poem rate

[narutorikudoumode]

constipated
i try to make you leave but you decided to stay, though i caused this pain i blame you for yesterday
as i wait i grow weary,as i ponder it becomes clearly that i am constipated


rate my first poem this is a serious poem

 

[KyoshiroSenju]

Wtf nice what ever is called...

 

[MRMichael]

You clearly stole this from Elvis XD

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

My rating depends on whether constipation is a metaphor.

 

[narutorikudoumode]

You clearly stole this from Elvis XD

who is elvis

 

[narutorikudoumode]

My rating depends on whether constipation is a metaphor.

maybe maybe not

 

[Punk Hazard]

i give it a two

 

[narutorikudoumode]

i give it a two

thanks for your honest opinion

 

[markdabomb22]

My rating depends on whether constipation is a metaphor.

You clearly stole this from Elvis XD

lol at these xd

OT:I did not find this poem appealing so 2/5 stars

 

[MRMichael]

My dreary eyes want to lay and rest but my stiffy rises and pokes its head
around the rim i must not tread as i wipe my eyes and aim my second head
the stream it flows it feels good to release as i turn away damn i forgot to put down the toilet seat ):

 

[MRMichael]

who is elvis

Elvis Presley

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[Scooby Doo]

LOL funny, but only if its meant literally