tell me any mistakes if i have made any and also tell what you think about my poetry its based on common life
'LiFe is NoT worTh Living unLess U have the PaTience to 'Bare iT' @ 'Share iT'; to 'Wear iT' @ 'Tear iT'; to F***King 'Dare iT' @ 'SCare iT'; 'i Swear iT'
'Surely we Go So much Deeper' / ShaLL we Say 'Our BroTher's Keeper' --
'PaTienTs of LiFe'; 'Bare the Banners' / ParenTs have Said; 'Mind your Manners' / 'PleasanT Prize'; 'Minds over MaTTers' / 'PresenT Heads on SiLver PLaTTers'
when we are born we cry; 'BuFFeT to BouDeT; when we die others cry so let us try not to lie
'LiFe is NoT worTh Living unLess U have the PaTience to 'Bare iT' @ 'Share iT'; to 'Wear iT' @ 'Tear iT'; to F***King 'Dare iT' @ 'SCare iT'; 'i Swear iT'
'Surely we Go So much Deeper' / ShaLL we Say 'Our BroTher's Keeper' --
'PaTienTs of LiFe'; 'Bare the Banners' / ParenTs have Said; 'Mind your Manners' / 'PleasanT Prize'; 'Minds over MaTTers' / 'PresenT Heads on SiLver PLaTTers'
when we are born we cry; 'BuFFeT to BouDeT; when we die others cry so let us try not to lie
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