green. and a Pedal was beside it.)
(Rick Went over to Experiment with the guitar... it was Saddening to see, since it was almost like his fathers. Touching the notes and strumming from left to right. it made the distinctive sound. E..A..D..G..B..E
Rick pressed the pedal which made the Sound echo)
and thus he began playing
???:Well Well don't we have ourselves a Trespasser here? and he thinks he can play the guitar by slapping a couple of notes.
Rick:I'm so sorry... I didnt mean to come in here, im sorry about your guitar as well i dont know how to play a guitar.
The man gave an Uproarious laugh
???: lemme see your hands... Nope never played a note in your life. Listen kid the song was good, but music defines who you are, your didn't much much spirit into that one, sounds like your depressed but your not.
Rick: yeh i have some things going on that's all.
???: You dont gotta talk about it kid. But this place is an Music School, i run this place. Im Henry by the way.
Rick: pleased to meet you
Mr. Henry: Don't mention it kid, now come on get up and get outta here your moms probably worried about ya.
(Just then Rick Realized this was the perfect chance...)
Rick:Wait! i want to learn...
Mr. Henry: Learn ? Learn what?
Rick: I want to learn how to play Music.
Mr. Henry: HAHAHAHA! You want to learn huh? Come on kid i dont got time to teach you
Rick: Please! I'm begging you. I want to be like my Father
Mr. Henry: Oh yeh? your fathers a Guitar player, why dont you go ask him to teach you, Whos your father anyways?
Rick: His name is Kevin and he Died today (looks away from Mr. Henry)
Mr.Henry:... Kevin? as in Kevin Dreamers?
(Mr.Henry's Face looked at him with Disbelief)
Rick: Y-yes... how did you know?
Mr. Henry:*sigh* Alright kid ill teach ya how to play, just get here early tomorrow after school.
Rick: Alright! Thanks Mr. Henry!
Mr. Henry: Go on Beat it...
(Rick Runs excitedly out through the front door)
Mr. Henry: Kevin... you got one hell of a son ya know... Plays like you...
Even looks like you...
(later that night)
Jamie:Rick! There you are (grabs ricks hand)
Rick: OH jamie! I'm so sorry i didn't mean to
Jamie: Dont worry about it, Comon moms getting worried about you.
Rick:jamie... (hugs) i really miss dad right now
Jamie: I do to(closes eyes) i do to...
persona:
Rick:Boy/Son
Jamie:Girl/daughter
Kevin: Deceased
Kelly:Mother/woman
Mr.Henry:Guitar player:Male
9:30PM
The Story Starts out in a hospital, in Room 302, the Family goes to visit Their beloved Father who recently Died from a Construction accident.
Kelly:*sobbing* "Oh! Kevin Please wake up! You cant leave us three behind!"
(Jamie's standing outside the door listening in on the Family's Grief"
(rick is having a flashback about the day before with his father)
Kelly:Kevin Please!... we need you!
(Rick clenches his teeth and begins to Run out to the Door)
Jamie:RICK! Where are you going!? Come back!
(Rick ignores the Call of her sister and Run pasts all the doctors and nurses)
Jamie: Mom im going after him!
(Rick Runs into a Small alley in downtown Manhattan, Trash bags and Glass lied everywhere)
Rick: (What have i done... i never got the chance to say sorry and i never will...)
(Distant Honks can be heard from the next blocks over, Across the street from him a man asks for the Taxi to stop for him, but it moves on anyway. The man tries to run After him shouting "HEY Come back here.")
Rick: (Im so sorry dad...he Remembers the time his dad Play the song Ritual Dance for him..
(Just then a faint noise could be heard coming in from the building)
a light sound)
Strum
(There it is again a very familiar sound)
(Rick couldn't help himself but to go and check out the source of the noise)
(he slightly opens the door, it makes a soft creak)
Creeeeak
(it was a hallway, but at the end of it, there was a faint light The source of the noise was getting louder, slowly making his way tot he end of the hall, his neck stuck out eager to see who it was.)
Step
(when he got to the end of the hallway, there was a door to the left, and a staircase going down and Up. This Must be the first Floor he thought to himself).
*opens door*
(The Noise that he had heard was getting louder, it was the sound of a guitar. With courage he began down The hallway with Multiple doors the path was very dark, the lights were dim, at the end, there was a Larger Door.)
Step
(Rick took careful steps towards the door, but accidently hit something in the dark which made a loud Crash noise.)
Rick: oh no....
(The music stopped)
(Rick felt it was only right to go and show himself, to apologize)
*opens door*
(At first the light was very blinding to rick, but the room became clear. it was a large room filled with Musical instruments, there was a case full of medals and a picture that laid there. There was guitars on the walls, Violins and Violas, Basses, Drums, Cello's, A piano, and many more.
but there was one Guitar that laid on the ground next to the chair, it was plugged into a Box, the Light on it was green. and a Pedal was beside it.)
(Rick Went over to Experiment with the guitar... it was Saddening to see, since it was almost like his fathers. Touching the notes and strumming from left to right. it made the distinctive sound. E..A..D..G..B..E
Rick pressed the pedal which made the Sound echo)
and thus he began playing
???:Well Well don't we have ourselves a Trespasser here? and he thinks he can play the guitar by slapping a couple of notes.
Rick:I'm so sorry... I didnt mean to come in here, im sorry about your guitar as well i dont know how to play a guitar.
The man gave an Uproarious laugh
???: lemme see your hands... Nope never played a note in your life. Listen kid the song was good, but music defines who you are, your didn't much much spirit into that one, sounds like your depressed but your not.
Rick: yeh i have some things going on that's all.
???: You dont gotta talk about it kid. But this place is an Music School, i run this place. Im Henry by the way.
Rick: pleased to meet you
Mr. Henry: Don't mention it kid, now come on get up and get outta here your moms probably worried about ya.
(Just then Rick Realized this was the perfect chance...)
Rick:Wait! i want to learn...
Mr. Henry: Learn ? Learn what?
Rick: I want to learn how to play Music.
Mr. Henry: HAHAHAHA! You want to learn huh? Come on kid i dont got time to teach you
Rick: Please! I'm begging you. I want to be like my Father
Mr. Henry: Oh yeh? your fathers a Guitar player, why dont you go ask him to teach you, Whos your father anyways?
Rick: His name is Kevin and he Died today (looks away from Mr. Henry)
Mr.Henry:... Kevin? as in Kevin Dreamers?
(Mr.Henry's Face looked at him with Disbelief)
Rick: Y-yes... how did you know?
Mr. Henry:*sigh* Alright kid ill teach ya how to play, just get here early tomorrow after school.
Rick: Alright! Thanks Mr. Henry!
Mr. Henry: Go on Beat it...
(Rick Runs excitedly out through the front door)
Mr. Henry: Kevin... you got one hell of a son ya know... Plays like you...
Even looks like you...
(later that night)
Jamie:Rick! There you are (grabs ricks hand)
Rick: OH jamie! I'm so sorry i didn't mean to
Jamie: Dont worry about it, Comon moms getting worried about you.
Rick:jamie... (hugs) i really miss dad right now
Jamie: I do to(closes eyes) i do to...
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