POETRY by LADY SUZIE !

[Shinjitsu]

Really lost on where to be posting this.. was PRETTY sure there was a poetry forum section once upon a time but until someone redirects me i shall post here

right from now on as someone is too shy to do so, i'll be posting all of Lady Suzie's poetry on the forum as i feel alot of her doodles are well worth people taking note & reading! so here goes.....



Remplissez mon coeur de votre amour

It's me, I'm here,
A lonely tear,
Running down my cheek,
So sleek,
It makes me think,
ABout you and me,
What are we?

I'm always here,
Your worth more to me than a crystal,
I wish you can return it,
My love for yours,

"Remplissez mon coeur de votre amour"

"Love you with all my heart"


Created/Written by Lady Suzie
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[Lady Suzie]

Like anyone cares

 

[Shunsui]

pretty good !

 

[MaKo]

I do! ;( They are all good!

 

[Pain..]

Like anyone cares

I do care <.< pretty good !!

 

[Flaw]

Like anyone cares

Exactly.

 

[Lady Suzie]

*frowns*errrr...... Well thanks to those who do care, I appreciate your comments thanks

 

[Shinjitsu]

F-law why do you have to be such a bell with your comments ?? dont care.. then dont read & dont comment -_-

 

[Flaw]

F-law why do you have to be such a bell with your comments ?? dont care.. then dont read & dont comment -_-

D:

 

[Rei]

Easy F-law.

@Lady Suzie:

"Your worth more to me than a crystal"
I don't get this sentence. You say crystal just cause it is a precious material or is there a symbolism behind it?

 

[Flaw]

Easy F-law.

@Lady Suzie:

"Your worth more to me than a crystal"
I don't get this sentence. You say crystal just cause it is a precious material or is there a symbolism behind it?

This should help o.o

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[Lady Suzie]

Easy F-law.

@Lady Suzie:

"Your worth more to me than a crystal"
I don't get this sentence. You say crystal just cause it is a precious material or is there a symbolism behind it?

There is a reason why I put "crystal", its a metaphor, as crystal is precious and delicate, and can easily be shattered... Like a relationship for example...
Not really one of my best poems I must admit, I blame my Bf who thinks my poetry should be noticed...

 

[Shinjitsu]

your poetry should be noticed sweets