NaNaNaaaaa
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I' m sorry, it really did suck, I could't stand looking at it
Look at my sad face instead
Look at my sad face instead
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[Other] Pity is a warm gun
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ObitoGokuKakashi
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The End didn't rime for me well but the rest is good. Keep it up. : 3
TonyDawn1379
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Sux I dun wanna ever read dis madafakin bolchet agen
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Lennon said "Happiness is a warm gun." 
NaNaNaaaaa
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Really? I write off the cuff, it only took three minutes, honestly I'm not happy with it myself, it's one of my worst, I usually write cryptic on pure emotion, this was thought out a bit, which never goes well...hmmm, what to do with failures...learn from them I guess...
@Diclonius Yea, I actually got the idea from a U2 song
I shouldn't post my poems that suck, but at least that way I learn what I can and cannot do.