Poetry(silver bed)

[amazing sasuke]

here is a short poem.

looking like a silver bed;
and nestled in it,a baby as well;
the occupant was moving on its eight legs;
what had caught my attention was a spiders web!

what do u think guys?plz rate!

 

[Eano]

not bad at all...

 

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

Its nice from one poet to another +Rep

 

[Yuka]

it was a nice poem but a tad short though overall you did an excellent job writing it

 

[Awkward Linguist]

Nice.

I said Nice.

oh, it sounds...Nice

Did i forget to say it looks Nice.

Just to make sure i'll say it 1 more time...Nice

+rep

Spoiler

Nice

 

[amazing sasuke]

it was a nice poem but a tad short though overall you did an excellent job writing it

thnx

 

[amazing sasuke]

Nice.

I said Nice.

oh, it sounds...Nice

Did i forget to say it looks Nice.

Just to make sure i'll say it 1 more time...Nice

+rep

Spoiler

Nice

thank u