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(last time sakura and her daughter saruna went to the village of the hidden grass to heal the people who were sick from a disease. after the people were cured they held a feast for them in the evening for them. Saruna sneaks out during the feast to practise her new ninjutsu which is the particle style taught to her by her mother after finding out that she and her twin brother Sasuren were born as kkenkai touta. In the course of her practise she discovers a little girl called rena who knows her who wants to be a ninja like her. The two ended up having their interaction and fun and fell asleep. after some hours they wake up to find a column of smoke coming out of the village and they come only to find out that the village has been attacked and no one is around.now back to story
Chapter 1
(the girls look around to see whether anyone is there. saruna calls for her mom but no answer, rena tries to shout for her parents but also no one answers.Rena starts to cry and saruna comforts her)
Saruna:we will find them. we just to look around for clues.( they split up to search for clues. a few minutes later saruna finds a ninja head band with the image of a hexagon snowflake symbol on it. she becomes suspicious and first and calls rena)
Rena : i have not seen that headband before
Saruna: you haven't but i have seen one like this in our ninja library. we are going to look for them. it looks like they have been captured and taken as prisoners
Rena: but how will we find them we can't follow them on foot.
Saruna:leave that to me.( she bites the tip of her left thumb and weaves summoning signs, she hits the ground with her hand and summons a hawk)
Obiron: it has been a while, princess.
Saruna: nice to see you too obiron. please we need your help. the villagers have been captured and so has my mum we are trying to track them. do you recognise this headband.(she shows the headband to him, the hawk looks surprised when he sees it)
Obiron: that is the symbol for the ninjas of the hidden snow village the experts in ice ninjutsu. they were destroyed by your parents and the rest of the konoha ninjas when they attempted to attack konoha and destroy it. if they are here, then this is bad.
Saruna: i need to find them before they kill anyone.
Obiron: are you sure you can take them. they are powerful.
Saruna:i refuse to give up the rescue for my mom and the people.
Obiron;ok, climb on you two i will help you find the people from the air.( they climb aboard and obiron takes flight in the air)
Chapter 2
(the sun is gradually coming up. saruna and rena have been asleep on obiron while he has been searching from the sky, they soon wake up from their sleep)
obiron;good morning princess did you sleep well?
Saruna:no,i was thinking about my mum.
Rena:so have i been thinking about my parents. i feel very worried.
Obiron: do not worry. you will find them.
Saruna: i never asked how the eagle king is doing.
obiron:you mean my father, he and geitsu my older brother has gone with your father and your twin brother along to train somewhere.
(NB; the eagle king is the legendary eagle from sinbad in arabian nights .but i have decided to use him.he is sasuke's summoning now)
Obiron: i never liked your brother because of his arrogance and the way he treated you in the chuunin exams. i heard of what happened and i have been very angry.
Saruna; i understand, but now sasuren has changed he has now become someone who is humble and now cares about others like me instead of just himself.
Obiron:i am surprise. perphas people do change after all.(soon something catches his eye. he has spotted a big hideout where the snow ninjas are.).i have found them!.
Saruna:where are they?
Obiron: they are few metres ahead. you're sure you want to do this?.
Saruna:i am very sure.(she takes her headband and ties it hard around her forehead. and takes her kunais and some ninja tools).
Obiron
k take two of my feathers both of you and use it to glide down safely to the ground
Sarunak, thanks alot obiron. you are the best summoning a girl could have.
Obiron:anything for you princess. now go before they see you.( the two girls take two of the giant feathers, jump and glide safely to the ground.when they reach the ground.obiron goes back home in a puff of smoke)
chapter 3
(when the girls land safely they follows the footprints of the ninjas till they find the entrance to the hide out. it is guarded by two of the ninjas. saruna tells rena to be silent and crawls away quietly. she soons ambushes those ninjas and defeats them. she asks one of the guards about their leader and where her mom and the rest of the prisoners are)
Snow ninja: the prisoners are locked up in a dungeon on the left but your mother is with her leader in the other room.(saruna takes the keys to the dungeon from him and leaves him on the ground. the ninja smiles and laughs a bit)
Saruna;what's funny?
Snow ninja: your mother was able to take down most of our ninjas but she was defeated by our boss. do not underestimate him. you will even die as you dare to confront him.
(saruna knocks him unconcious and opens the gate. she and rena soon come to the two paths.)
Saruna: as the ninja said. the people are in the other side.take the keys and go and set them free. i will go and deal with the boss myself.
Rena: this is crazy you can't beat him by yourself. let me help you and later we can rescue the people.remember what the ninja said
Saruna:if you want to be a ninja you must first do what must be done.rescue the people while i deal with the boss. do not worry i know i can beat him and i will hold him off long enough for you to get the people to come and help.
(Rena seeing the confidence in saruna eyes, takes the keys and wishes her luck then they both part ways)
Chapter 4
(saruna runs as quickly as she can and later sees the ninjas that are guarding the route to the boss place. she takes them down one by one sliently and she walkes quietly till she gets to the place where the boss is.
Saruna: just like father said. always be silent like the snake and swift as the hawk. mum hold on i am coming.
(she enters the room of the boss and hides in the shadows. she sees her mum trapped in a frozen state and the boss mocking her.)
Zargan:the leader of the konoha hospital and the well known strongest earth element user in konoha village. Haruna sakura. i am surprised that you are here.after you, your husband sasuke and the rest of the ninjas including that hokage naruto defeated my people. now you will all pay. what's the matter sakura? can't lift a finger.
(gives a wicked laugh and touches sakura face, saruna sees this and uses the chance to attack.she throws a shurinken at him and weaves some signs)
Saruna:multiple shadow shurinken(the shurinken multiples and heads straight for zargan. unfortunately he hears the attacks and jumps to the other side quickly, he inhales some air and then he weaves his signs.)
Zargan:ice element: snow frost dragon jutsu( he blows out a black frost dragon from his mouth and it heads straight for where saruna is. she throws a kunai with a paper bombs and jumps to the other side as the explosion nullifies that jutsu.)
Zargan:who are you little girl?.i thought we captured everyone.
Saruna:my name is uchiha saruna and i have come here and stop you. (Zargan looks at her carefully and then remembers who she is and then laughs.)
Zargan:you are the daughter of sasuke and sakura. you are the one who lost to your brother at the chuunin exams. i guess he is the strongest. well i will give you are chance to try since you were able to defeat my guards just to come to me. but you won't last for long.
( he rushes forward with his sword and tries to strike saruna.but she uses the kunai knife to counter it and they start to fight in a fierce manner. Seeing how saruna is keeping up in her taijutsu. he decides to try and destroy her. he clamps his hands.
Zargan:ice element:snow frost dragon jutsu.( he launches that attack at her. saruna quickly weaves some signs to counter.)
Saruna:fire element;great fireball jutsu. (she counters with the fireball, she then runs out of the fog throwing kunais but zargan still parries them)
Zargan:you really are weak for an uchiha . no wonder you couldn't defeat your brother.(he weaves some signs again)this is the jutsu that will destroy you. ice elelment:death blizzard jutsu(saruna rushes toward him,but just as she was about to reach him her movements stop, she becomes paralyzed )
Saruna:why can't i move(she sees herself in a blizzard environment and her body begins to freezes)
Zargan; you are already in my genjutsu. what you are seeing is my powerful genjutsu that paralyzes my opponent by freezing their bodies. they then fall to the ground and gradually suffocate to death (Saruna begins to feel weak,she closes her eyes and activates her sharingan).
Zargan; i won't allow you to use your sharingan.(he clamps his hands, Saruna stops and falls down with pain)
Saruna: i... have failed to get my mum back and rescue the village. i'm sorry everyone.(she closes her eyes)
(later she has a flashback about when she and her mother were about to leave the village, her father comes to meet them)
Sasuke: Saruna, come here for a moment(she approaches)
Saruna; yes father?
Sasuke; i know how much you want to be strong and powerful as your brother. and you haven't been successful always.(she looks downhearted).
But i know that you can be stronger like your brother. Your power will eventually come as you train hard and always remember, you are an uchiha and my daughter. i will always be proud of you for who you are and what you can be. Your power is from within and not from outside. remember that.
(She becomes encouraged by her father's words.)
Saruna: thank you father, i will do my best and surpass my limit.
(As the flashback ends and she reflects on what her father said)
Saruna:it is true, i can't give up now. for the my sake and the sake of everyone, i can't fail. After all, that is what Naruto-sama has always been telling us to do.
(she struggles and gets up and activates her sharingan, she then yells at zargan who was about to leave)
Saruna: hey, i am not done yet. i have a score to settle with you.
(Zargan turns is back in surprise to find her getting up from the ground)
Zargan: what?!. you survived my genjutsu, no one has ever survived it before.
Saruna: you underestimate me. ( she stares at him as her sharingan evolves to its final basic form. Zargan looks in horror)
Zargan:that's it!!!. just die already( he weaves some signs ) ice element: twin black dragon blizzard.( he releases that attack towards her, Saruna just stands stills then weaves some signs and claps her hands.)
Saruna: particle element;dissmantling atomic wave
( she release her hands and sends the atomic wave and nullifies zargan's attack. it continues to head toward zargan. Upon seeing that attack he ducks., when he gets up and turns around he sees a large hole on the wall.
Zargan:damnit, this girl is strong. Take this!!
( he repeats his attack again and saruna weaves some signs again)
Saruna: particle element; atomic dismantling jutsu.(she releases that attack again and nullifies the attack).
Saruna: my particle element can nullify anything by turning them into an atomic form.(she stops her technique and run towards him)
Zargan;why you?
( he repeats his attack again and launches it at her. Saruna counters with the fireball jutsu, as the smoke was clearing zargan launches his repeated attack again. Seeing that there was no reponse, he smiles thinking he has won,he hears a crack from the ground, all of a sudden saruna comes out of the ground and punches him into the sky and she also jumps to him.)
Zargan:why won't you fall?
Saruna: your arrogance and underestimation of me are your downfall. i may not have the power and skills like my brother or father. but the thing i have which will make me become as powerful as them is my determination. This is for all the trouble you have caused. Lions barrage.
( she hits him hard on the gut and send him straight to the ground with a loud crash.after the fight, saruna lands and goes to break the ice genjutsu on sakura)
Sakura: saruna, what happened?
Saruna:it is ok mum, i came here to save you
Sakura:what about zargan?. i have defeated him.
(sakura looks surprised at her daughter. but smiles and hugs her. just then zargan gets out of the rubble. he is weak and very angry)
Zargan; you think this is over. i am just about to get started
(he attempts to weaves some signs. Suddenly he is pierced with some shurikein from outside. Saruna sees that it is rena and the villagers who have come to help.)
Rena: i did as you told me. but you didn't think i will miss the action will.
Zargan;you little tart.( as he just turned around, sakura quickly reaches him and uses her fist to punch his gut very hard killing him instantly)
Sakura: that was for harming my daughter and everyone.
Epilogue
(The next day the villagers come to see sakura and saruna off.)
Village elder: thanks for everything you have done sakura especially you saruna. you are indeed like your father and mother. Thank you for coming to rescue us.
Saruna:i couldn't have done it without rena. she did great. she has the potential to be a ninja.(people cheer for rena as she comes to saruna)
Rena: thanks for teaching me what it is like to be a ninja. i will train hard and hopefully we will meet again.
Saruna; we will.
(the villagers say their goodbyes as sakura and saruna leave, on the way to the konoha village saruna demonstrates her mastering of her particle element to her mum. Sakura looks please that saruna has finally mastered her technique)
Saruna:mum, thanks for teaching me this technique. this battle has taught me never to give up on myself and to work hard to be as strong as you and dad. never will i doubt myself again.
Sakura:well done saruna.
( she smiles as they reach the konoha village)
THE END
Chapter 1
(the girls look around to see whether anyone is there. saruna calls for her mom but no answer, rena tries to shout for her parents but also no one answers.Rena starts to cry and saruna comforts her)
Saruna:we will find them. we just to look around for clues.( they split up to search for clues. a few minutes later saruna finds a ninja head band with the image of a hexagon snowflake symbol on it. she becomes suspicious and first and calls rena)
Rena : i have not seen that headband before
Saruna: you haven't but i have seen one like this in our ninja library. we are going to look for them. it looks like they have been captured and taken as prisoners
Rena: but how will we find them we can't follow them on foot.
Saruna:leave that to me.( she bites the tip of her left thumb and weaves summoning signs, she hits the ground with her hand and summons a hawk)
Obiron: it has been a while, princess.
Saruna: nice to see you too obiron. please we need your help. the villagers have been captured and so has my mum we are trying to track them. do you recognise this headband.(she shows the headband to him, the hawk looks surprised when he sees it)
Obiron: that is the symbol for the ninjas of the hidden snow village the experts in ice ninjutsu. they were destroyed by your parents and the rest of the konoha ninjas when they attempted to attack konoha and destroy it. if they are here, then this is bad.
Saruna: i need to find them before they kill anyone.
Obiron: are you sure you can take them. they are powerful.
Saruna:i refuse to give up the rescue for my mom and the people.
Obiron;ok, climb on you two i will help you find the people from the air.( they climb aboard and obiron takes flight in the air)
Chapter 2
(the sun is gradually coming up. saruna and rena have been asleep on obiron while he has been searching from the sky, they soon wake up from their sleep)
obiron;good morning princess did you sleep well?
Saruna:no,i was thinking about my mum.
Rena:so have i been thinking about my parents. i feel very worried.
Obiron: do not worry. you will find them.
Saruna: i never asked how the eagle king is doing.
obiron:you mean my father, he and geitsu my older brother has gone with your father and your twin brother along to train somewhere.
(NB; the eagle king is the legendary eagle from sinbad in arabian nights .but i have decided to use him.he is sasuke's summoning now)
Obiron: i never liked your brother because of his arrogance and the way he treated you in the chuunin exams. i heard of what happened and i have been very angry.
Saruna; i understand, but now sasuren has changed he has now become someone who is humble and now cares about others like me instead of just himself.
Obiron:i am surprise. perphas people do change after all.(soon something catches his eye. he has spotted a big hideout where the snow ninjas are.).i have found them!.
Saruna:where are they?
Obiron: they are few metres ahead. you're sure you want to do this?.
Saruna:i am very sure.(she takes her headband and ties it hard around her forehead. and takes her kunais and some ninja tools).
Obiron
k take two of my feathers both of you and use it to glide down safely to the groundSaruna
k, thanks alot obiron. you are the best summoning a girl could have.Obiron:anything for you princess. now go before they see you.( the two girls take two of the giant feathers, jump and glide safely to the ground.when they reach the ground.obiron goes back home in a puff of smoke)
chapter 3
(when the girls land safely they follows the footprints of the ninjas till they find the entrance to the hide out. it is guarded by two of the ninjas. saruna tells rena to be silent and crawls away quietly. she soons ambushes those ninjas and defeats them. she asks one of the guards about their leader and where her mom and the rest of the prisoners are)
Snow ninja: the prisoners are locked up in a dungeon on the left but your mother is with her leader in the other room.(saruna takes the keys to the dungeon from him and leaves him on the ground. the ninja smiles and laughs a bit)
Saruna;what's funny?
Snow ninja: your mother was able to take down most of our ninjas but she was defeated by our boss. do not underestimate him. you will even die as you dare to confront him.
(saruna knocks him unconcious and opens the gate. she and rena soon come to the two paths.)
Saruna: as the ninja said. the people are in the other side.take the keys and go and set them free. i will go and deal with the boss myself.
Rena: this is crazy you can't beat him by yourself. let me help you and later we can rescue the people.remember what the ninja said
Saruna:if you want to be a ninja you must first do what must be done.rescue the people while i deal with the boss. do not worry i know i can beat him and i will hold him off long enough for you to get the people to come and help.
(Rena seeing the confidence in saruna eyes, takes the keys and wishes her luck then they both part ways)
Chapter 4
(saruna runs as quickly as she can and later sees the ninjas that are guarding the route to the boss place. she takes them down one by one sliently and she walkes quietly till she gets to the place where the boss is.
Saruna: just like father said. always be silent like the snake and swift as the hawk. mum hold on i am coming.
(she enters the room of the boss and hides in the shadows. she sees her mum trapped in a frozen state and the boss mocking her.)
Zargan:the leader of the konoha hospital and the well known strongest earth element user in konoha village. Haruna sakura. i am surprised that you are here.after you, your husband sasuke and the rest of the ninjas including that hokage naruto defeated my people. now you will all pay. what's the matter sakura? can't lift a finger.
(gives a wicked laugh and touches sakura face, saruna sees this and uses the chance to attack.she throws a shurinken at him and weaves some signs)
Saruna:multiple shadow shurinken(the shurinken multiples and heads straight for zargan. unfortunately he hears the attacks and jumps to the other side quickly, he inhales some air and then he weaves his signs.)
Zargan:ice element: snow frost dragon jutsu( he blows out a black frost dragon from his mouth and it heads straight for where saruna is. she throws a kunai with a paper bombs and jumps to the other side as the explosion nullifies that jutsu.)
Zargan:who are you little girl?.i thought we captured everyone.
Saruna:my name is uchiha saruna and i have come here and stop you. (Zargan looks at her carefully and then remembers who she is and then laughs.)
Zargan:you are the daughter of sasuke and sakura. you are the one who lost to your brother at the chuunin exams. i guess he is the strongest. well i will give you are chance to try since you were able to defeat my guards just to come to me. but you won't last for long.
( he rushes forward with his sword and tries to strike saruna.but she uses the kunai knife to counter it and they start to fight in a fierce manner. Seeing how saruna is keeping up in her taijutsu. he decides to try and destroy her. he clamps his hands.
Zargan:ice element:snow frost dragon jutsu.( he launches that attack at her. saruna quickly weaves some signs to counter.)
Saruna:fire element;great fireball jutsu. (she counters with the fireball, she then runs out of the fog throwing kunais but zargan still parries them)
Zargan:you really are weak for an uchiha . no wonder you couldn't defeat your brother.(he weaves some signs again)this is the jutsu that will destroy you. ice elelment:death blizzard jutsu(saruna rushes toward him,but just as she was about to reach him her movements stop, she becomes paralyzed )
Saruna:why can't i move(she sees herself in a blizzard environment and her body begins to freezes)
Zargan; you are already in my genjutsu. what you are seeing is my powerful genjutsu that paralyzes my opponent by freezing their bodies. they then fall to the ground and gradually suffocate to death (Saruna begins to feel weak,she closes her eyes and activates her sharingan).
Zargan; i won't allow you to use your sharingan.(he clamps his hands, Saruna stops and falls down with pain)
Saruna: i... have failed to get my mum back and rescue the village. i'm sorry everyone.(she closes her eyes)
(later she has a flashback about when she and her mother were about to leave the village, her father comes to meet them)
Sasuke: Saruna, come here for a moment(she approaches)
Saruna; yes father?
Sasuke; i know how much you want to be strong and powerful as your brother. and you haven't been successful always.(she looks downhearted).
But i know that you can be stronger like your brother. Your power will eventually come as you train hard and always remember, you are an uchiha and my daughter. i will always be proud of you for who you are and what you can be. Your power is from within and not from outside. remember that.
(She becomes encouraged by her father's words.)
Saruna: thank you father, i will do my best and surpass my limit.
(As the flashback ends and she reflects on what her father said)
Saruna:it is true, i can't give up now. for the my sake and the sake of everyone, i can't fail. After all, that is what Naruto-sama has always been telling us to do.
(she struggles and gets up and activates her sharingan, she then yells at zargan who was about to leave)
Saruna: hey, i am not done yet. i have a score to settle with you.
(Zargan turns is back in surprise to find her getting up from the ground)
Zargan: what?!. you survived my genjutsu, no one has ever survived it before.
Saruna: you underestimate me. ( she stares at him as her sharingan evolves to its final basic form. Zargan looks in horror)
Zargan:that's it!!!. just die already( he weaves some signs ) ice element: twin black dragon blizzard.( he releases that attack towards her, Saruna just stands stills then weaves some signs and claps her hands.)
Saruna: particle element;dissmantling atomic wave
( she release her hands and sends the atomic wave and nullifies zargan's attack. it continues to head toward zargan. Upon seeing that attack he ducks., when he gets up and turns around he sees a large hole on the wall.
Zargan:damnit, this girl is strong. Take this!!
( he repeats his attack again and saruna weaves some signs again)
Saruna: particle element; atomic dismantling jutsu.(she releases that attack again and nullifies the attack).
Saruna: my particle element can nullify anything by turning them into an atomic form.(she stops her technique and run towards him)
Zargan;why you?
( he repeats his attack again and launches it at her. Saruna counters with the fireball jutsu, as the smoke was clearing zargan launches his repeated attack again. Seeing that there was no reponse, he smiles thinking he has won,he hears a crack from the ground, all of a sudden saruna comes out of the ground and punches him into the sky and she also jumps to him.)
Zargan:why won't you fall?
Saruna: your arrogance and underestimation of me are your downfall. i may not have the power and skills like my brother or father. but the thing i have which will make me become as powerful as them is my determination. This is for all the trouble you have caused. Lions barrage.
( she hits him hard on the gut and send him straight to the ground with a loud crash.after the fight, saruna lands and goes to break the ice genjutsu on sakura)
Sakura: saruna, what happened?
Saruna:it is ok mum, i came here to save you
Sakura:what about zargan?. i have defeated him.
(sakura looks surprised at her daughter. but smiles and hugs her. just then zargan gets out of the rubble. he is weak and very angry)
Zargan; you think this is over. i am just about to get started
(he attempts to weaves some signs. Suddenly he is pierced with some shurikein from outside. Saruna sees that it is rena and the villagers who have come to help.)
Rena: i did as you told me. but you didn't think i will miss the action will.
Zargan;you little tart.( as he just turned around, sakura quickly reaches him and uses her fist to punch his gut very hard killing him instantly)
Sakura: that was for harming my daughter and everyone.
Epilogue
(The next day the villagers come to see sakura and saruna off.)
Village elder: thanks for everything you have done sakura especially you saruna. you are indeed like your father and mother. Thank you for coming to rescue us.
Saruna:i couldn't have done it without rena. she did great. she has the potential to be a ninja.(people cheer for rena as she comes to saruna)
Rena: thanks for teaching me what it is like to be a ninja. i will train hard and hopefully we will meet again.
Saruna; we will.
(the villagers say their goodbyes as sakura and saruna leave, on the way to the konoha village saruna demonstrates her mastering of her particle element to her mum. Sakura looks please that saruna has finally mastered her technique)
Saruna:mum, thanks for teaching me this technique. this battle has taught me never to give up on myself and to work hard to be as strong as you and dad. never will i doubt myself again.
Sakura:well done saruna.
( she smiles as they reach the konoha village)
THE END
