Meh, I'll keep this CnC short. The render is too far to the right, the render's too small, it should've been bigger. The tag itself is more monotone, you should've added some yellow effects. Your flow doesn't match the flow of the render x). It looks pretty flat because everything looks so sharpened. The lens flare on his eyes was a cool idea to be honest, I like that bit. And the yellow light on screen would have looked nice if there was other yellow in the tag so it's not just awkwardly sticking out xD.