[Other] Pity is a warm gun

[NaNaNaaaaa]

I' m sorry, it really did suck, I could't stand looking at it

Look at my sad face instead

 

[ObitoGokuKakashi]

The End didn't rime for me well but the rest is good. Keep it up. : 3

 

[TonyDawn1379]

Sux I dun wanna ever read dis madafakin bolchet agen

 

[Callypigia]

Lennon said "Happiness is a warm gun."

 

[NaNaNaaaaa]

The End didn't rime for me well but the rest is good. Keep it up. : 3

Really? I write off the cuff, it only took three minutes, honestly I'm not happy with it myself, it's one of my worst, I usually write cryptic on pure emotion, this was thought out a bit, which never goes well...hmmm, what to do with failures...learn from them I guess...

@Diclonius Yea, I actually got the idea from a U2 song

I shouldn't post my poems that suck, but at least that way I learn what I can and cannot do.