Zerolegends
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... o.0 this story is just an Experiment xD... as a matter of fact, ive never written a Fan-faction like this, but i have wrote multiple Short stories and "books" before xD... but just thought this would be Fun to do and Try out something new Anyways moving on, yeh My grammer sucks I know.. just deal with it xD.... I made this chapter and dedicate it to Michael Hedges R.I.P. "genius" and to many other awesome Guitar players out there Sorry if this sucks... but this is my first time doing a Fan fic not sure how the format is done xD This story is About a kid named rick who is a childhood guitar player/ prodigy
The story takes place in new york city during "A" Great depression, in the borough of Brooklyn, in an apartment. A Family Sits awaiting for the Man of the house to Return from his job.
persona:
Jamie: little sister;girl;Age:14
Kevin:Father:Man:Age:43
Kelly;mother:Woman:Age:30
Rick:Brother:Boy;Age:7
Mr. Henry : Guitar Player;Age:55
Frank:Boss:male:Age 50
Chapter 1
7:55 PM
Jamie:*sigh* Dad's Late again... What's the deal?
Kelly:*looks at the clock on the wall above the Dining room table*
Your Father's working very hard young lady, he is the reason we still have this nice house and food on the table.
Jamie:Well we're gonna starve to death if we sit here any longer...
(just then the lock at the front door, makes a Distinct Click)
*door opens*
Kevin:Hi everyone,*bends over to take off his shoes* sorry i'm late, there was traffic everywhere i tur... oh Guys you didn't have to wait for me...
Rick: Daddy!!!!! (Gets off the Chair) (runs over to Kevin and Pounces on him)
Kevin: Whoa! Getting Bigger everyday Champ!
(Rick Smiles as he clings on the his fathers Neck)
Kevin: Comon lets eat!
(The Family spends the next 30 Minute eating in awkward Silence)
Jamie: Thanks for the meal Mom!(Wipes mouth and heads over to her room)
Rick: DADDY! Play ywor gwuitar! Please, oh Wont You please!
Kevin: *chuckles* Alright kiddo
Kelly
clearing off the table) Rick Finish your homework first!
Rick: Aww oh kay (Dragging his feet and his head hanging down, while walking towards his room)
Kelly: Now that the kids are gone... we need to talk Kevin. About your Job...
Kevin: *sighs* Kelly we've been over this i cant do anything about it
(Resting on the couch)... The hours are getting late for me because of the new construction project, and you Know Frank how he always is (trying to imitate Franks Deep and Hoarse voice) "Comon Boys! You know my Motto Get it done! or Make like a tree and beat it!".
Kelly: Your Son has a Play Tomorrow, and he expects you to be there.
Kevin: You already know my ans...
Kelly: Kevin! you know this will break his poor little heart, hes been dying to do this play! You don't Even know what Role hes playing or the Play itself for that matter!
Kevin: *sigh* Look Kelly, Im trying really Hard babe i really am (Gets up and walks over to kelly who is now washing the dishes)
(Kevin hugs kelly from behind)
Kelly: Oh kevin...
Kevin: Everything's going to be fine alright, ill talk with Rick and ill tell him ill make it up to him alright??
Kelly: That wont fix anything... Kevin... Rick admires you. I know your working hard and trying to get the bills paid but you need to live your life too, and focus on the kids as well.
Kevin: (kisses her head) Well make this work babe, i promise... I love you (smiles)
Kelly: Kevin... I love you to.
(Kevin walks over to Ricks Room)
(rick is on his bed doing his Math homework from school)
Kevin:Hey Champ! How're you coming along with your homework?
Rick: i'm Done daddy, now can you pway your gwuitar! (Smiles)
Kevin: Yeh sure thing kiddo. but first daddys got to talk to you alright?
Rick: Sure What about?
Kevin: Its about your play... Daddy cant make it tomorrow...
Rick: WHY NOT!!
Kevin: Because Daddy has to do grown up things
Rick: (filling with anger) I dont care! i want you to be there !
Kevin: Now Rick Daddy will make it up to you okay?
RickAlmost in tears from being angry)NO... i just want you at my play!
Kevin: We'll go to disney land and see mickey mouse again!
Rick:I hate you dad! (goes under his bed covers)
Kevin:*sighs* (walks up and out of the room)
(The Next Day During the play, Peter Pan near the ending)
Girl as wendy: Oh, Peter! Michael! John! We’re going home!
Peter Pan(rick):Man the capstan! Hoist anchor! Pixie dust!!
(rick scans the Area for his father, Mother and Sister)
(Rick looks in dissatisfaction to see his father missing)
(Meanwhile at the Building site, they are building a Skyscraper, Frank is on the 38th floor and Kevin is working on the 39th, )
Kevin: Frank im gonna need more screws up here!
Frank: Go get em yourself! (hammering in some Nuts to the Support beam)
Kevin: Frank its right beside your, just toss it up here.
Frank: Do i have to do everything myself!
(frank tosses a bunch of nuts,screws and bolts from the box next to him, to Kevin.)
Kevin:thanks partner!
(Kevin resumes his role and begins hammering Nuts into the Beams.)
Frank:Lewis Come over here will ya and Finish the Rest of this off for me, ima go to the next Beam.
Lewis: im tyeing off the rest of these tanks Frank.
Frank: *Grumbles* Kevin go finish his job, your to slow!
Kevin: fine whatever
(Lewis and Kevin exchanges Spots.)
(Lewis drops a Rope with a knot)
(as Lewis Walks away Kevin steps in to the knot)
(the tank starts to stray off to the edge)
Kevin: *mutter Mutter* Why do i have to do this... Slow... bah what does he know...
(kevin notices and feels a Strong pull to his leg)
Kevin:huh...? what the heck!?
(the Tank slides off the edge with Kevin following close behind)
Kevin: AGGGHHHH HELP !!!
Frank: Huh? What the hell! KEVIN!!!!
(he immediately stops what hes doing and rushes down to help him, he reaches out his arm to grab Kevin but misses by a hair)
(Kevins falls off to the edge Screaming and spiraling into impending doom)
Frank: KEVIN!!! KEVIN!!!!!!
(THUD!!!)
Frank: Oh My God... Someone call an ambulance!!!!!!
(At the school after the play)
Kelly: Oh my little ANGEL WAS SO CUTE TODAY! YOU DID A GREAT JOB!!!!
(her cellphone begins to ring in her Purse)
Kelly: hello? Yes? ... (She brings her hand over her mouth and begins to cry)... *whispers softly* Oh my god...
The story takes place in new york city during "A" Great depression, in the borough of Brooklyn, in an apartment. A Family Sits awaiting for the Man of the house to Return from his job.
persona:
Jamie: little sister;girl;Age:14
Kevin:Father:Man:Age:43
Kelly;mother:Woman:Age:30
Rick:Brother:Boy;Age:7
Mr. Henry : Guitar Player;Age:55
Frank:Boss:male:Age 50
Chapter 1
7:55 PM
Jamie:*sigh* Dad's Late again... What's the deal?
Kelly:*looks at the clock on the wall above the Dining room table*
Your Father's working very hard young lady, he is the reason we still have this nice house and food on the table.
Jamie:Well we're gonna starve to death if we sit here any longer...
(just then the lock at the front door, makes a Distinct Click)
*door opens*
Kevin:Hi everyone,*bends over to take off his shoes* sorry i'm late, there was traffic everywhere i tur... oh Guys you didn't have to wait for me...
Rick: Daddy!!!!! (Gets off the Chair) (runs over to Kevin and Pounces on him)
Kevin: Whoa! Getting Bigger everyday Champ!
(Rick Smiles as he clings on the his fathers Neck)
Kevin: Comon lets eat!
(The Family spends the next 30 Minute eating in awkward Silence)
Jamie: Thanks for the meal Mom!(Wipes mouth and heads over to her room)
Rick: DADDY! Play ywor gwuitar! Please, oh Wont You please!
Kevin: *chuckles* Alright kiddo
Kelly
clearing off the table) Rick Finish your homework first!Rick: Aww oh kay (Dragging his feet and his head hanging down, while walking towards his room)
Kelly: Now that the kids are gone... we need to talk Kevin. About your Job...
Kevin: *sighs* Kelly we've been over this i cant do anything about it
(Resting on the couch)... The hours are getting late for me because of the new construction project, and you Know Frank how he always is (trying to imitate Franks Deep and Hoarse voice) "Comon Boys! You know my Motto Get it done! or Make like a tree and beat it!".
Kelly: Your Son has a Play Tomorrow, and he expects you to be there.
Kevin: You already know my ans...
Kelly: Kevin! you know this will break his poor little heart, hes been dying to do this play! You don't Even know what Role hes playing or the Play itself for that matter!
Kevin: *sigh* Look Kelly, Im trying really Hard babe i really am (Gets up and walks over to kelly who is now washing the dishes)
(Kevin hugs kelly from behind)
Kelly: Oh kevin...
Kevin: Everything's going to be fine alright, ill talk with Rick and ill tell him ill make it up to him alright??
Kelly: That wont fix anything... Kevin... Rick admires you. I know your working hard and trying to get the bills paid but you need to live your life too, and focus on the kids as well.
Kevin: (kisses her head) Well make this work babe, i promise... I love you (smiles)
Kelly: Kevin... I love you to.
(Kevin walks over to Ricks Room)
(rick is on his bed doing his Math homework from school)
Kevin:Hey Champ! How're you coming along with your homework?
Rick: i'm Done daddy, now can you pway your gwuitar! (Smiles)
Kevin: Yeh sure thing kiddo. but first daddys got to talk to you alright?
Rick: Sure What about?
Kevin: Its about your play... Daddy cant make it tomorrow...
Rick: WHY NOT!!
Kevin: Because Daddy has to do grown up things
Rick: (filling with anger) I dont care! i want you to be there !
Kevin: Now Rick Daddy will make it up to you okay?
Rick
Almost in tears from being angry)NO... i just want you at my play!Kevin: We'll go to disney land and see mickey mouse again!
Rick:I hate you dad! (goes under his bed covers)
Kevin:*sighs* (walks up and out of the room)
(The Next Day During the play, Peter Pan near the ending)
Girl as wendy: Oh, Peter! Michael! John! We’re going home!
Peter Pan(rick):Man the capstan! Hoist anchor! Pixie dust!!
(rick scans the Area for his father, Mother and Sister)
(Rick looks in dissatisfaction to see his father missing)
(Meanwhile at the Building site, they are building a Skyscraper, Frank is on the 38th floor and Kevin is working on the 39th, )
Kevin: Frank im gonna need more screws up here!
Frank: Go get em yourself! (hammering in some Nuts to the Support beam)
Kevin: Frank its right beside your, just toss it up here.
Frank: Do i have to do everything myself!
(frank tosses a bunch of nuts,screws and bolts from the box next to him, to Kevin.)
Kevin:thanks partner!
(Kevin resumes his role and begins hammering Nuts into the Beams.)
Frank:Lewis Come over here will ya and Finish the Rest of this off for me, ima go to the next Beam.
Lewis: im tyeing off the rest of these tanks Frank.
Frank: *Grumbles* Kevin go finish his job, your to slow!
Kevin: fine whatever
(Lewis and Kevin exchanges Spots.)
(Lewis drops a Rope with a knot)
(as Lewis Walks away Kevin steps in to the knot)
(the tank starts to stray off to the edge)
Kevin: *mutter Mutter* Why do i have to do this... Slow... bah what does he know...
(kevin notices and feels a Strong pull to his leg)
Kevin:huh...? what the heck!?
(the Tank slides off the edge with Kevin following close behind)
Kevin: AGGGHHHH HELP !!!
Frank: Huh? What the hell! KEVIN!!!!
(he immediately stops what hes doing and rushes down to help him, he reaches out his arm to grab Kevin but misses by a hair)
(Kevins falls off to the edge Screaming and spiraling into impending doom)
Frank: KEVIN!!! KEVIN!!!!!!
(THUD!!!)
Frank: Oh My God... Someone call an ambulance!!!!!!
(At the school after the play)
Kelly: Oh my little ANGEL WAS SO CUTE TODAY! YOU DID A GREAT JOB!!!!
(her cellphone begins to ring in her Purse)
Kelly: hello? Yes? ... (She brings her hand over her mouth and begins to cry)... *whispers softly* Oh my god...
