Perhaps...just one more step.

[Adachi]

I'm at the end of my line.
The cliff is ahead of me. Should I take the plunge?

It's not the burdens that I carry that me towards such an end.
Instead, it's those...despicable ones that push me forward.

Why the hell do you seek power? Why THE HELL do you seek reputation?
Fools. Pitiful fools. What IF you conquer everything? What the hell do you get from it? You step on the heads of those close to you just to take one more step up.
How pitiful.
How...very pitiful.
Why must you add to such a cycle? Such a cycle of lying, cheating, killing...does it make you any happier to be part of such a thing?

And you.
You that came in so innocent. I sigh in deep pity for you.
Tricking those that were close to you in order to pull yourself up...you might be a tad higher than those that were like you.
But to think that you even sniped one upon my path.
How despicable. Even now, rage burns against you.

And you.
How could you let yourself be handled in such a way? Letting yourself be tied upon a rope and dragged along like some puppet.
Those valuable things besides you. How could you let them be stolen so easily?

And you.
I thought you weren't like all the others.
But I was wrong.

In the end...it's just power and reputation, no?
But, let me remind you.
It's a two-way path.
Face the truth or turn your face away from it.

Come, and walk with me...
Or push me off the cliff.

 

[Hot.Tendo]

you made this yourself?
it's dark...

U_U ...

You must be registered for see links

it's a surprise...

 

[Adachi]

And it is very much true.
My writing is always dark, if you haven't noticed that by now...
What the hell is that? Soup? o_o

 

[YowYan]

I'm at the end of my line.
The cliff is ahead of me. Should I take the plunge?

It's not the burdens that I carry that me towards such an end.
Instead, it's those...despicable ones that push me forward.

Why the hell do you seek power? Why THE HELL do you seek reputation?
Fools. Pitiful fools. What IF you conquer everything? What the hell do you get from it? You step on the heads of those close to you just to take one more step up.
How pitiful.
How...very pitiful.
Why must you add to such a cycle? Such a cycle of lying, cheating, killing...does it make you any happier to be part of such a thing?

And you.
You that came in so innocent. I sigh in deep pity for you.
Tricking those that were close to you in order to pull yourself up...you might be a tad higher than those that were like you.
But to think that you even sniped one upon my path.
How despicable. Even now, rage burns against you.

And you.
How could you let yourself be handled in such a way? Letting yourself be tied upon a rope and dragged along like some puppet.
Those valuable things besides you. How could you let them be stolen so easily?

And you.
I thought you weren't like all the others.
But I was wrong.

In the end...it's just power and reputation, no?
But, let me remind you.
It's a two-way path.
Face the truth or turn your face away from it.

Come, and walk with me...
Or push me off the cliff.

Stop watching Fullmetal Alchemist xD

 

[Hinato]

Stop watching Fullmetal Alchemist xD

but i think what Tenzo wrote is the truth

 

[Hot.Tendo]

And it is very much true.
My writing is always dark, if you haven't noticed that by now...
What the hell is that? Soup? o_o

you haven't heard of "the soup"? xD

here's another surprise

You must be registered for see links

 

[Adachi]

No, I haven't.
I like Fullmetal Alchemist, however, it has absolutely nothing to do with it. It's my own writing.

 

[Taka]

I'm still trying to put all these pieces together to discover what you're trying to say... I want to know your dark road... :|

 

[Enemy]

I'm still trying to put all these pieces together to discover what you're trying to say... I want to know your dark road... :|

In my opinion he's trying to say that people care about public opinion too much and forget who they really are that way. :|

 

[Karmolo]

I like what you've written

 

[Adachi]

Actually, slightly.
I label three people I am rather disappointed at up there.
This is called an Allegory. Look up the definition if needed.
Here, allow me to post my own thoughts upon this.

Spoiler

There are two roads. One lead to the dark. One lead to the light.
One would obviously take the light, as it is comforting, however, it blinds one. And those who take it take a straight path, but can never learn how to look right or left.
Those who realize the decision that they are going through normally take the dark road unless pushed by external pressure. These realize truth. They are alone in the truth. They know what's left and right...as they wish that they could have been blind...they are unable to tear away from the truth at the same time...

That is my analogy of the walk one takes when they are young. Either be just "any other person in the world", or take the other path. It's up to you. Trying to fit into society isn't going to help as what most people is trying to do.

That is one reason why NB is dying. And the world, to mention, too.

And the cliff represents the end of my path.
I might be done.

 

[Enemy]

Tenzo, you are 100 times more philosophical than I could possibly imagine :|

Go teach people in some university.

But what if there is a deep ocean at the bottom of that cliff, and you survive?

 

[Karmolo]

You are right on the world is dying

 

[Enemy]

You are right on the world is dying

Not the world. Just the human rase

 

[Taka]

Or what if you find a friend waiting to catch you?

 

[Adachi]

There is nothing but the abyss below.
I don't fear Death itself. In fact, I welcome it with open arms.
It's the pain that comes with it that I might fear.
So, let it come, no?

 

[Enemy]

There is nothing but the abyss below.
I don't fear Death itself. In fact, I welcome it with open arms.
It's the pain that comes with it that I might fear.
So, let it come, no?

You can't know what's down there :|
But I agree with this.

 

[Karmolo]

Not the world. Just the human rase

I mean the whole solar system will go under that what i heared.
But human-rase will go under first before it happens.

 

[NightUchigya]

Spoiler

I'm at the end of my line.
The cliff is ahead of me. Should I take the plunge?

It's not the burdens that I carry that me towards such an end.
Instead, it's those...despicable ones that push me forward.

Why the hell do you seek power? Why THE HELL do you seek reputation?
Fools. Pitiful fools. What IF you conquer everything? What the hell do you get from it? You step on the heads of those close to you just to take one more step up.
How pitiful.
How...very pitiful.
Why must you add to such a cycle? Such a cycle of lying, cheating, killing...does it make you any happier to be part of such a thing?

And you.
You that came in so innocent. I sigh in deep pity for you.
Tricking those that were close to you in order to pull yourself up...you might be a tad higher than those that were like you.
But to think that you even sniped one upon my path.
How despicable. Even now, rage burns against you.

And you.
How could you let yourself be handled in such a way? Letting yourself be tied upon a rope and dragged along like some puppet.
Those valuable things besides you. How could you let them be stolen so easily?

And you.
I thought you weren't like all the others.
But I was wrong.

In the end...it's just power and reputation, no?
But, let me remind you.
It's a two-way path.
Face the truth or turn your face away from it.

Come, and walk with me...
Or push me off the cliff.

This is a very interesting. I've read stuff like this on other forums, but this one is a little bit darker than the others.

 

[Adachi]

Yes, the world will go down and I'll be the one laughing when it does so. In fact, I'll be pitying those who scream in horror...they lived rather dreadful and meaningful lives, did they not?
Do I know what's down there?
If I expect Death, then it shall come.
There is an ending to everything.