Prodigies Reborn!: Chapter 6

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Titan runs clockwise around the bunch, as Platinum runs counter-clockwise. The gang goes into a defensive position. They hurdle up closely together and each faces a different direction, making a 5-point star formation.
Itachi: Sharingan!
Itachi tries to read the twins' movements, but their speed is just too great. The only things Itachi can make out are blue blurs from their Lightning Armor. The twins kick up the speed even more and creates a tornado of both lightning and wind. Minato, Itachi, Shindo, Aizu, and Keiko are in the eye of the unnatural disaster.
Titan and Platinum: Lightning Tornado!
Since the two aren't actually shinobi, they don't know any jutsu. They've came up with their own combination attacks and being the massive beast-men that they are, wrestling-style fighting(better known as nintaijutsu) is what they've adapted to in fighting their prey.
Being in the center of a source of such incredible speed, the five prodigies are losing oxygen. They hold their ground to avoid being tossed around like salad. They each hold their arms in front of their faces, in attempt to block the raging winds from entering their airways.

Aizu: Can't...breathe!
Minato: Just hold on a little longer!
The mini storm makes a ferocious, loud musical of raging winds and lightning, so one must yell for others to hear em.
Keiko: I've got an idea! Shindo, Itachi, Aizu! Grab a hold of me and don't let go!
Minato: (Man, they're lucky.)
Minato wishes that he got permission from Keiko to grab her somewhere....but, he quickly erases that thought.
Itachi, Aizu, and Shindo each places a hand on Keiko's shoulder. She uses Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole to sink herself, Shindo, Aizu, and Itachi into the ground. Minato is left alone on the surface with the twin savages, but he knows what Keiko expects him to do.
Minato: (Good thinking, Keiko. I've got this!) Wind Release: Rotation!
A humongous amount of chakra is released from Minato's body.
Having the Uzumaki's legendary chakra reserves, Minato possesses the greatest Rotation ever in the history of the Hyuuga clan. His rotating shield of chakra is three times larger than his cousin Neji has ever released.
Blades of wind are exempted from the spinning ball of chakra, which slices through the twins' tornado. Wind cancels out wind and the blades make contact with the circuiting twins, whom are tossed in the air like ragdolls. Minato stops his assault, along with Platinum's and Titan's. Keiko and the others pop up from the ground. Itachi, Shindo, and Aizu has their arms crossed over their stomachs.

Shindo: Good thing I haven't ate anything today or else things would get messy.
Itachi: I think I'm going to be sick.
Aizu: That's a feeling I would like to never feel again.
Keiko: *chuckles* Sorry, guys. I remember the first time I've used that technique, it was a strange sensation, but I've gotten used to it. *Looks around* Well, at least it seems everything went as I planned. Nice going, Minato! Don't I know you so well?
Minato: Yup! *whispers* Though, I wish we could know each other a little better...
Keiko: Hmm? I didn't hear that last part.
Minato: Oh, nothing. Just said that plan couldn't have gone any better.
Itachi: I think it's too early for celebration, guys...
60 feet away at the edge of the grassfield, lies Platinum and Titan. They slowly rise to their feet, seeming to be uncoordinated.
Titan: Me.....dizzy.
Platinum: Head....hurts.
Minato: What?! Those guys should've been shredded into gazillion pieces!
Shindo: Their bodies must be as durable as steel.
Minato: Okay! Then we'll just have to up our game! Like I said earlier, Shindo and I will be the biggest assets in this battle since those freaks use lightning.
Keiko: Alright, you two can have the majority of the fun. Next time, I'm going to be the MVP!
Itachi: Minato, Shindo. We've got your backs.
Aizu: Definitely.
Minato: Thanks. Okay Shindo, let's do this!
Minato pulls out his Demon Wind Shuriken and Shindo pulls out his katana.

Author's Note
I think this is the best chapter I've written so far. I hope you guys feel the same.xd
 

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Haha nice one.....a bit shorter than the previous one though I feel :p
N hey how come neji is minato's cousin?....he should be his uncle right?
 

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I guess it was a lil shorter or i'm thinking this because it was awesome one??!!! :D
great!! Great to see Minato in action xd and.... I like the part when "Minato wishes to grab Keiko somewhere xd " :p
oh i forgot to tell last time,the names Titan nd Platinum was kinda cool (but they are not so cool xd xd lol)
Nice one :D
 

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like the chapter
Thanks, bro:)
I guess it was a lil shorter or i'm thinking this because it was awesome one??!!! :D
great!! Great to see Minato in action xd and.... I like the part when "Minato wishes to grab Keiko somewhere xd " :p
oh i forgot to tell last time,the names Titan nd Platinum was kinda cool (but they are not so cool xd xd lol)
Nice one :D
My bad, I'll make the chapters longer:)
Lol I'm glad you're liking his personality. I've got to work on the others personalities a bit more.
Haha thanks. Don't worry, the gang has some cool, badass villians to fight in the futurexd
Like it! ^.^ Great chapter. Just keep doing what you are doing! :D
Thanks, I will!:D
Thanks, dude! So glad I'm not disappointingxd
 

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Yeahhhh! New chapter xd. It was kinda short, but it was expected due to the introduction of the battle :D Next chapter is going to be super epic with moves that are going to be used, I'm guessing? +Rep
 
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