Pitiful

[MentalJerk]

Wandering in a black world
Never knowing a salvation
Dwell in the darkness
Eaten by discare
Tears overflow
Lost its happiness
A black stone
Seeks a route for freedom
No one to ask
Surpression within
A tired Soul
Seeks death
​

My thoughts are hilarious sometimes o_o and yes, it's a poem o_o

you think it's a fail? well, I don't blame you, I did it in 30 seconds xD

 

[-~Krissy~-]

And I thought I was bad. :|

Don't you mean "despair" instead of discare?

 

[Naruto]

i am scared.

 

[MentalJerk]

And I thought I was bad. :|

Don't you mean "despair" instead of discare?

If they have the same meaning then fine :|

i am scared.

Is it really that scary? o_o

 

[Lara]

Creepy >.>

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

this reminds me of a poem given to me...
only difference is, yours is the total opposite... (-__-"

 

[MentalJerk]

this reminds me of a poem given to me...
only difference is, yours is the total opposite... (-__-"

That was a pitiful post

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

That was a pitiful post

didn't mean it to... O_O it just reminded me in the opposite way...

 

[Flaw]

Wandering in a black world
Never knowing a salvation
Dwell in the darkness
Eaten by discare
Tears overflow
Lost its happiness
A black stone
Seeks a route for freedom
No one to ask
Surpression within
A tired Soul
Seeks death
​

My thoughts are hilarious sometimes o_o and yes, it's a poem o_o

you think it's a fail? well, I don't blame you, I did it in 30 seconds xD

Oh my gewdness , Khaled , you are born to be a poet O.O
really, i don't see how people can see that shit in their minds :|
i mean all the tears, disCare(>_>) and Darkness

 

[Flaw]

didn't mean it to... O_O it just reminded me in the opposite way...

find out that neither khaled nor anyone here gives a shit :3

 

[MentalJerk]

Oh my gewdness , Khaled , you are born to be a poet O.O
really, i don't see how people can see that shit in their minds :|
i mean all the tears, disCare(>_>) and Darkness

find out that neither khaled nor anyone here gives a shit :3

Find out that I don't give a shit about you too

 

[Flaw]

Find out that I don't give a shit about you too

either*
and why, you are very kind today

 

[MentalJerk]

either*
and why, you are very kind today

yeha

I are give you smoe wrods to fx fr me uisng porper garmar

Creepy >.>

Creepy is what we aim for

 

[Kazamori]

Cool !!! =O

>___< pfft... I can't thank you XD

 

[Flaw]

yeha

I are give you smoe wrods to fx fr me uisng porper garmar

doode J Cn'at b3live yu r ueseing dis garmar az whale ((((

 

[MentalJerk]

doode J Cn'at b3live yu r ueseing dis garmar az whale ((((

Oh dear, and I thought you could be useful in something ._.

 

[Flaw]

Oh dear, and I thought you could be useful in something ._.

End wut uld dat eb ?

 

[MentalJerk]

End wut uld dat eb ?

you're not only pitiful, you're hopeless too ._.

 

[Flaw]

you're not only pitiful, you're hopeless too ._.

as solacing as dragging me into your category may seem , please don't try to compare me to the likes of you, K

 

[Rei]

stop arguing