[Photoshop] [Photoshop] Crysis Sig

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CnC is much appreciated

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looks nice,,,, bro,,, but not good as your previous one
 

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Meh, I'll keep this CnC short. The render is too far to the right, the render's too small, it should've been bigger. The tag itself is more monotone, you should've added some yellow effects. Your flow doesn't match the flow of the render x). It looks pretty flat because everything looks so sharpened. The lens flare on his eyes was a cool idea to be honest, I like that bit. And the yellow light on screen would have looked nice if there was other yellow in the tag so it's not just awkwardly sticking out xD.
 

Cascade

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so close yet so far...
some nice effects on lenses etc, but focal needs work, render placement needs to attract the focal, not sit the right. the text in the middle was also a bad move and the colours didnt really work (but text takes a long time to get used to)
but your starting to get your own style which is pretty cool, so keep trying and getting that render in the focal point whilst making everything fit the scene / work, flow and blend nicely together.

(dodging and burning will get you pretty far but you also have to adjust your effect placement there too
 

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First thing I noticed was the orange light on his hand. That was such a wrong move xD
 

Aominecchi

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It looks cool but i don't see the point of that yellow dot
 

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I like the color behind it
 
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